A Case of Blindness

A blind, prejudiced grandfather finds redemption through an unlikely friendship with a young woman who challenges his deeply rooted biases.

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Unique Selling Point

The screenplay for 'A Case of Blindness' stands out for its unique perspective and thoughtful exploration of themes. By centering the narrative around a blind, prejudiced character and his gradual transformation, the story offers a fresh and compelling take on the classic coming-of-age genre. The complex, multifaceted characters and the screenplay's ability to balance serious themes with moments of humor and warmth make it a compelling and engaging read that will resonate with a wide audience.

AI Verdict & Suggestions

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Gemini
 Recommend
GPT4
 Recommend
Claude
 Recommend
Story Facts

Genres: Drama, Family, Literary

Setting: Contemporary, Walker house and local park in a suburban neighborhood

Themes: Overcoming Prejudice, Intergenerational Understanding, The Power of Connection, Community and Acceptance

Conflict & Stakes: The primary conflict revolves around Grandpa Walker's prejudiced views and his struggle to accept his granddaughter's identity, with the stakes being familial relationships and personal growth.

Mood: Warm and uplifting with moments of tension and introspection.

Standout Features:

  • Unique Hook: The central relationship between a blind grandfather and his granddaughter who helps him confront his prejudices.
  • Character Development: Grandpa's transformation from a prejudiced figure to someone who begins to understand and accept diversity.
  • Literary Connection: The use of literature, particularly 'To Kill a Mockingbird,' as a tool for connection and understanding.

Comparable Scripts: The Blind Side, Gran Torino, A Man Called Ove, To Kill a Mockingbird (film adaptation), The Help, The Pursuit of Happyness, This Is Us (TV series), The Farewell, Little Miss Sunshine

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