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Scene Map 60
# PG SLUGLINE
1 1
INT FREDDIE’S GEORGIAN MANSION (GARDEN LODGE)/ LONDON
2 3
INT BBC TV STUDIO DAY
3 7
INT BRIAN MAY’S RECORDING STUDIO (2016) NIGHT
4 11
INT HALLS/ EALING ART SCHOOL DAY
5 16
INT FREDDIE’S BEDROOM/ BULSARA FAMILY HOME DAY
6 18
INT BRIAN MAY’S RECORDING STUDIO (2016) NIGHT
7 20
INT “SMILE” GIG 3 NIGHT
8 21
INT BIBA CLOTHING BOUTIQUE DAY
9 23
EXT KENSINGTON MARKET DAY
10 25
INT FREDDIE’S FIRST FLAT/ 2 VICTORIA RD/ LONDON DAY
11 28
EXT LONDON STREETS/ FREDDIE’S FIRST FLAT DAY
12 31
INT BULSARA HOME DAY
13 35
INT ZANDRA RHODES’ CLOTHING STORE DAY
14 36
INT FREDDIE’S FIRST FLAT/ LONDON DAY
15 38
EXT MOTEL/ USA DAY
16 40
INT BRIAN MAY’S RECORDING STUDIO (2016) NIGHT
17 42
INT RAY FOSTER’S OFFICE/ EMI RECORDS DAY
18 44
INT BAR NIGHT
19 48
INT FREDDIE’S FIRST FLAT/ LONDON NIGHT
20 52
INT TACK-ROOM/ ROCKFIELD FARM DAY
21 53
INT RECORDING STUDIO DAY
22 55
INT RECORDING STUDIO /ROCKFIELD FARM DAY
23 57
INT RAY FOSTER’S OFFICE/ EMI RECORDS DAY
24 59
INT RECORDING STUDIO /ROCKFIELD FARM DAY
25 63
INT ELSTREE STUDIOS DAY
26 65
INT CAPITAL RADIO / STUDIO 1 DAY
27 67
EXT HYDE PARK CONCERT (1976) - SUNSET
28 69
EXT ARGENTINA TOUR/ BUENOS AIRES/ 1981 DAY
29 71
INT BRIAN MAY’S RECORDING STUDIO (2016) NIGHT
30 73
EXT STAGE/ HYDE PARK CONCERT NIGHT
31 76
INT LIMO NIGHT
32 77
INT RESTAURANT NIGHT
33 80
INT FREDDIE & MARY’S FLAT/ LONDON DAY
34 84
INT FREDDIE’S MANSION DAY
35 86
INT FREDDIE’S MANSION NIGHT
36 88
INT BRIAN MAY’S RECORDING STUDIO (2016) NIGHT
37 90
INT BACKSTAGE/ US TOUR 3 NIGHT
38 92
EXT CHICAGO NIGHT
39 93
INT BACKSTAGE/ US TOUR 3 NIGHT
40 96
INT NEW YORK BARBERSHOP DAY
41 98
INT HOTEL/ US TOUR 2 - SUNRISE
42 100
EXT SMALL GAY BAR / LONDON NIGHT
43 103
INT BRIAN MAY’S RECORDING STUDIO (2016) NIGHT
44 105
INT CBS HALLWAY DAY
45 108
INT FREDDIE’S MANSION/ LONDON DAY
46 112
INT MUNICH OPERA HOUSE NIGHT
47 114
INT FREDDIE’S MUNICH FLAT NIGHT
48 116
EXT LONDON STREETS DAY
49 118
INT RECORDING STUDIO (MUNICH) DAY
50 119
INT FREDDIE’S MUNICH FLAT DAY
51 122
INT FREDDIE’S MUNICH FLAT NIGHT
52 127
INT FREDDIE’S MUNICH FLAT DAY
53 130
EXT CAR-PARK/ MONT-PELERIN HOTEL - MONTREUX DAY
54 136
INT LONDON HOSPITAL DAY
55 138
INT FREDDIE’S MANSION/ LONDON DAY
56 140
EXT WEMBLEY STADIUM/ “LIVE AID”/ LONDON (1985)
57 144
INT BRIAN MAY’S RECORDING STUDIO (2016) - SUNRISE
58 147
EXT STAGE/ LIVE AID DAY
59 148
INT BRIAN MAY’S RECORDING STUDIO (2016) MORNING
60 151
EXT FREDDIE’S MANSION/ LONDON MORNING
Scene Map
60
# PG SLUGLINE
1 1
INT FREDDIE’S GEORGIAN MANSION (GARDEN LODGE)/ LONDON
INT. FREDDIE’S GEORGIAN MANSION (GARDEN LODGE)/ LONDON -
BOHEMIAN)RHAPSODY)) ) Original)Screenplay) by) Anthony)McCarten)
2 3
INT BBC TV STUDIO DAY
INT. BBC TV STUDIO - DAY
INT. BBC TV STUDIO - DAY BBC ANCHORMAN Tragic news today--for fans of the Super-group Queen--that Freddie Mercury, their iconic and renown
3 7
INT BRIAN MAY’S RECORDING STUDIO (2016) NIGHT
INT. BRIAN MAY’S RECORDING STUDIO (2016) - NIGHT
INT. BRIAN MAY’S RECORDING STUDIO (2016) - NIGHT The year is now 2016...and in a dimly lit PRIVATE STUDIO...full of homely touches (furnishings, books, candles, and a telescope, etc) the CAMERA finds... BRIAN MAY (69), his back turned to camera, his curly tresses now
4 11
INT HALLS/ EALING ART SCHOOL DAY
INT. HALLS/ EALING ART SCHOOL - DAY
INT. HALLS/ EALING ART SCHOOL - DAY OLDER BRIAN (V.O.) ....Me and my bandmate Roger used to hang out at Ealing Art School. There were some pretty girls there.
5 16
INT FREDDIE’S BEDROOM/ BULSARA FAMILY HOME DAY
INT. FREDDIE’S BEDROOM/ BULSARA FAMILY HOME - DAY
INT. FREDDIE’S BEDROOM/ BULSARA FAMILY HOME - DAY CLOSE ON: A RECORD - JIMI HENDRIX’S “ELECTRIC LADY LAND” - playing on a turn-table. WIDE: As BRIAN reads the sleeve notes on the ALBUM COVER - FREDDIE excitedly puts his EAR to the LEFT SPEAKER then
6 18
INT BRIAN MAY’S RECORDING STUDIO (2016) NIGHT
INT. BRIAN MAY’S RECORDING STUDIO (2016) - NIGHT
INT. BRIAN MAY’S RECORDING STUDIO (2016) - NIGHT OLDER BRIAN crosses to the BLOGGER, with a WOODEN BOX - OLDER BRIAN Not at all proper. But a language that was Freddie’s own--a
7 20
INT “SMILE” GIG 3 NIGHT
INT. “SMILE” GIG 3 - NIGHT
INT. “SMILE” GIG 3 - NIGHT CLOSE ON: The RED SPECIAL, being strapped on by BRIAN, as - the band prepare to perform their first song - to a small audience. ANGLE ON: FREDDIE, struggling to adjust the FAULTY MIC-
8 21
INT BIBA CLOTHING BOUTIQUE DAY
INT. BIBA CLOTHING BOUTIQUE - DAY
INT. BIBA CLOTHING BOUTIQUE - DAY A trendy clothes boutique - OLDER BRIAN (V.O.) ...and it needed a new look. CLOSE ON: MARY AUSTIN (19), who works in the store.
9 23
EXT KENSINGTON MARKET DAY
EXT. KENSINGTON MARKET - DAY
EXT. KENSINGTON MARKET - DAY FREDDIE and ROGER work their little STALL, trying to sell FREDDIE’s ART-WORK (drawings of JIMI HENDRIX, ROCK HUDSON) (CONTINUED)
10 25
INT FREDDIE’S FIRST FLAT/ 2 VICTORIA RD/ LONDON DAY
INT. FREDDIE’S FIRST FLAT/ 2 VICTORIA RD/ LONDON - DAY
INT. FREDDIE’S FIRST FLAT/ 2 VICTORIA RD/ LONDON - DAY CLOSE ON: The BRUSH of the BLACK-FINGERNAIL painting BLACK NAIL-POLISH onto - the White Piano Keys. WIDE: We are in the tiny new flat Freddie has just rented – empty but for the piano. While he paints the White Keys
11 28
EXT LONDON STREETS/ FREDDIE’S FIRST FLAT DAY
EXT. LONDON STREETS/ FREDDIE’S FIRST FLAT - DAY
EXT. LONDON STREETS/ FREDDIE’S FIRST FLAT - DAY FREDDIE, HAPPY, hurries up the street and climbs the steps to a front door, humming a TUNE, lighting a CIGARETTE. INT. STAIRS/ FREDDIE FIRST FLAT - DAY FREDDIE runs up the stairs - humming the TUNE -
12 31
INT BULSARA HOME DAY
INT. BULSARA HOME - DAY
INT. BULSARA HOME - DAY LUNCH. It’s FREDDIE’s BIRTHDAY. A far noisier affair than the Austin’s. Everyone is wearing paper party hats. FREDDIE is dressed VERY CONSERVATIVELY - playing the role of the good son.
13 35
INT ZANDRA RHODES’ CLOTHING STORE DAY
INT. ZANDRA RHODES’ CLOTHING STORE - DAY
INT. ZANDRA RHODES’ CLOTHING STORE - DAY ROGER comes out of the DRESSING ROOM - in a full GLAM OUTFIT. Designer, Zandra Rhodes, nods with approval as - a second later, another curtain parts, and BRIAN comes out in
14 36
INT FREDDIE’S FIRST FLAT/ LONDON DAY
INT. FREDDIE’S FIRST FLAT/ LONDON - DAY
INT. FREDDIE’S FIRST FLAT/ LONDON - DAY FREDDIE, composing on the PIANO, CATS lying on the PIANO - (CONTINUED) CONTINUED:
15 38
EXT MOTEL/ USA DAY
EXT. MOTEL/ USA - DAY
EXT. MOTEL/ USA - DAY ROGER, BRIAN and JOHN lean up against a waiting TOUR BUS... (CONTINUED) CONTINUED:
16 40
INT BRIAN MAY’S RECORDING STUDIO (2016) NIGHT
INT. BRIAN MAY’S RECORDING STUDIO (2016) - NIGHT
INT. BRIAN MAY’S RECORDING STUDIO (2016) - NIGHT OLDER BRIAN ...a piece about a prostitute, a hymn to hookers... REACTION BLOGGER: Confused, as we hear...the FINGER-
17 42
INT RAY FOSTER’S OFFICE/ EMI RECORDS DAY
INT. RAY FOSTER’S OFFICE/ EMI RECORDS - DAY
INT. RAY FOSTER’S OFFICE/ EMI RECORDS - DAY CLOSE: on JOE BASTIN, a handsome record executive of FREDDIE’s age. RAY FOSTER (O.S.) So. A new album?
18 44
INT BAR NIGHT
INT. BAR - NIGHT
INT. BAR - NIGHT JOHN REID and PAUL PRENTER stand and toast their deal, but QUEEN, very GLUM, refuse to stand, or join the toast. JOHN REID To your fourth album! Come on guys!
19 48
INT FREDDIE’S FIRST FLAT/ LONDON NIGHT
INT. FREDDIE’S FIRST FLAT/ LONDON - NIGHT
INT. FREDDIE’S FIRST FLAT/ LONDON - NIGHT Fred gives MARY a PRESENT. MARY What is it? FREDDIE
20 52
INT TACK-ROOM/ ROCKFIELD FARM DAY
INT. TACK-ROOM/ ROCKFIELD FARM - DAY
INT. TACK-ROOM/ ROCKFIELD FARM - DAY FREDDIE wanders in to the RIDING-GEAR STORAGE ROOM and sees, to his surprise, behind HAY BALES, an OLD PIANO. He moves the top BALE aside and uses the remaining one as a PIANO STOOL. He tests the keys - a little out of tune in
21 53
INT RECORDING STUDIO DAY
INT. RECORDING STUDIO - DAY
INT. RECORDING STUDIO - DAY FREDDIE plays the song for the BAND on a WHITE GRAND PIANO... FREDDIE (singing)
22 55
INT RECORDING STUDIO /ROCKFIELD FARM DAY
INT. RECORDING STUDIO /ROCKFIELD FARM - DAY
INT. RECORDING STUDIO /ROCKFIELD FARM - DAY With a CLUNK the 24-TRACK RECORDING TAPING MACHINE starts to RECORD. At the MIXING DESK - ENGINEER (R.T.BAKER) Two. Mark Two--version of “Fred’s--
23 57
INT RAY FOSTER’S OFFICE/ EMI RECORDS DAY
INT. RAY FOSTER’S OFFICE/ EMI RECORDS - DAY
INT. RAY FOSTER’S OFFICE/ EMI RECORDS - DAY The FULL MIXED RECORDING of BOHEMIAN RHAPSODY is played on RAY FOSTER’s TAPE MACHINE, for RAY FOSTER and his FINANCIAL OFFICER and JOE BASTIN. Present, also, are QUEEN, and JOHN REID, and PAUL PRENTER.
24 59
INT RECORDING STUDIO /ROCKFIELD FARM DAY
INT. RECORDING STUDIO /ROCKFIELD FARM - DAY
INT. RECORDING STUDIO /ROCKFIELD FARM - DAY FREDDIE sings “LOVE OF MY LIFE”, recording vocals and piano solo, as the rest of the BAND - watch from the CONTROL ROOM, (Top Lit as in the album cover, minus Freddie.) FREDDIE sings his SONG FOR MARY, beautifully, over...
25 63
INT ELSTREE STUDIOS DAY
INT. ELSTREE STUDIOS - DAY
INT. ELSTREE STUDIOS - DAY The BAND record their VIDEO for BOHEMIAN RHAPSODY... The CAMERAMAN is ready to shoot. The BAND wait, arranged in their now famous diamond-shaped tableau, but in silhouette at this stage, waiting...
26 65
INT CAPITAL RADIO / STUDIO 1 DAY
INT. CAPITAL RADIO / STUDIO 1 - DAY
INT. CAPITAL RADIO / STUDIO 1 - DAY Outrageously ‘camp’ DJ, KENNY EVERETT, sings his signature tune, then resumes interviewing FREDDIE... KENNY In the studio today, singer Fffred-
27 67
EXT HYDE PARK CONCERT (1976) - SUNSET
EXT. HYDE PARK CONCERT (1976) - SUNSET
EXT. HYDE PARK CONCERT (1976) - SUNSET A VAST CROWD awaits QUEEN’s arrival on-stage, CLAPPING, in HIGH EXCITEMENT - OLDER BRIAN (V.O.) Overnight, we were loved. We wanted
28 69
EXT ARGENTINA TOUR/ BUENOS AIRES/ 1981 DAY
EXT. ARGENTINA TOUR/ BUENOS AIRES/ 1981 - DAY
EXT. ARGENTINA TOUR/ BUENOS AIRES/ 1981 - DAY Police motorcycles lead a TANK down the CROWD-LINED street of BUENOS AIRES, with the motorcycles crisscrossing to keep civilians and cars away from the tank. OLDER BRIAN (V.O.)
29 71
INT BRIAN MAY’S RECORDING STUDIO (2016) NIGHT
INT. BRIAN MAY’S RECORDING STUDIO (2016) - NIGHT
INT. BRIAN MAY’S RECORDING STUDIO (2016) - NIGHT OLDER BRIAN And the parties?! (pause) Well--I was a married man...
30 73
EXT STAGE/ HYDE PARK CONCERT NIGHT
EXT. STAGE/ HYDE PARK CONCERT - NIGHT
EXT. STAGE/ HYDE PARK CONCERT - NIGHT The BAND at full tilt, playing the climactic CHORD/NOTE of a big song - FREDDIE dancing, SWEAT POURING OFF HIM, the BAND playing at double speed, sustaining the tension of the last chord, bathed in SWEAT also, faster, faster, faster -
31 76
INT LIMO NIGHT
INT. LIMO - NIGHT
INT. LIMO - NIGHT FREDDIE and JOHN REID ride in the backseat - JOHN REID Listen to me now. You’ve seen what I’ve done for Elton. 4% of all records
32 77
INT RESTAURANT NIGHT
INT. RESTAURANT - NIGHT
INT. RESTAURANT - NIGHT FREDDIE and MARY and BRIAN and ROGER and JOHN and PAUL PRENTER and JOE BASTIN and JIM BEACH are having DINNER in a fine-dining restaurant. WAITERS hover around their star guest, as FREDDIE speaks -
33 80
INT FREDDIE & MARY’S FLAT/ LONDON DAY
INT. FREDDIE & MARY’S FLAT/ LONDON - DAY
INT. FREDDIE & MARY’S FLAT/ LONDON - DAY MARY comes in with SHOPPING BAGS and a stack of BRIDAL CATALOGUES. FREDDIE is sleeping off his hang-over. MARY is still carrying anxiety, but trying to hide it. MARY
34 84
INT FREDDIE’S MANSION DAY
INT. FREDDIE’S MANSION - DAY
INT. FREDDIE’S MANSION - DAY FREDDIE is moving in to his ENORMOUS mansion. The rooms are largely empty, except for CATS - more than we have seen before. FREDDIE instructs the PIANO MOVERS where to put the STEINWAY.
35 86
INT FREDDIE’S MANSION NIGHT
INT. FREDDIE’S MANSION - NIGHT
INT. FREDDIE’S MANSION - NIGHT A CAT sits on the lid of the STEINWAY as FREDDIE composes - what will become "Somebody To Love." He plays the first piano part...the INTRO... starting slowly, softly, developing it until he finds what he wants. He picks up his
36 88
INT BRIAN MAY’S RECORDING STUDIO (2016) NIGHT
INT. BRIAN MAY’S RECORDING STUDIO (2016) - NIGHT
INT. BRIAN MAY’S RECORDING STUDIO (2016) - NIGHT OLDER BRIAN “Grotesquery of the first order.” That’s what the Music Press called our next album, A Day At The Races!
37 90
INT BACKSTAGE/ US TOUR 3 NIGHT
INT. BACKSTAGE/ US TOUR 3 - NIGHT
INT. BACKSTAGE/ US TOUR 3 - NIGHT The BAND, just off the stage, sit for one of FREDDIE’s post concert banquets. JOHN “We Are The Champions”? It sounds
38 92
EXT CHICAGO NIGHT
EXT. CHICAGO - NIGHT
EXT. CHICAGO - NIGHT In concert, under a spot-light, FREDDIE sings his (public but encoded) declaration of who he is... In the presentation it should have a dramatic quality of a defendant in the witness stand, giving his testimony.
39 93
INT BACKSTAGE/ US TOUR 3 NIGHT
INT. BACKSTAGE/ US TOUR 3 - NIGHT
INT. BACKSTAGE/ US TOUR 3 - NIGHT FREDDIE and BRIAN and ROGER and JOHN all excitedly discuss what just happened, as they undress. (The DRESSING ROOM is now, unlike before, FULL of people we have never seen before, HANGERS-ON. JIM BEACH is there, and
40 96
INT NEW YORK BARBERSHOP DAY
INT. NEW YORK BARBERSHOP - DAY
INT. NEW YORK BARBERSHOP - DAY HAIR falls onto the BARBERSHOP FLOOR. In the mirror we see the NEW FREDDIE, short-haired, clean-shaven, and now sporting a MUSTACHE! FREDDIE spins in the BARBERSHOP CHAIR and looks at - PAUL PRENTER, who nods his APPROVAL. FREDDIE
41 98
INT HOTEL/ US TOUR 2 - SUNRISE
INT. HOTEL/ US TOUR 2 - SUNRISE
INT. HOTEL/ US TOUR 2 - SUNRISE BRIAN, in his BOXER SHORTS and T-SHIRTS, EAR-PLUGS inserted, carrying a BUCKET OF ICE, unable to sleep because of the PARTY MUSIC leaking from other rooms, walks down the HALL, returning to his room. When he turns the T-junction
42 100
EXT SMALL GAY BAR / LONDON NIGHT
EXT. SMALL GAY BAR / LONDON - NIGHT
EXT. SMALL GAY BAR / LONDON - NIGHT A TAXI pulls up and MARY gets out, WORRIED. She looks for FREDDIE who is hiding in the shadows across the road. She goes to him. He is sporting his CLONE LOOK. MARY
43 103
INT BRIAN MAY’S RECORDING STUDIO (2016) NIGHT
INT. BRIAN MAY’S RECORDING STUDIO (2016) - NIGHT
INT. BRIAN MAY’S RECORDING STUDIO (2016) - NIGHT OLDER BRIAN And then--at the height of our popularity--we screwed up. We recorded a video, dreamt up by Roger, for a new
44 105
INT CBS HALLWAY DAY
INT. CBS HALLWAY - DAY
INT. CBS HALLWAY - DAY FREDDIE and PAUL PRENTER and JIM BEACH walk toward an OFFICE DOOR...and as they do, the sound of MICHAEL JACKSON’s “THRILLER” gets louder and louder. OLDER BRIAN (V.O.)
45 108
INT FREDDIE’S MANSION/ LONDON DAY
INT. FREDDIE’S MANSION/ LONDON - DAY
INT. FREDDIE’S MANSION/ LONDON - DAY FREDDIE is writing “I WAS BORN TO LOVE YOU” alone, on his PIANO... FREDDIE “I was born to love you with every
46 112
INT MUNICH OPERA HOUSE NIGHT
INT. MUNICH OPERA HOUSE - NIGHT
INT. MUNICH OPERA HOUSE - NIGHT FREDDIE watches, with PAUL PRENTER, a German-language production of “THE RING CYCLE” by WAGNER, a SCENE of TREACHERY and BETRAYAL. The ORCHESTRA rises to a CLIMAX. The CONDUCTOR urges his
47 114
INT FREDDIE’S MUNICH FLAT NIGHT
INT. FREDDIE’S MUNICH FLAT - NIGHT
INT. FREDDIE’S MUNICH FLAT - NIGHT A PARTY at FREDDIE’s FLAT. PAUL PRENTER and a coterie of THEATRICAL HANGERS-ON party like there’s no tomorrow. PAUL then gets a call on the TELEPHONE - he goes to it. PAUL PRENTER
48 116
EXT LONDON STREETS DAY
EXT. LONDON STREETS - DAY
EXT. LONDON STREETS - DAY ROGER looks in the window of a RECORD STORE. “MR BAD GUY”, FREDDIE’S solo album, is on sale, price already reduced. OLDER BRIAN His solo album? Flopped. You only have
49 118
INT RECORDING STUDIO (MUNICH) DAY
INT. RECORDING STUDIO (MUNICH) - DAY
INT. RECORDING STUDIO (MUNICH) - DAY FREDDIE and MONSERAT CABALLE sing their duet - FREDDIE “The boy had a way with words, he sang, he moved with grace
50 119
INT FREDDIE’S MUNICH FLAT DAY
INT. FREDDIE’S MUNICH FLAT - DAY
INT. FREDDIE’S MUNICH FLAT - DAY The DOORBELL sounds. FREDDIE (drunk, high and looking worn out) goes to it, and opens the door. It’s MARY! Her shoulders are coated in SNOW. She carries a SUITCASE.
51 122
INT FREDDIE’S MUNICH FLAT NIGHT
INT. FREDDIE’S MUNICH FLAT - NIGHT
INT. FREDDIE’S MUNICH FLAT - NIGHT - MARY takes off the HEADPHONES. Silence. She SMILES. MARY I do. FREDDIE
52 127
INT FREDDIE’S MUNICH FLAT DAY
INT. FREDDIE’S MUNICH FLAT - DAY
INT. FREDDIE’S MUNICH FLAT - DAY FREDDIE, alone now, at rock bottom, tries to work but cannot. He paces. He goes to a GLASS COFFEE TABLE and spoons some COKE onto the GLASS, and BEGINS to CUT a HUGE LINE...He SNORTS it all. But it only makes him more
53 130
EXT CAR-PARK/ MONT-PELERIN HOTEL - MONTREUX DAY
EXT. CAR-PARK/ MONT-PELERIN HOTEL - MONTREUX - DAY
EXT. CAR-PARK/ MONT-PELERIN HOTEL - MONTREUX - DAY FREDDIE’s LIMO arrives in the ALPINE RESORT - JIM BEACH is waiting for him. FREDDIE is LIMPING, as a result of his KNEE INJURY. They shake hands. FREDDIE
54 136
INT LONDON HOSPITAL DAY
INT. LONDON HOSPITAL - DAY
INT. LONDON HOSPITAL - DAY UP WITH: “WHO WANTS TO LIVE FOREVER”... FREDDIE and JIM BEACH are led up a CORRIDOR by a NURSE. They stop outside a PRIVATE ROOM. FREDDIE
55 138
INT FREDDIE’S MANSION/ LONDON DAY
INT. FREDDIE’S MANSION/ LONDON - DAY
INT. FREDDIE’S MANSION/ LONDON - DAY FREDDIE sits at his BREAKFAST table, staring out the window at his beautiful garden...where JIM HUTTON tends the FLOWERS. MARY enters - PREGNANT - bringing a steaming cup.
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EXT WEMBLEY STADIUM/ “LIVE AID”/ LONDON (1985)
EXT. WEMBLEY STADIUM/ “LIVE AID”/ LONDON (1985)
EXT. WEMBLEY STADIUM/ “LIVE AID”/ LONDON (1985) STATUS QUO are playing “Rockin’ All Over The World.” But the lead singer - FRANCIS ROSSI -calls to his soundman - FRANCIS ROSSI More volume.
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INT BRIAN MAY’S RECORDING STUDIO (2016) - SUNRISE
INT. BRIAN MAY’S RECORDING STUDIO (2016) - SUNRISE
INT. BRIAN MAY’S RECORDING STUDIO (2016) - SUNRISE OLDER BRIAN has his HEAD in his HAND, as if recalling a DISASTER...but then he raises his head and we see - - a small SMILE forming on his face. He is recalling, in fact, a time of TRIUMPH!
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EXT STAGE/ LIVE AID DAY
EXT. STAGE/ LIVE AID - DAY
EXT. STAGE/ LIVE AID - DAY With the fuse lit, BRIAN blows the entire thing sky-high by launching into the famous POWER CHORDS of the INTRO, accompanied by ROGER and JOHN. The effect is orgasmic - the crowd ROARS!
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INT BRIAN MAY’S RECORDING STUDIO (2016) MORNING
INT. BRIAN MAY’S RECORDING STUDIO (2016) - MORNING
INT. BRIAN MAY’S RECORDING STUDIO (2016) - MORNING OLDER BRIAN (emotional) Write what you want. You people always do. I need to sleep.
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EXT FREDDIE’S MANSION/ LONDON MORNING
EXT. FREDDIE’S MANSION/ LONDON - MORNING
EXT. FREDDIE’S MANSION/ LONDON - MORNING CROWDS of FANS mourn FREDDIE’s death, leave gifts and flowers for FREDDIE, light votive candles...PHOTOS of FREDDIE and of QUEEN. Over this... FREDDIE

Bohemian Rhapsody

After fame, excess, and a disastrous solo detour fracture Queen, Freddie Mercury must reunite with his band and reclaim his voice to conquer Live Aid—while confronting betrayal, identity, and an illness he dares not name.

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Overview

Poster
Unique Selling Proposition

A propulsive blend of behind‑the‑music process (bathroom harmonies to ‘Galileo’ overdubs, inventing the music video, hijacking radio) and stadium‑scale spectacle, all emotionally framed by Brian May’s reflective narration to make the Live Aid crescendo feel inevitable and earned.

AI Verdict

Model upgrade — March 31, 2026
Verdicts are often harsher under the new readers, but the analysis is significantly stronger. Under the previous models, this script would have scored:
R Grok 8.5
R Gemini 8.8
R DeepSeek 8.0
R Claude 7.8
R GPT5 7.5
The scoring scale changed with the upgrade — use these only to compare against earlier revisions of this script.

Synthesis Where readers agree and split
7.0

A qualified recommend that depends on tightening the midsection causal chain without sacrificing the script's propulsive musical momentum.

Readers read as Mainstream commercial3 Prestige2 Biopic Drama Musical majority

A mainstream commercial biopic aiming for emotional catharsis through iconic performance recreation, with a secondary prestige bet on intimate character drama to ground the spectacle.

Readers split on the contract: three read this as mainstream commercial, two as prestige. The split traces to tonal register in the back half — the commercial read accepts the episodic structure as a vehicle for musical catharsis, while the prestige read demands sustained causal pressure and interiority between milestones.

Would readers champion it?
Not yetNot yetReaders wouldn’t actively push for it.
WeaklyWeaklyMentioned, but no real push behind it.
ModeratelyModeratelyMentioned favorably to the right buyer.
StronglyStronglyActively championed across their network.
ClaudeModeratelyDeepSeekModeratelyGPT5ModeratelyGrokWeaklyGeminiStrongly
How much rewrite does it need?
Start from scratchStart from scratchPremise or core engine isn’t working. Page-one rebuild.
Structural rewriteStructural rewriteSpecific acts or zones need rebuilding — not starting over, but significant revision work on those sections.
Targeted rewriteTargeted rewriteSpecific scenes or threads need rework. ~1 month.
Just polishJust polishLines and pacing tweaks. A few weeks.
ClaudeTargeted rewriteDeepSeekTargeted rewriteGeminiTargeted rewriteGPT5Structural rewriteGrokStructural rewrite
How distinctive is the voice?
GenericGenericReads like other scripts in the genre.
EmergingEmergingHints of a distinctive voice, not yet locked in.
DistinctiveDistinctiveA clear, recognizable authorial voice.
One-of-a-kindOne-of-a-kindA voice that couldn’t be anyone else’s.
DeepSeekEmergingGPT5EmergingGrokEmergingClaudeDistinctiveGeminiDistinctive

On the score: The score sits at the high edge of its band — a focused revision could push it to the next verdict.

What's working All 5 readers agree

The Live Aid sequence and the Freddie-Mary relationship provide a genuine emotional spine and set-piece execution that distinguish the script from conventional rock biopics.

What's blocking All 5 readers agree

The midsection causal break and fragmented protagonist desire prevent the script from achieving the sustained dramatic pressure required for a higher advocacy call.

Why not lower

The Live Aid sequence and the Freddie-Mary relationship provide enough distinctive emotional lift and craft confidence to hold the script above a Pass.

Why not higher

The episodic structure and reliance on stated rather than dramatized emotion prevent the script from achieving the sustained engagement and character depth required for a Highly Recommend.

Fix-first · Protect-while-fixing · Reader splits · Quick credibility wins
Rewrite map

A script with a distinctive musical and emotional core that needs structural work on the midsection causal chain and a pass to replace stated interiority with dramatized action.

Readers read as Mainstream commercial3 Prestige2 majority

Start here

Anchoring the second act to a single, active governing want for Freddie that each sequence tests or complicates addresses the midsection causal break and reduces the cost of fixing the on-the-nose dialogue and supporting character arcs.

Protect while fixing 2
Live Aid sequence as set-piece climax

Structural tightening or pacing cuts risk compressing the preparation beats that build the sequence's tension.

Keep the sequence's current length, specificity, and backstage preparation beats intact; do not trim for narrative efficiency.

Freddie-Mary relationship as emotional spine

Restructuring the midsection around a single governing want could reduce Mary's visit to a transitional plot function.

Maintain her active agency and the relationship's unusual intimacy as the anchor for Freddie's private self, ensuring her scenes retain their own emotional weight.

Fix first 3
Midsection causal chain diffuses

The reader loses forward pull as scenes accumulate biographical beats without a governing desire to test or complicate them.

Root cause

Freddie's want shifts among creative validation, isolation, and reconciliation without any single pursuit organizing the sequence order.

One direction

Anchor the second act to one active governing want so each intervening sequence functions as a step toward or obstacle to that goal.

Interiority stated rather than dramatized

The reader is told what to feel about Freddie rather than discovering it through action, which flattens emotional impact.

Root cause

The script relies on explicit dialogue and voiceover to deliver psychological states and thematic points instead of trusting subtext and behavioral contradiction.

One direction

Audit key emotional scenes to replace direct declarations with visible action, evasion, or subtext that forces the reader to interpret the character's state.

Supporting characters function as narrative instruments Medium confidence

The reader experiences band conflicts and managerial friction as simplified plot mechanics rather than genuine dramatic obstacles.

Root cause

The band members and antagonists lack independent stakes or internal logic, making them reactive sounding boards rather than active agents.

One direction

Differentiate the band's individual grievances and give the antagonist a legible internal motive so Freddie's choices feel active rather than reactive.

Your decisions 1
Contract framing: mainstream commercial spectacle vs. prestige character study Consequential
Side A

Committing to the commercial lane means prioritizing propulsive pacing and musical catharsis over psychological realism, treating the episodic structure as acceptable if the set-pieces land.

Side B

Committing to the prestige lane means the script must sustain interiority and causal pressure between milestones, requiring the episodic sprawl to be tightened into a dramatic arc.

Quick credibility wins 2
Strip typographic emphasis from action lines

Remove caps, italics, and exclamation marks used to force emotional weight in action lines and sound effects; trust the staging and prose to carry the intensity.

Cut on-the-nose parentheticals and emotional stage directions

Delete parentheticals that dictate delivery and rewrite lines where characters explicitly state their psychological state or the scene's theme.

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Story Facts
Genres:
Drama 85% Comedy 15% Romance 25%

Setting: 1970s to 2016, with a focus on the 1980s, Primarily London, with significant scenes in Munich, New York, and various concert venues worldwide

Themes: Artistic Genius and Innovation, Identity and Self-Acceptance, Fame and its Consequences, Love, Loss, and Relationships, Mortality and Legacy, Societal Judgment and Prejudice

Conflict & Stakes: Freddie's struggle with his identity, relationships, and health, set against the backdrop of Queen's rise to fame and the pressures of the music industry.

Mood: Melancholic yet triumphant, reflecting the highs and lows of Freddie's life.

Standout Features:

  • Unique Hook: The film chronicles the life of Freddie Mercury, a cultural icon, and his journey from a young immigrant to a global superstar.
  • Major Twist: Freddie's struggle with his identity and sexuality, culminating in his public acknowledgment of his HIV status.
  • Innovative Ideas: The screenplay interweaves past and present, using flashbacks to highlight key moments in Freddie's life and career.
  • Distinctive Settings: The contrasting settings of lavish concerts, intimate personal moments, and the stark reality of Freddie's health struggles.
  • Genre Blend: Combines elements of biopic, drama, and musical, appealing to a wide range of audiences.

Comparable Scripts: Bohemian Rhapsody (2018), Rocketman (2019), The Doors (1991), A Star is Born (2018), The Runaways (2010), Control (2007), Yesterday (2019), The Music Never Stopped (2011), The Greatest Showman (2017)

How 5 AI Readers Scored The Script

Readers graded as Mainstream commercial3 Prestige2 majority
Claude GPT5 Gemini DeepSeek Grok Average spread Row tint: weak mid strong excellent
Premise i
7.6
Plot i
6.0
Structure i
6.6
Character i
6.8
Dialogue i
6.4
Tone / Voice i
7.2
Theme i
6.8
Marketability i
8.4
💎 Final Polish Stage

Our stats model looked at how your scores work together and ranked the changes most likely to move your overall rating next draft. Ordered by the most reliable gains first.

You're in refinement mode.

At this level, focused work on Structure (Script Level) and Conflict (Script Level) will have the most impact on the overall rating.

1. Structure (Script Level)
Big Impact Script Level
Your current Structure (Script Level) score: 8.0
Expected gain: ~2% closer to an "all Highly Recommends" score
Moves easily Writers at your level typically gain +0.37 per rewrite — a realistic improvement.
Confidence: High (based on ~745 similar revisions)
  • This is your top opportunity right now. Focusing your rewrite energy here gives you the best realistic shot at raising the overall rating.
  • What writers at your level usually do: Writers at a similar level usually raise Structure (Script Level) by about +0.37 in one rewrite.
2. Conflict (Script Level)
Moderate Impact Script Level
Your current Conflict (Script Level) score: 7.8
Expected gain: ~1% closer to an "all Highly Recommends" score
Moves easily Writers at your level typically gain +0.47 per rewrite — a realistic improvement.
Confidence: High (based on ~622 similar revisions)
  • This is another strong option. If the top item doesn't fit your rewrite plan, this is a solid alternative.
  • What writers at your level usually do: Writers at a similar level usually raise Conflict (Script Level) by about +0.47 in one rewrite.
3. Pacing
Light Impact Scene Level
Your current Pacing score: 8.4
Expected gain: ~1% closer to an "all Highly Recommends" score
High leverage Strong model impact. Writers at your level typically gain +0.09.
Confidence: High (based on ~1,792 similar revisions)
  • This is another strong option. If the top item doesn't fit your rewrite plan, this is a solid alternative.
  • What writers at your level usually do: Writers at a similar level usually raise Pacing by about +0.09 in one rewrite.
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Skills Worth Developing

These have high model impact but rarely improve through rewrites alone — they're craft investments. Studying these areas through courses, mentorship, or focused reading could unlock gains that a normal rewrite won't.

Emotional Impact (Script Level) Script Level 1.6× leverage

1.6× more model leverage than your top pick above, but writers at your level rarely move it in a typical rewrite. (Your score: 8.6)

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Script Level Analysis

Writer Exec

This section delivers a top-level assessment of the screenplay’s strengths and weaknesses — covering overall quality (P/C/R/HR), character development, emotional impact, thematic depth, narrative inconsistencies, and the story’s core philosophical conflict. It helps identify what’s resonating, what needs refinement, and how the script aligns with professional standards.

Screenplay Insights

Breaks down your script along various categories.

Overall Score: 8.04
Key Suggestions:
The analysis consistently highlights that while Freddie Mercury's arc is compelling, secondary characters like Paul Prenter and Jim Beach lack depth and clear motivations, which weakens the emotional stakes of their interactions. Additionally, several scenes (especially 10, 19, 35) feel drawn out, disrupting pacing and emotional impact. To elevate the screenplay, focus on tightening these scenes and giving supporting characters richer arcs—consider brief moments that reveal their vulnerabilities or contrasting perspectives, similar to ensemble-driven biopics like *The Social Network* or *A Star Is Born*. This will make the narrative more cohesive and emotionally resonant.
Story Critique

Big-picture feedback on the story’s clarity, stakes, cohesion, and engagement.

Key Suggestions:
The script excels at capturing Freddie Mercury’s emotional duality and using music as a narrative engine, but it struggles with uneven pacing and underdeveloped supporting characters, particularly the other band members. To strengthen the creative craft, give Brian, Roger, and John more screen time and personal arcs that show their contributions and struggles—this will make the band’s collective journey more cohesive. Tighten drawn-out scenes and add moments of levity (e.g., banter or humor) to balance the drama. For the beginning, consider brief flashbacks of Mercury’s childhood to ground his motivations; for the end, explicitly address his personal growth and add an epilogue on Queen’s legacy to provide closure.
Characters

Explores the depth, clarity, and arc of the main and supporting characters.

Key Suggestions:
The character analyses reveal that while Freddie, Mary, Brian, Roger, and Paul are well-conceived, several key scenes lack emotional depth and exploration of internal conflict. For example, Mary's confrontation about Freddie's bisexuality (scene 33) could be expanded to show her turmoil, and Freddie's immigrant background is underexplored despite being a core part of his outsider identity. Strengthening these moments with subtext, physical reactions, and deeper dialogue will make character arcs more resonant. Additionally, Paul's manipulation could be given more vulnerability to avoid being one-dimensional. In short, focus on showing not telling the characters' inner lives, especially in high-stakes confrontations.
Emotional Analysis

Breaks down the emotional journey of the audience across the script.

Key Suggestions:
The emotional analysis reveals that the script relies too heavily on sadness and melancholy, especially in the framing narrative and Freddie's personal struggles, creating emotional monotony. While the Live Aid climax is powerful, the journey there is punctuated by prolonged negative emotions (scenes 29-45) with insufficient relief. To improve, introduce more sustained periods of joy, humor, and camaraderie—expand triumphant montages, add playful banter during creative sessions, and consider a lighthearted subplot to provide respite. Also, deepen the framing narrative by making the blogger more personally invested and letting Older Brian’s memories show conflicting emotions rather than just explaining them.
Goals and Philosophical Conflict

Evaluates character motivations, obstacles, and sources of tension throughout the plot.

Key Suggestions:
The analysis reveals that the protagonist's internal and external goals converge powerfully at the Live Aid performance, which serves as the emotional and thematic climax. To strengthen the script, consider deepening the protagonist's internal conflicts earlier in the story—perhaps by showing more explicit moments of self-doubt and isolation before the final act—so that the resolution feels even more earned. The current structure integrates goals and conflicts cohesively, but ensuring that the audience feels the weight of the philosophical tension (personal freedom vs. collective loyalty) throughout the middle acts will make the band's reunion more impactful.
Themes

Analysis of the themes of the screenplay and how well they’re expressed.

Key Suggestions:
The analysis highlights that Freddie Mercury's personal struggles—with identity, prejudice, and fame—are not just background color but the engine of his artistic innovation. To improve the script, deepen the causal chain between his internal conflicts and the creation of specific songs or performance choices. For example, make his fear of rejection or his defiant embrace of his sexuality explicitly visible in the way he writes a lyric or stages a show. This will turn biographical events into dramatic action.
Logic & Inconsistencies

Highlights any contradictions, plot holes, or logic gaps that may confuse viewers.

Key Suggestions:
The analysis reveals several narrative strains that could undermine audience engagement. The 'Bismillah' motif—introduced as nonsense, then retroactively given a literal geographic answer—risks feeling like a puzzle-box trick rather than an earned emotional payoff. The Live Aid communication blockage by Paul Prenter defies plausibility given multiple stakeholders, and the brick-through-window scene lacks realistic consequence. Additionally, Brian May's narrator reliability is briefly undercut by the ironic cut from 'no conflict' to the Rockfield fight, creating tonal whiplash. To strengthen the script, ensure that reveals are seeded clearly and consistently, character actions have logical fallout, and narrator voice remains trustworthy or clearly marked as subjective.

Scene Analysis

All of your scenes analyzed individually and compared, so you can zero in on what to improve.

Scene-Level Percentile Chart
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Other Analyses

Writer Exec

This section looks at the extra spark — your story’s voice, style, world, and the moments that really stick. These insights might not change the bones of the script, but they can make it more original, more immersive, and way more memorable. It’s where things get fun, weird, and wonderfully you.

Unique Voice

Assesses the distinctiveness and personality of the writer's voice.

Key Suggestions:
The writer's voice excels at blending emotional introspection with vivid, scene-specific imagery and sharp dialogue. To further elevate the script, consider maintaining this balance between grand spectacle and intimate character moments, especially in scenes like the discovery of the old piano (Scene 20) where creative frustration and transformation are palpable. Leaning into the contrast between public performance and private vulnerability will deepen character arcs and emotional resonance. Avoid over-indulging in exposition; let music and visual metaphors carry subtext as effectively as the dialogue does.
Writer's Craft

Analyzes the writing to help the writer be aware of their skill and improve.

Key Suggestions:
The screenplay demonstrates strong character-driven storytelling and engaging dialogue, but to elevate its impact, focus on deepening character internal conflicts and motivations, especially for Freddie and his bandmates. Consider sharpening dialogue to enhance subtext and emotional resonance. Pacing in certain scenes could be tightened to maintain engagement, and a more consistent exploration of themes like identity, fame, and belonging would strengthen the narrative's emotional arc. Applying the recommended resources (e.g., 'Save the Cat!', 'The Anatomy of Story', studying 'Almost Famous' and 'Bohemian Rhapsody') and exercises (dialogue with hidden motivations, character monologues) will help refine craft and create a more resonant script.
Memorable Lines
Spotlights standout dialogue lines with emotional or thematic power.
Tropes
Highlights common or genre-specific tropes found in the script.
World Building

Evaluates the depth, consistency, and immersion of the story's world.

Key Suggestions:
The world-building across multiple decades and locales powerfully mirrors Freddie Mercury's internal conflicts—from the intimate tack-room where he composes 'Bohemian Rhapsody' to the chaotic Munich flat symbolizing his isolation. Use physical spaces not just as backdrops but as active metaphors for emotional states (e.g., the empty mansion echoing loneliness, the cramped market stall hinting at origins). Consider deepening the sensory details of the gay subculture and the AIDS crisis to underscore vulnerability and prejudice, ensuring the cultural specificity (Parsee heritage, 'Bismillah') isn't just ornamental but integral to Freddie's search for identity and belonging.
Correlations

Identifies patterns in scene scores.

Key Suggestions:
Your emotional peaks are strongest when you combine 'Emotional' tone with 'Intense' or 'Triumphant', but reflective scenes without conflict drop momentum. To maintain narrative tension even in quieter moments, inject a subtle conflict or a decision point tied to character growth. Your sarcastic dialogue is a standout strength—use it deliberately to sharpen exchanges in scenes that currently score lower for dialogue. Also, avoid letting purely reflective scenes stall character development by linking contemplation to a specific change or internal choice.
Loglines
Presents logline variations based on theme, genre, and hook.