The Shawshank Redemption
Overview

Unique Selling Point
AI Verdict & Suggestions
This rating is from a single AI engine based on structure, character, tone, and emotional engagement.
Highly Recommend
Story Facts
Genres: Drama, Crime, Thriller, Prison, Escape
Setting: Not specified, Not specified
Themes: Injustice and corruption, Hope and redemption, Survival and adaptation, Friendship and camaraderie, Individuality and self-expression
Conflict & Stakes: Not specified
Mood: Not specified
Script Level Analysis
This section delivers a top-level assessment of the screenplay’s strengths and weaknesses — covering overall quality (P/C/R/HR), character development, emotional impact, thematic depth, narrative inconsistencies, and the story’s core philosophical conflict. It helps identify what’s resonating, what needs refinement, and how the script aligns with professional standards.
Screenplay Insights
Story Critique
Characters
Emotional Analysis
Goals and Philosophical Conflict
Logic & Inconsistencies
Scene Analysis
All of your scenes analyzed individually and compared, so you can zero in on what to improve.
Other Analyses
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Unique Voice
Writer's Craft
Memorable Lines
World Building
Unique Voice
Writer's Craft
Memorable Lines
World Building
Highly Recommend
Executive Summary
The Shawshank Redemption is an exceptional screenplay with compelling character arcs, powerful themes, masterful pacing, vivid imagery, and memorable dialogue. Its exploration of hope, freedom, and redemption against the backdrop of prison life creates a deeply moving and unforgettable story. While some supporting characters could benefit from further development, the screenplay's overall strengths far outweigh any minor shortcomings.
- Compelling Character Arcs: The screenplay excels in developing multi-dimensional characters, particularly Andy and Red, whose journeys of hope, resilience, and redemption resonate deeply with the audience. high
- Powerful Themes: The exploration of themes like hope, freedom, institutionalization, and the human spirit's endurance amidst adversity adds profound depth and meaning to the narrative. high
- Masterful Pacing: The screenplay expertly balances moments of quiet introspection with scenes of intense drama, creating a captivating rhythm that keeps the audience engaged from beginning to end. high ( Scene 1 Scene 18 Scene 27 Scene 29 Scene 33 )
- Vivid Imagery and Symbolism: The use of vivid imagery and symbolism, such as Andy's rock hammer and the posters of female icons, enhances the storytelling and adds layers of interpretation. medium ( Scene 1 Scene 9 Scene 18 Scene 27 )
- Dialogue: The dialogue is sharp, memorable, and authentic, effectively conveying the characters' personalities, emotions, and the harsh realities of prison life. medium ( Scene 3 Scene 10 Scene 18 Scene 27 )
- Supporting Character Development: While the main characters are exceptionally well-developed, some supporting characters could benefit from further exploration and depth to enhance their impact on the story. low
- The screenplay's ending is both hopeful and ambiguous, leaving the audience to ponder the characters' futures and the true meaning of freedom. high
- The use of Red's narration provides insightful commentary on the events and characters, while also serving as a powerful tool for reflecting on the themes of the story. medium
Screenplay Insights:
Characters: 8.4, The screenplay exhibits a solid foundation in character development, with nuanced and relatable characters driving the narrative. However, there are opportunities to enhance the depth and complexity of certain characters, particularly expanding their motivations and exploring their transformation throughout the story. See More
Premise: 8.6, The screenplay presents a compelling premise with a unique and thought-provoking twist on the classic prison drama genre. It effectively establishes a clear and engaging narrative foundation that has the potential to captivate the audience. However, some elements of the premise could be further refined to enhance its overall impact and long-term audience interest. See More
Structure: 8.1, The screenplay's structure is well-crafted, effectively unfolding the narrative through a clear and engaging plot. However, some areas could benefit from refinement to enhance the pacing and emotional impact. See More
Theme: 9.0, The screenplay effectively conveys its themes and messages through a compelling narrative, well-developed characters, and powerful imagery. The themes of hope, redemption, and the resilience of the human spirit are explored with depth and clarity, leaving a lasting impact on the audience. See More
Visual Impact: , This screenplay presents a visually rich and engaging story with strong character arcs and impactful themes. Its evocative descriptions effectively transport readers into the harsh reality of prison life while capturing the resilience and hope of its characters. See More
Emotional Impact: 8.4, The screenplay effectively captivates the audience emotionally, showcasing a range of human experiences with depth and authenticity. The exceptional performances, compelling narratives, and skillful storytelling drive strong emotional connections and leave a lasting impact. See More
Conflict: 8.5, The screenplay effectively utilizes conflict and stakes to craft a gripping narrative. The stark contrast between Andy's resilience and the prison's oppressive environment fuels the conflict, while the high stakes of wrongful imprisonment create a compelling emotional core. However, there are opportunities to enhance the stakes and escalate the conflict to generate even greater tension and audience engagement. See More
Originality: 7.9, The Shawshank screenplay displays notable originality and creativity in its narrative execution and character development. Its portrayal of hope, resilience, and redemption is enhanced by the unique setting and the complex journey of its protagonist, fostering a deep connection with the audience. See More
Screenplay Story Analysis
Note: This is the overall critique. For scene by scene critique click here
Summaries
- The scene starts with a couple having rough sex on a cabin, soon showing Andy, who is drunk and armed with a revolver, lurking outside. It then shifts to a courtroom where Andy Dufresne is on trial for the murder of his wife and her lover.
- Andy Dufresne is on trial for the murder of his wife and her lover.
- Andy Dufresne arrives at Shawshank prison.
- Andy Dufresne is processed at Shawshank prison and Red remembers his own first night there.
- Andy Dufresne is introduced to the brutality of prison life on his first night in Shawshank Prison.
- Andy must adjust to prison life as he is introduced to the brutal realities of the place. He makes some acquaintances, and gets in some trouble.
- Red and Andy conduct a business transaction where Andy purchases a rock-hammer from Red. Red warns Andy of the dangers of having such an object in prison, but Andy still buys it. Red realizes Andy is adapting quickly to prison life and eventually, we see Andy's determination pay off when he manages to smuggle the rock-hammer into the prison.
- Andy faces his first violent encounter in prison with the Sisters, and is brutally beaten and raped. He adapts to the harsh realities of prison life and starts smuggling contraband, which eventually leads him to acquiring a rock hammer. In a flashback montage, we see Andy fight to maintain his dignity, while being subjected to abuse and violence.
- Andy confronts Hadley about his inheritance and suggests a way for him to avoid taxes, sparking Hadley's interest in Andy's financial knowledge.
- Andy adapts to prison life, makes some acquaintances, and conducts a business transaction with Red. He faces his first violent encounter with the Sisters and starts smuggling contraband. He also confronts Hadley about his inheritance and suggests a way for him to avoid taxes.
- Andy is violently beaten and raped by the Sisters, leading him to adapt to prison life and smuggle contraband.
- Andy adapts to prison life, makes acquaintances and smuggles contraband. Norton tosses cells and finds contraband in Andy's cell. Norton questions Andy's financial knowledge and introduces himself as a corrupt authority figure.
- Andy impresses Hadley and Norton with his financial knowledge, leads to him being assigned to work with Brooks in the library, and helps inmate Dekins set up a trust fund for his kids.
- Andy, with the help of Red and Brooks, does tax returns for the guards and library book fund remains a pipe-dream. Brooks later goes berserk and nearly stabs Heywood
- Brooks is released from prison and struggles to adapt to life outside of prison, ultimately leading to his suicide.
- Brooks commits suicide after being released from prison, while Andy and the others mourn his loss and bury his pet crow, Jake.
- Andy receives a long-awaited donation for the library and broadcasts beautiful music throughout the prison.
- Andy receives a gift for Red to mark his ten years in prison, while Red faces his parole hearing and is rejected. The two friends reminisce and look forward to the future, with Andy's lobbying efforts beginning to pay off.
- Andy transforms a broom closet into the best prison library in New England, while Norton institutes the corrupt 'Inside-Out' program and profits off of it.
- Andy helps Norton launder his dirty money while Red looks on. They discuss Norton's shady deals and the risks involved. Meanwhile, a new inmate, Tommy Williams, arrives at the prison.
- Tommy arrives at Shawshank, meets the old-timers, works in the wood shop, tells jokes in the mess hall, worries about his family. Andy takes to him and helps him learn how to read.
- Tommy fails his course exam and gets frustrated with studying. Andy helps him out with his studies and works to keep himself busy while in prison. Tommy later reveals to Andy and Red that he was cellmates with a prisoner named Elmo Blatch who he believes was responsible for the murder Andy was imprisoned for.
- Tommy reveals to Andy and Red that he was cellmates with a prisoner named Elmo Blatch who he believes was responsible for the murder Andy was imprisoned for.
- Tommy Williams arrives at Shawshank and is told by Warden Norton that he needs his help to ensure his testimony against Andy in court is the truth. Norton then has Tommy killed, in a brutal scene witnessed by many inmates.
- Andy shares his dream of living in a little place in Mexico with no memory with Red. Later, Red and the other inmates worry about Andy's state of mind when he requests a length of rope. Andy shines Norton's shoes.
- Norton demands Andy's whereabouts, as it is discovered that he has disappeared from prison. Red is questioned, but denies knowing anything.
- Andy escapes from Shawshank Prison with the help of his rock-hammer. The guards send Rory Tremont into the disgusting tunnel in an attempt to catch him. Red finds it all hilarious.
- Andy escapes from Shawshank with the help of his rock-hammer and a length of rope.
- Andy finally escapes from Shawshank Prison and then pulls off an elaborate scheme to steal hundreds of thousands of dollars from Warden Norton before disappearing forever.
- Red reflects on his memories of Andy Dufresne and his journey from prison to freedom. In the end, Red is up for a parole hearing after serving 40 years in prison.
- Red is released on parole and struggles to adjust to life outside of prison. He experiences anxiety and reflects on the changes in society since his incarceration.
- Red reflects on his fears and struggles to adjust to life outside of prison after being released on parole, but his journey takes a turn when he receives a letter from Andy, offering him hope and a chance for redemption.
- Red reflects on his struggles to adjust to life outside of prison, but receives a letter from Andy, offering him hope and a chance for redemption.
Red - Score: 84/100
Character Analysis Overview
Andy - Score: 93/100
Role
Protagonist
Character Analysis Overview
Norton - Score: 87/100
Character Analysis Overview
Tommy - Score: 67/100
Role
Supporting Character
Character Analysis Overview
Theme | Theme Details | Theme Explanation |
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Injustice and corruption | The trial of Andy for the murder of his wife and her lover is portrayed as rigged. The guards and warden of Shawshank Prison are shown to be corrupt and brutal, exploiting the prisoners' labor and suppressing any opposition. The real culprit is revealed but ignored by those in power, leading to the demise of innocent individuals. | This theme explores the unfairness and dishonesty in the justice system and the abuse of power by those in authority. It highlights how corruption can lead to wrongful convictions and the suffering of innocent people. |
Hope and redemption | Andy's friendship with Red and his determination to maintain his humanity in prison uplift both himself and his fellow inmates, bringing a sense of hope amid their bleak lives. Andy's escape and his gift of the letter to Red offer the possibility of redemption and a better future for those who have been imprisoned. | This theme represents the resilience of the human spirit and the power of hope in the face of adversity. It shows how even in the darkest of places, people can find ways to improve their lives and look forward to a better future. |
Survival and adaptation | Andy, Red, and other prisoners are forced to adapt to the harsh realities of prison life, using their skills and ingenuity to survive. Brooks, however, struggles to adjust to the free world after being released from prison and eventually takes his life, showing the difficulty of adapting to life outside of prison after spending a significant amount of time incarcerated. | This theme explores the challenges of survival and adaptability when faced with adverse circumstances. It raises questions about the long-term effects of incarceration and the difficulty of adjusting to the outside world after being imprisoned for a long time. |
Friendship and camaraderie | The relationships between Andy and Red, as well as other prisoners, serve as a representation of the vital role friendship and camaraderie play in making life bearable. Their bonds are strengthened through shared experiences and support. | This theme highlights the importance of friendship and social bonds in the context of imprisonment and provides an insight into the way that relationships can sustain people and offer comfort in times of hardship. |
Individuality and self-expression | Andy's love of books, music, and art in prison allows him to channel his personal eccentricities and maintain his sense of individuality. Red's internal monologue reflects a shift from resisting change to embracing it, highlighting the power of self-expression in achieving individual growth and happiness. | This theme deals with the idea of individuality and self-expression in challenging circumstances, emphasizing that personal expression can help maintain humanity and foster growth, even in restrictive environments. |
Screenwriting Resources on Themes
Articles
Site | Description |
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Studio Binder | Movie Themes: Examples of Common Themes for Screenwriters |
Coverfly | Improving your Screenplay's theme |
John August | Writing from Theme |
YouTube Videos
Title | Description |
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Story, Plot, Genre, Theme - Screenwriting Basics | Screenwriting basics - beginner video |
What is theme | Discussion on ways to layer theme into a screenplay. |
Thematic Mistakes You're Making in Your Script | Common Theme mistakes and Philosophical Conflicts |
Story Content | Character Development | Scene Elements | Audience Engagement | ||||||||||
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Click for Full Analysis | Tone | Overall | Concept | Plot | Characters | Character Changes | Conflict | High stakes | Story forward | Emotional Impact | Dialogue | ||
1 - The Cabin and the Courtroom | "Intense" | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | ||
2 - Murder Trial | "Tense" | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 10 | 8 | 9 | 7 | ||
3 - Arrival at Shawshank | "dark" | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | ||
4 - Welcome to Shawshank | "dark" | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 10 | 9 | 6 | 9 | 7 | ||
5 - First Night in Shawshank Prison | "Grim" | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | ||
6 - Heywood | "Gritty" | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | ||
7 - The Exchange | "Tense" | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 6 | 7 | ||
8 - Andy's Brutal Introduction to Prison Life | "Dark" | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 10 | 10 | 9 | 10 | 7 | ||
9 - Hadley Intimidates Andy | "Dark" | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | ||
10 - Andy's Determination | "Tense" | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | ||
11 - First Violent Encounter | "dark" | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 10 | 10 | 9 | 10 | 7 | ||
12 - Contraband and Welcome Back | "Intense" | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 6 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | ||
13 - Andy's Financial Savvy | "serious" | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 5 | 4 | 8 | 6 | 8 | ||
14 - Andy's Financial Planning | "Gloomy" | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 7 | ||
15 - Brooks' Release | "Dramatic" | 9 | 8 | 9 | 10 | 10 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 10 | 8 | ||
16 - Brooks' Suicide | "sad" | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 6 | ||
17 - The Library Comes Alive | "Hopeful" | 10 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 6 | 4 | 8 | 10 | 8 | ||
18 - Hope Prevails | "Hopeful" | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 4 | 5 | 8 | 8 | 8 | ||
19 - Library Transformation and Corruption | "Bitter" | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 6 | 6 | 7 | 9 | 6 | 8 | ||
20 - Money and Power | "tense" | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 6 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | ||
21 - Tommy starts a new chapter | "Hopeful" | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 3 | 2 | 7 | 7 | 8 | ||
22 - Tommy's Exam | "Somber" | 7 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 6 | 5 | 7 | 7 | 6 | ||
23 - Blatch | "Tense" | 9 | 9 | 10 | 8 | 8 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | ||
24 - Tommy's Death | "Tense" | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 10 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 7 | ||
25 - Andy's Dream for a Normal Life is Reaffirmed | "Somber" | 9 | 8 | 9 | 10 | 5 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | ||
26 - The Disappearance | "Tense" | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 2 | 9 | 9 | 10 | 6 | 6 | ||
27 - The Escape | "tense" | 9 | 9 | 10 | 8 | 5 | 8 | 10 | 10 | 7 | 6 | ||
28 - The Escape | "Tense" | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 11 | 9 | 8 | 6 | ||
29 - Escape from Shawshank | "tense" | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 5 | 9 | 10 | 9 | 7 | 6 | ||
30 - Red's Reflection and Freedom | "Bittersweet" | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 5 | 5 | 7 | 9 | 7 | ||
31 - Red's Release | "Reflective" | 9 | 8 | 8 | 10 | 8 | 4 | 3 | 6 | 8 | 9 | ||
32 - Red's Redemption | "Reflective" | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 6 | 5 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 6 | ||
33 - Red's Redemption | "Reflective" | 8 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 3 | 2 | 6 | 8 | 7 |
Summary of Scene Level Analysis
Here are some things that came out of the scene level analysis.
This is a summary of the strengths, weaknesses, and suggestions found in each scene. Some things might appear in both strengths and weaknesses based on the variety of your scenes.
For summary of each criteria click in the top row on the criteria.
Scene Strengths
- Intense introduction to one of the main characters, strong visuals, and dialogue.
- Establishes the brutality of prison life and the power dynamics within the prison.
- Intense dialogue, showcasing Andy's intellect and cunning.
- Powerful scene that builds tension, reveals new information, and creates a sense of hope for redemption for some characters.
- The tension builds to an exciting climax as multiple storylines intersect.
Scene Weaknesses
- Lacks significant character development.
- The scene is relatively slow-paced and does not advance the plot significantly.
- Heavy violence depicted in the scene.
- Lacks significant conflict or high stakes.
- The scene may drag on too long, and there is a lack of significant plot developments.
Suggestions
- Focus on deeper character development, exploring character motivations and relationships.
- Work on tightening the pacing of slower scenes and finding ways to advance the plot more effectively.
- Consider the impact and necessity of depicting heavy violence and whether it is necessary for the story.
- Increase conflict and raise stakes in key scenes to create more tension and engagement.
- Edit scenes for length and ensure that they are essential to advancing the plot or developing characters.
Scene 1 - The Cabin and the Courtroom
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 2 - Murder Trial
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 3 - Arrival at Shawshank
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 4 - Welcome to Shawshank
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 5 - First Night in Shawshank Prison
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 6 - Heywood
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 7 - The Exchange
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 8 - Andy's Brutal Introduction to Prison Life
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 9 - Hadley Intimidates Andy
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 10 - Andy's Determination
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 11 - First Violent Encounter
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 12 - Contraband and Welcome Back
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 13 - Andy's Financial Savvy
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 14 - Andy's Financial Planning
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 15 - Brooks' Release
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 16 - Brooks' Suicide
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 17 - The Library Comes Alive
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 18 - Hope Prevails
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 19 - Library Transformation and Corruption
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 20 - Money and Power
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 21 - Tommy starts a new chapter
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 22 - Tommy's Exam
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 23 - Blatch
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 24 - Tommy's Death
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 25 - Andy's Dream for a Normal Life is Reaffirmed
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 26 - The Disappearance
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 27 - The Escape
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 28 - The Escape
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 29 - Escape from Shawshank
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 30 - Red's Reflection and Freedom
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 31 - Red's Release
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 32 - Red's Redemption
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 33 - Red's Redemption
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene by Scene Emotions