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# PG SLUGLINE
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EXT DESERT COMPOUND – SYRIA – NIGHT
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INT FBI HEADQUARTERS – NEW YORK – MORNING
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EXT UNIVERSITY CAMPUS – DAY
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EXT UNDERCOVER VAN – DAY
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INT UNDERCOVER VAN – SAME TIME
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INT BAR – BACK BOOTH – LATER
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EXT DESERT ENCAMPMENT – NORTHERN SYRIA – NIGHT
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EXT UNIVERSITY PARKING LOT – EVENING
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EXT REMOTE IDAHO ROAD – DAY
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EXT TREE LINE – CONTINUOUS
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EXT IDAHO CABIN – CONTINUOUS
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INT IDAHO CABIN – DAY
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EXT TREE LINE – SAME TIME
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INT PRIVATE CHARTER PLANE – IN FLIGHT – DAY
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EXT MILITARY TRANSPORT AIRFIELD – NORTHERN SYRIA – DAY
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EXT AXUM, ETHIOPIA – AIRPORT – DAY
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EXT AXUM AIRPORT – LATER
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INT GUESTHOUSE – AXUM – SAME TIME
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EXT AXUM – MARKETPLACE – LATE AFTERNOON
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EXT CHAPEL COMPOUND – PERIMETER – SAME TIME
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EXT AXUM GUESTHOUSE – DUSK
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EXT AXUM ALLEYWAYS – NIGHT
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EXT ALLEY BEHIND THE CHAPEL – NIGHT
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EXT OVERWATCH – CONTINUOUS
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EXT OVERWATCH – SAME TIME
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EXT CHAPEL WALL – NIGHT
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INT CHAPEL – NARROW PASSAGE – NIGHT
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EXT CHAPEL WALL – SAME TIME
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EXT CHAPEL PERIMETER – NIGHT
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INT INNER CHAMBER ENTRY – SAME TIME
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EXT BREACH POINT – SAME TIME
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INT PASSAGE – APPROACHING INNER CHAMBER – CONTINUOUS
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INT INNER CHAMBER – NIGHT (MID-PAGE 46)
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INT INNER CHAMBER – CONTINUOUS
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INT INNER CHAMBER – CONTINUOUS (PAGE 48)
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INT INNER CHAMBER – EVACUATION CHAOS (PAGES 49–50)
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EXT CHAPEL COMPOUND – NIGHT (PAGE 53)
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EXT AXUM MARKET ALLEYS – NIGHT
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EXT NARROW BACK ALLEY – CONTINUOUS
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EXT CHAPEL PERIMETER – MEANWHILE (PAGE 55)
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INT TEMPORARY FIELD HOLDING ROOM – NIGHT (MID-PAGE 59)
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EXT DESERT ROAD JUST OUTSIDE AXUM – NIGHT
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INT HOLDING AREA – SAME TIME
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INT COMMAND TENT – SAME TIME (PAGE 63)
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EXT DESERT ROAD – NIGHT (MID-PAGE 65)
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EXT DESERT HIGHWAY – NIGHT
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EXT SAINT YARED MONASTERY – HILLTOP – NIGHT
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EXT MONASTERY ROAD – SAME TIME (PAGE 69)
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INT MONASTERY – STONE STAIRWELL – NIGHT (PAGE 72)
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INT SCROLL VAULT – CONTINUOUS
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INT LOWER PASSAGE – SAME TIME (PAGE 74)
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INT LOWER PASSAGE – SAME TIME
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INT SCROLL VAULT – NIGHT (MID-PAGE 78)
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INT SCROLL VAULT – CONTINUOUS (PAGE 80)
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INT SCROLL VAULT – COLLAPSE BEGINS (PAGE 81)
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EXT MONASTERY COURTYARD – NIGHT (PAGE 85)
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EXT MONASTERY COURTYARD – A FEW YARDS AWAY – CONTINUOUS
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EXT MONASTERY COURTYARD – CENTER – CONTINUOUS (PAGE 87)
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EXT MONASTERY COURTYARD – FAR SIDE – SAME TIME (PAGE 89)
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EXT MONASTERY COURTYARD – EXIT AREA – MOMENTS LATER (PAGE
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# PG SLUGLINE
1 1
EXT DESERT COMPOUND – SYRIA – NIGHT
EXT. DESERT COMPOUND – SYRIA – NIGHT
EXT. DESERT COMPOUND – SYRIA – NIGHT A cluster of low buildings under a moonless sky. A whisper-quiet BLACK HAWK drifts in low, nearly inaudible. Inside, FIVE SHADOWED OPERATORS prepare. INT. HELICOPTER – CONTINUOUS
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INT FBI HEADQUARTERS – NEW YORK – MORNING
INT. FBI HEADQUARTERS – NEW YORK – MORNING
INT. FBI HEADQUARTERS – NEW YORK – MORNING An image of FRANK SILVA fills a large monitor: military uniform, Special Forces tabs, commendations. Now older. Colder.
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EXT UNIVERSITY CAMPUS – DAY
EXT. UNIVERSITY CAMPUS – DAY
EXT. UNIVERSITY CAMPUS – DAY Students spill from buildings. Leafy, peaceful. A banner reads: GUEST LECTURE – DR. NANCY BELL – BIBLICAL HISTORY & ARCHAEOLOGY. Inside, a woman steps onto the stage…
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EXT UNDERCOVER VAN – DAY
EXT. UNDERCOVER VAN – DAY
EXT. UNDERCOVER VAN – DAY A beat-up contractor van sits across the street from a grimy bar. Inside, BURK wires up MARTINEZ with a body mic. BURK
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INT UNDERCOVER VAN – SAME TIME
INT. UNDERCOVER VAN – SAME TIME
INT. UNDERCOVER VAN – SAME TIME Burk listens through the headset. BURK Idaho? He wasn’t supposed to meet the whole crew.
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INT BAR – BACK BOOTH – LATER
INT. BAR – BACK BOOTH – LATER
INT. BAR – BACK BOOTH – LATER Jessie finishes his beer. JESSIE Wheels up at nine. Bring a bag. Nothing fancy.
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EXT DESERT ENCAMPMENT – NORTHERN SYRIA – NIGHT
EXT. DESERT ENCAMPMENT – NORTHERN SYRIA – NIGHT
EXT. DESERT ENCAMPMENT – NORTHERN SYRIA – NIGHT Wind sweeps across a barren camp. A lantern glows inside a canvas tent. Inside, FATTAH, 30s, gaunt, eyes too old for his face, kneels before a wooden crate marked in Arabic.
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EXT UNIVERSITY PARKING LOT – EVENING
EXT. UNIVERSITY PARKING LOT – EVENING
EXT. UNIVERSITY PARKING LOT – EVENING Nancy exits the building with a leather bag slung over her shoulder. Silva leans against his car, waiting. SILVA You’re certain?
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EXT REMOTE IDAHO ROAD – DAY
EXT. REMOTE IDAHO ROAD – DAY
EXT. REMOTE IDAHO ROAD – DAY A rental SUV bumps along a pine-lined road. Inside: Jeannie at the wheel, Ismail navigating, Burk monitoring GPS pings from Martinez’s burner phone. ISMAIL
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EXT TREE LINE – CONTINUOUS
EXT. TREE LINE – CONTINUOUS
EXT. TREE LINE – CONTINUOUS Jeannie, hidden behind brush, steadies binoculars. JEANNIE Lock on targets. Ismail raises a long-range lens camera, snapping silent
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EXT IDAHO CABIN – CONTINUOUS
EXT. IDAHO CABIN – CONTINUOUS
EXT. IDAHO CABIN – CONTINUOUS Silva opens the cabin door. SILVA Inside. Phones off. Bags down. Jessie and Ruben enter.
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INT IDAHO CABIN – DAY
INT. IDAHO CABIN – DAY
INT. IDAHO CABIN – DAY Dim interior. Silva closes the blinds. Jessie dumps maps on the table — Ethiopia, Axum region, topographic lines drawn. Nancy opens her bag, pulling out notes, photos of the Chapel
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EXT TREE LINE – SAME TIME
EXT. TREE LINE – SAME TIME
EXT. TREE LINE – SAME TIME Jeannie lowers her binoculars, unsettled. JEANNIE Ethiopia. Everything points to Ethiopia.
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INT PRIVATE CHARTER PLANE – IN FLIGHT – DAY
INT. PRIVATE CHARTER PLANE – IN FLIGHT – DAY
INT. PRIVATE CHARTER PLANE – IN FLIGHT – DAY The hum of engines. Jeannie sits across from SAC SADECKI on a video call, turbulence flickering the screen. SADECKI (ON SCREEN) You’re telling me Silva’s entire
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EXT MILITARY TRANSPORT AIRFIELD – NORTHERN SYRIA – DAY
EXT. MILITARY TRANSPORT AIRFIELD – NORTHERN SYRIA – DAY
EXT. MILITARY TRANSPORT AIRFIELD – NORTHERN SYRIA – DAY Wind kicks up dust as a transport plane refuels. Fattah stands near the boarding ramp, clutching a worn bag. He stares at the ground, lost in thought — or dread. The COMMANDER approaches.
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EXT AXUM, ETHIOPIA – AIRPORT – DAY
EXT. AXUM, ETHIOPIA – AIRPORT – DAY
EXT. AXUM, ETHIOPIA – AIRPORT – DAY Blinding sun. Dust rising. A commercial plane taxis in. Passengers disembark — among them: FRANK SILVA, hat pulled low.
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EXT AXUM AIRPORT – LATER
EXT. AXUM AIRPORT – LATER
EXT. AXUM AIRPORT – LATER A second plane lands. Jeannie, Ismail, and Burk descend the steps, scanning the surroundings with trained eyes. Heat beats down. Dust swirls around their feet.
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INT GUESTHOUSE – AXUM – SAME TIME
INT. GUESTHOUSE – AXUM – SAME TIME
INT. GUESTHOUSE – AXUM – SAME TIME The room is cramped, simple, and overheated. Silva’s team lays out minimal gear: rope, radios, compact weapons wrapped in cloth to conceal them. Nancy spreads a cloth map on the floor.
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EXT AXUM – MARKETPLACE – LATE AFTERNOON
EXT. AXUM – MARKETPLACE – LATE AFTERNOON
EXT. AXUM – MARKETPLACE – LATE AFTERNOON Crowds bustle between vendors selling incense, textiles, carved crosses. FATTAH steps off a bus — thinner, tired, but alert. He blends into the crowd, adjusting his bag strap, absorbing
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EXT CHAPEL COMPOUND – PERIMETER – SAME TIME
EXT. CHAPEL COMPOUND – PERIMETER – SAME TIME
EXT. CHAPEL COMPOUND – PERIMETER – SAME TIME A car pulls up. Jeannie steps out along with Tesfaye and her team. Jeannie takes in the compound — her instincts sharpening.
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EXT AXUM GUESTHOUSE – DUSK
EXT. AXUM GUESTHOUSE – DUSK
EXT. AXUM GUESTHOUSE – DUSK Inside a dimly lit guesthouse room, Silva checks a gear bag: gloves, compact pistols (unloaded — they want stealth), rope, radios. Jessie stretches, pulling on black clothing.
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EXT AXUM ALLEYWAYS – NIGHT
EXT. AXUM ALLEYWAYS – NIGHT
EXT. AXUM ALLEYWAYS – NIGHT Fattah moves through winding alleys under the cover of darkness. He surveys intersections, guards, sightlines — calculating routes with a tactician’s precision.
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EXT ALLEY BEHIND THE CHAPEL – NIGHT
EXT. ALLEY BEHIND THE CHAPEL – NIGHT
EXT. ALLEY BEHIND THE CHAPEL – NIGHT Silva’s team emerges from shadows — four figures moving like ghosts. Silva in front. Jessie behind him.
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EXT OVERWATCH – CONTINUOUS
EXT. OVERWATCH – CONTINUOUS
EXT. OVERWATCH – CONTINUOUS A faint grind reaches Jeannie’s ears. JEANNIE They’re breaching. Tesfaye whispers urgently:
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EXT OVERWATCH – SAME TIME
EXT. OVERWATCH – SAME TIME
EXT. OVERWATCH – SAME TIME Jeannie lowers the binoculars, tension sharpening every muscle. JEANNIE They’re seconds away.
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EXT CHAPEL WALL – NIGHT
EXT. CHAPEL WALL – NIGHT
EXT. CHAPEL WALL – NIGHT Jessie’s jack finally gives. A stone block shifts outward — enough to create a crawlspace. Silva pulls the block free with slow, practiced precision. A cold draft slips out from inside — unnatural, almost
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INT CHAPEL – NARROW PASSAGE – NIGHT
INT. CHAPEL – NARROW PASSAGE – NIGHT
INT. CHAPEL – NARROW PASSAGE – NIGHT Jessie leads the way down a dark stone corridor. His flashlight beam flickers — once, twice — as if resisting the darkness rather than illuminating it.
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EXT CHAPEL WALL – SAME TIME
EXT. CHAPEL WALL – SAME TIME
EXT. CHAPEL WALL – SAME TIME Jeannie signals Tesfaye. JEANNIE Breach team — on me. Now. They slip through the widened gap one by one.
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EXT CHAPEL PERIMETER – NIGHT
EXT. CHAPEL PERIMETER – NIGHT
EXT. CHAPEL PERIMETER – NIGHT Fattah scales a low retaining wall and lands softly inside the compound. He freezes — hearing chanting from within the chapel. He whispers:
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INT INNER CHAMBER ENTRY – SAME TIME
INT. INNER CHAMBER ENTRY – SAME TIME
INT. INNER CHAMBER ENTRY – SAME TIME Silva steps closer to the veiled inner doorway. Nancy reaches out and touches his arm — first time she’s ever initiated contact. NANCY
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EXT BREACH POINT – SAME TIME
EXT. BREACH POINT – SAME TIME
EXT. BREACH POINT – SAME TIME Fattah reaches the hole in the wall. He kneels, touches the displaced stones, and bows his head briefly — part reverence, part dread. FATTAH
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INT PASSAGE – APPROACHING INNER CHAMBER – CONTINUOUS
INT. PASSAGE – APPROACHING INNER CHAMBER – CONTINUOUS
INT. PASSAGE – APPROACHING INNER CHAMBER – CONTINUOUS Jeannie hears Nancy’s outburst — barely muffled, but clear. JEANNIE That’s Bell. They’re in the relic room.
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INT INNER CHAMBER – NIGHT (MID-PAGE 46)
INT. INNER CHAMBER – NIGHT (MID-PAGE 46)
INT. INNER CHAMBER – NIGHT (MID-PAGE 46) Freeze. Jeannie stands in the doorway, weapon raised, stance steady and lethal.
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INT INNER CHAMBER – CONTINUOUS
INT. INNER CHAMBER – CONTINUOUS
INT. INNER CHAMBER – CONTINUOUS The lights flicker. Dust swirls like a storm contained within the room. The monk shouts over the rising noise:
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INT INNER CHAMBER – CONTINUOUS (PAGE 48)
INT. INNER CHAMBER – CONTINUOUS (PAGE 48)
INT. INNER CHAMBER – CONTINUOUS (PAGE 48) The veil covering the Ark flutters violently — as though wind rages beneath it. Fattah and Ruben slam into a wall — Ruben goes limp.
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INT INNER CHAMBER – EVACUATION CHAOS (PAGES 49–50)
INT. INNER CHAMBER – EVACUATION CHAOS (PAGES 49–50)
INT. INNER CHAMBER – EVACUATION CHAOS (PAGES 49–50) Everyone scrambles at once. Jeannie grabs Martinez. JEANNIE Eddie! Get up! MOVE!
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EXT CHAPEL COMPOUND – NIGHT (PAGE 53)
EXT. CHAPEL COMPOUND – NIGHT (PAGE 53)
EXT. CHAPEL COMPOUND – NIGHT (PAGE 53) The rear breach erupts with fleeing bodies. Jeannie bursts out first with Martinez in tow. Tesfaye’s officers fan around her, weapons raised. TESFAYE
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EXT AXUM MARKET ALLEYS – NIGHT
EXT. AXUM MARKET ALLEYS – NIGHT
EXT. AXUM MARKET ALLEYS – NIGHT Jeannie and Ismail sprint through narrow passageways. Lanterns swing. Vendors shout in confusion as people scatter. ISMAIL Silva and Jessie split!
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EXT NARROW BACK ALLEY – CONTINUOUS
EXT. NARROW BACK ALLEY – CONTINUOUS
EXT. NARROW BACK ALLEY – CONTINUOUS Silva skids to a stop. A dead end. He turns—
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EXT CHAPEL PERIMETER – MEANWHILE (PAGE 55)
EXT. CHAPEL PERIMETER – MEANWHILE (PAGE 55)
EXT. CHAPEL PERIMETER – MEANWHILE (PAGE 55) Nancy wanders the compound in a daze. Tesfaye approaches carefully. TESFAYE Madam… you must come with me.
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INT TEMPORARY FIELD HOLDING ROOM – NIGHT (MID-PAGE 59)
INT. TEMPORARY FIELD HOLDING ROOM – NIGHT (MID-PAGE 59)
INT. TEMPORARY FIELD HOLDING ROOM – NIGHT (MID-PAGE 59) Jessie sits cuffed to a metal chair. Sweaty. Exhausted. Dust still caked in his hair. A single bulb flickers overhead. Jeannie enters with Ismail, calm but radiating controlled
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EXT DESERT ROAD JUST OUTSIDE AXUM – NIGHT
EXT. DESERT ROAD JUST OUTSIDE AXUM – NIGHT
EXT. DESERT ROAD JUST OUTSIDE AXUM – NIGHT A lone vehicle bumps along a rough road. Inside — Silva drives, jaw clenched, eyes feverish. Nancy sits in the passenger seat, shivering, muttering to
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INT HOLDING AREA – SAME TIME
INT. HOLDING AREA – SAME TIME
INT. HOLDING AREA – SAME TIME Nancy is now in a clean interrogation room, wrapped in a blanket, rocking slowly. Tesfaye’s medical aide monitors her. Nancy whispers in a trance-like loop:
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INT COMMAND TENT – SAME TIME (PAGE 63)
INT. COMMAND TENT – SAME TIME (PAGE 63)
INT. COMMAND TENT – SAME TIME (PAGE 63) Jeannie gets a comm update from Tesfaye’s officer. OFFICER (V.O.) Agents, we have visual on Silva’s vehicle. Heading northeast toward
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EXT DESERT ROAD – NIGHT (MID-PAGE 65)
EXT. DESERT ROAD – NIGHT (MID-PAGE 65)
EXT. DESERT ROAD – NIGHT (MID-PAGE 65) Silva stands outside the stopped vehicle, weapon leveled at Fattah, who remains motionless in the road — hands at his sides, expression calm but unreadable. Nancy trembles behind the open passenger door.
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EXT DESERT HIGHWAY – NIGHT
EXT. DESERT HIGHWAY – NIGHT
EXT. DESERT HIGHWAY – NIGHT A convoy of two Ethiopian military trucks and Jeannie’s lead SUV speeds through the barren desert, headlights slicing the night. Inside, Jeannie studies the monastery coordinates on a
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EXT SAINT YARED MONASTERY – HILLTOP – NIGHT
EXT. SAINT YARED MONASTERY – HILLTOP – NIGHT
EXT. SAINT YARED MONASTERY – HILLTOP – NIGHT A towering stone structure carved into the mountainside. Ancient. Majestic. Silent. TORCHLIGHT flickers. Three MONASTERY GUARDS stand at the gate, spears and old
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EXT MONASTERY ROAD – SAME TIME (PAGE 69)
EXT. MONASTERY ROAD – SAME TIME (PAGE 69)
EXT. MONASTERY ROAD – SAME TIME (PAGE 69) Jeannie’s convoy crests the final hill — monastery in sight. ISMAIL Shots fired!
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INT MONASTERY – STONE STAIRWELL – NIGHT (PAGE 72)
INT. MONASTERY – STONE STAIRWELL – NIGHT (PAGE 72)
INT. MONASTERY – STONE STAIRWELL – NIGHT (PAGE 72) Silva drags Nancy down the steep, narrow steps lit only by wall torches. Shadows stretch long across the carved stone. Nancy trembles as she looks ahead.
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INT SCROLL VAULT – CONTINUOUS
INT. SCROLL VAULT – CONTINUOUS
INT. SCROLL VAULT – CONTINUOUS The chamber is breathtaking. Rows of ancient scrolls arranged in clay tubes line the walls. A central altar holds a large leather-bound manuscript.
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INT LOWER PASSAGE – SAME TIME (PAGE 74)
INT. LOWER PASSAGE – SAME TIME (PAGE 74)
INT. LOWER PASSAGE – SAME TIME (PAGE 74) Jeannie and Ismail barrel down the stairwell, weapons ready. ISMAIL They’re close. Voices echoing ahead.
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INT LOWER PASSAGE – SAME TIME
INT. LOWER PASSAGE – SAME TIME
INT. LOWER PASSAGE – SAME TIME Jeannie hears Nancy’s scream. JEANNIE That’s Bell. They found the vault. Ismail nods.
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INT SCROLL VAULT – NIGHT (MID-PAGE 78)
INT. SCROLL VAULT – NIGHT (MID-PAGE 78)
INT. SCROLL VAULT – NIGHT (MID-PAGE 78) BANG. Jeannie’s shot SMACKS into the stone inches from Silva’s hand as he dives for the cylinder. He rolls, grabs it, and scrambles behind a pillar.
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INT SCROLL VAULT – CONTINUOUS (PAGE 80)
INT. SCROLL VAULT – CONTINUOUS (PAGE 80)
INT. SCROLL VAULT – CONTINUOUS (PAGE 80) Jeannie reaches the cylinder first. She pulls it close, shielding it with her body. Fattah stands ready, knife raised. Ismail keeps his weapon trained on Silva.
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INT SCROLL VAULT – COLLAPSE BEGINS (PAGE 81)
INT. SCROLL VAULT – COLLAPSE BEGINS (PAGE 81)
INT. SCROLL VAULT – COLLAPSE BEGINS (PAGE 81) A low, grinding sound — deep, ancient — echoes through the vault. One of the overhead stone slabs shifts a full inch. Nancy screams.
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EXT MONASTERY COURTYARD – NIGHT (PAGE 85)
EXT. MONASTERY COURTYARD – NIGHT (PAGE 85)
EXT. MONASTERY COURTYARD – NIGHT (PAGE 85) Dust erupts from the stairwell as Jeannie, Silva, Ismail, Fattah, and Nancy stumble out into the open air. Monks and guards rush forward, chanting frantically, trying to stabilize the panicked scene.
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EXT MONASTERY COURTYARD – A FEW YARDS AWAY – CONTINUOUS
EXT. MONASTERY COURTYARD – A FEW YARDS AWAY – CONTINUOUS
EXT. MONASTERY COURTYARD – A FEW YARDS AWAY – CONTINUOUS Monks argue in rapid Amharic. Guards surround Nancy cautiously. Nancy clutches her head, rocking. NANCY (WHISPERING)
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EXT MONASTERY COURTYARD – CENTER – CONTINUOUS (PAGE 87)
EXT. MONASTERY COURTYARD – CENTER – CONTINUOUS (PAGE 87)
EXT. MONASTERY COURTYARD – CENTER – CONTINUOUS (PAGE 87) Silva, now pinned under Ismail’s knee, snarls: SILVA You think taking me in changes anything? You think you can bury
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EXT MONASTERY COURTYARD – FAR SIDE – SAME TIME (PAGE 89)
EXT. MONASTERY COURTYARD – FAR SIDE – SAME TIME (PAGE 89)
EXT. MONASTERY COURTYARD – FAR SIDE – SAME TIME (PAGE 89) Nancy is led gently by two monks toward a sheltered area. She looks hollow, haunted — but calm for the first time. NANCY (SOFTLY) I heard it… and it judged us…
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EXT MONASTERY COURTYARD – EXIT AREA – MOMENTS LATER (PAGE
EXT. MONASTERY COURTYARD – EXIT AREA – MOMENTS LATER (PAGE
EXT. MONASTERY COURTYARD – EXIT AREA – MOMENTS LATER (PAGE 90) Silva is marched toward a waiting truck, hands bound. He turns his head toward Jeannie, eyes burning with certainty.
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Ark of the Covenant

An FBI agent races to stop a charismatic ex-Special Forces mercenary from stealing the Ark of the Covenant — a relic that proves to be more than myth — before its supernatural power ignites a global religious war.

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Overview

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Unique Selling Point

This script uniquely blends military thriller precision with supernatural religious mystery, creating a modern-day Indiana Jones story with special forces tactics and FBI procedural elements. The central premise—rogue operators hunting the actual Ark of the Covenant—combines high-stakes action with genuine theological weight, appealing to both action audiences and those interested in ancient mysteries. The script's strongest element is its atmospheric handling of the supernatural, treating the Ark with genuine reverence and creating palpable tension when characters approach it.

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Average Score: 7.4
Key Takeaways
For the Writer:
To elevate the script, focus on deepening character arcs for secondary figures like Nancy Bell, Fattah, and Martinez by adding specific backstory beats and emotional payoffs to make their motivations more nuanced and relatable. Additionally, clarify the supernatural mechanics of the Ark early on with consistent rules to avoid deus-ex-machina moments, ensuring the mystical elements heighten tension rather than undermine it, and strengthen thematic cohesion around faith and obsession for a more immersive and resonant narrative.
For Executives:
The script offers solid commercial value as a mid-budget action-thriller with franchise potential, blending FBI procedural and Indiana Jones-style adventure to appeal to broad audiences, but it carries risks from underdeveloped characters and inconsistent supernatural rules that could lead to audience disengagement or criticism for lacking depth. Market perception is positive for its high-concept premise and cinematic set pieces, yet it may struggle in a crowded genre without refinements to avoid feeling generic or unresolved.
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Story Facts
Genres:
Action 25% Crime 30% Drama 35% Fantasy 20% Thriller 40%

Setting: Modern day, Various locations including Syria, the United States, and Ethiopia, primarily focusing on a monastery and ancient sites.

Themes: The Pursuit of Forbidden Knowledge and Its Sacred Protection, The Corrupting Influence of Obsession, The Morality of Sacred Artifacts and Their Guardians, The Nature of Faith and Belief, The Intersection of Military Operations and Sacred Quests, The Burden of Choice and Consequence

Conflict & Stakes: The main conflict revolves around the race to find the Ark of the Covenant, with Silva's mercenary group clashing against Jeannie and the FBI, raising stakes of morality, legality, and the potential for international incident.

Mood: Tense and suspenseful, with moments of awe and urgency.

Standout Features:

  • Unique Hook: The quest for the Ark of the Covenant, a legendary artifact with deep historical and religious significance.
  • Major Twist: The revelation that the Ark's location is tied to a prophecy and that its guardians are actively protecting it.
  • Distinctive Setting: The juxtaposition of modern military operations with ancient historical sites in Ethiopia.
  • Innovative Ideas: Exploration of the moral implications of treasure hunting and the consequences of disturbing sacred sites.
  • Genre Blend: Combines elements of action, thriller, and archaeological adventure.

Comparable Scripts: Sicario, The A-Team, The Da Vinci Code, 24, Lethal Weapon, The Hurt Locker, National Treasure, The Bourne Identity, Indiana Jones and the Last Crusade

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1. Emotional Impact (Script Level)
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Your current Emotional Impact (Script Level) score: 7.5
Expected gain: ~5% closer to an "all Highly Recommends" score
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2. Visual Impact (Script Level)
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Your current Visual Impact (Script Level) score: 8.0
Expected gain: ~4% closer to an "all Highly Recommends" score
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3. Theme (Script Level)
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Your current Theme (Script Level) score: 7.8
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Overall Score: 7.64
Key Suggestions:
To strengthen the script's creative impact, prioritize deepening the character arcs of secondary characters like Martinez and Nancy by incorporating more backstory and emotional depth, which will enhance relatability and audience engagement. Additionally, refine pacing in key scenes to maintain tension and ensure supernatural elements are clearly integrated with character motivations, drawing from the analyses to create a more cohesive and emotionally resonant narrative.
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Big-picture feedback on the story’s clarity, stakes, cohesion, and engagement.

Key Suggestions:
To enhance the script's creative potential, focus on reducing predictability by incorporating innovative plot twists and deeper character backstories, particularly for secondary characters like Fattah and Nancy. Strengthen dialogue to make it more dynamic and emotionally resonant, ensuring it reflects individual motivations and elevates key confrontations, ultimately making the narrative more original and engaging from a craft perspective.
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Characters

Explores the depth, clarity, and arc of the main and supporting characters.

Key Suggestions:
The character analysis highlights that while the main characters like Silva and Jeannie have solid foundations, the script can be significantly improved by deepening emotional arcs and internal conflicts across the board. Incorporating backstories, vulnerabilities, and moments of doubt will add complexity, making the narrative more engaging and thematically rich, ultimately enhancing audience empathy and the story's overall craft.
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Emotional Analysis

Breaks down the emotional journey of the audience across the script.

Key Suggestions:
The script's emotional landscape is heavily skewed toward suspense and fear, which builds tension effectively but risks audience fatigue due to limited variety and sustained high intensity. To improve, incorporate more emotional contrasts, such as moments of vulnerability, hope, or dark humor, and deepen character empathy by exploring personal stakes and sub-emotions, making the story more relatable and dynamically engaging from a craft perspective.
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Goals and Philosophical Conflict

Evaluates character motivations, obstacles, and sources of tension throughout the plot.

Key Suggestions:
To improve the script creatively, emphasize the philosophical conflicts like Knowledge vs. Ignorance by integrating them more deeply into character arcs and dialogue, ensuring Jeannie's moral evolution feels authentic and drives the narrative. This will enhance thematic resonance and avoid unresolved elements feeling abrupt, making the story more cohesive and emotionally impactful for audiences.
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Themes

Analysis of the themes of the screenplay and how well they’re expressed.

Key Suggestions:
The script excels in its primary theme of pursuing forbidden knowledge, creating a compelling blend of action and supernatural elements, but could benefit from deeper exploration of underrepresented themes like 'The Burden of Choice and Consequence' to add emotional depth and complexity to characters such as Martinez and Jeannie. By balancing theme strengths through more nuanced character arcs and moral dilemmas, the writer can enhance pacing and audience engagement, making the story more resonant and avoiding a reliance on plot-driven spectacle alone.
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Logic & Inconsistencies

Highlights any contradictions, plot holes, or logic gaps that may confuse viewers.

Key Suggestions:
From a creative standpoint, the script's inconsistencies, particularly in character development and plot logic, undermine its potential. To improve, focus on making character arcs more gradual and believable, such as building Silva's obsession early on, and resolve plot holes like Fattah's unexplained infiltration to enhance immersion and authenticity. Streamlining redundant expositions will also tighten the narrative flow, ensuring a more engaging and cohesive story that better serves the high-stakes adventure genre.
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Scene Analysis

All of your scenes analyzed individually and compared, so you can zero in on what to improve.

Scene-Level Percentile Chart
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Other Analyses

Writer Exec

This section looks at the extra spark — your story’s voice, style, world, and the moments that really stick. These insights might not change the bones of the script, but they can make it more original, more immersive, and way more memorable. It’s where things get fun, weird, and wonderfully you.

Unique Voice

Assesses the distinctiveness and personality of the writer's voice.

Key Suggestions:
The script's voice is a strong asset, with its terse dialogue and suspenseful pacing effectively building tension and driving the narrative. To enhance this, focus on varying the rhythm of scenes to include moments of quiet reflection or character development, which could deepen emotional stakes and prevent the high-octane action from feeling repetitive, ultimately making the story more resonant and engaging for audiences.
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Writer's Craft

Analyzes the writing to help the writer be aware of their skill and improve.

Key Suggestions:
To refine your screenplay, concentrate on enhancing dialogue with deeper subtext to reveal character motivations, developing internal conflicts for richer emotional depth, and improving pacing to better balance high-action sequences with character-driven moments, ultimately making the narrative more compelling and resonant.
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Memorable Lines
Spotlights standout dialogue lines with emotional or thematic power.
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Tropes
Highlights common or genre-specific tropes found in the script.
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World Building

Evaluates the depth, consistency, and immersion of the story's world.

Key Suggestions:
The script's world building is a strong asset, effectively merging diverse environments and cultural elements to heighten tension and thematic depth, but to elevate the craft, focus on deepening character interactions with these elements—such as giving more nuanced portrayals of cultural conflicts and integrating the supernatural more organically—to avoid feeling formulaic and enhance emotional resonance, making the story more immersive and memorable for audiences.
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Correlations

Identifies patterns in scene scores.

Key Suggestions:
The script excels in high-stakes thriller elements that drive plot momentum, but opportunities for improvement lie in bolstering early character development to engage audiences sooner and ensuring consistent emotional depth across all scenes. By enriching dialogue as a tool for character evolution and intensifying conflict in lower-stakes moments, the writer can create a more balanced narrative that maintains pacing and deepens audience investment without relying solely on action.
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Loglines
Presents logline variations based on theme, genre, and hook.
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