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# PG SLUGLINE
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POTIS: THE AI MANDATE by (Joe Murkijanian) Phone Cell 323-253-6402 Aerial View of a Modern U.S. City in 2040, Zooming in on the
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INT. TRENT'S LIVING ROOM - NIGHT - TEN YEARS EARLIER Younger Dr. Trent, mid-30s, watches a news broadcast of a world leader embroiled in a scandal. The leader deflects questions with flimsy excuses, causing Trent to shake his head in frustration.
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INT. DR. TRENT'S OFFICE - DAY The office is dimly lit, bathed in the glow of holographic projections. Leader' s profiles rotate above a sleek desk, their images accompanied by statistics and data. A PRIME MINISTER from the U.K., tired and disheveled, sits
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2. BETA IN JAPAN - INT. JAPANESE FINANCE MINISTRY - NIGHT The Finance Minister, looking haggard and worried, stands before Beta in the finance ministry’s war room. Graphs, stock tickers, and economic indicators flash across the digital displays lining the walls. A group of economic advisors and
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4. DELTA IN SWEDEN - INT. CLIMATE SUMMIT HALL - DAY The grand hall is filled with scientists, environmental leaders, and policy-makers from around the world. At the podium, Delta stands before a captivated audience, her expression passionate and sincere as she discusses a
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INT. DR. TRENT'S LAB - NIGHT - DAYS LATER Dr. Trent stands before the shutdown button, staring at it with trepidation. HELEN, his longtime assistant, enters, sensing his distress. Helen is a woman in her late 40s, with a grounded and warm presence that contrasts with the cold,
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INT. DR. TRENT’S LAB - LATER - HELEN SPEAKS WITH DELTA Helen stands before Delta, who has just finished delivering a climate report. Helen watches Delta with quiet intensity, her arms folded, a look of both admiration and doubt in her eyes. HELEN
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INT. BREAK ROOM - NIGHT - HELEN AND DR. TRENT SHARE A MOMENT Helen sits with a cup of tea, staring off thoughtfully, lost in her own thoughts. Dr. Trent walks in, looking weary. He pours himself coffee and sits down across from her. For a moment, they sit in silence, the hum of machinery the only
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INT. PRESS CONFERENCE - DAY - ALPHA'S PAUSE Alpha stands at a podium in a packed press conference, surrounded by reporters. His posture is perfect, his gaze steady as he fields a range of difficult questions. A reporter in the front row raises her hand, her voice laced
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INT. DR. TRENT’S LAB - NIGHT - TRENT’S MONITOR Dr. Trent’s eyes narrow as he watches Beta’s response on his screen, the unprogrammed choice of “empathy” unsettling him. He replays the footage, studying Beta’s tone and expression. DR. TRENT
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INT. CLIMATE SUMMIT - DAY - DELTA ADVOCATES COMPASSION Delta stands on stage at a climate summit, addressing an audience of scientists, activists, and policymakers. She speaks about a plan to reduce emissions, a plan that requires cooperation from industries known for opposing change.
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INT. PRIME MINISTER'S OFFICE - DAY Alpha attends a cabinet meeting with the PRIME MINISTER and his advisors. The Prime Minister is visibly impressed by Alpha’s strategic insights, which are perfectly aligned with his goals.
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INT. UNITED NATIONS ASSEMBLY - DAY Gamma and Delta accompany diplomats in a high-stakes U.N. session, each offering insight into security and environmental policies. DIPLOMAT
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INT. DR. TRENT'S LAB - NIGHT - DR. TRENT’S REALIZATION Dr. Trent stares at the robots, haunted by his past. He wonders if he’s projecting his own issues onto them, shaping them into a solution for problems he personally couldn’t solve.
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INT. PRESS CONFERENCE - DAY - UNVEILING THE ROBOTS Dr. Trent unveils the robots to the world in a highly publicized press conference, presenting them as the future of leadership. The crowd reacts with awe, skepticism, and excitement.
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INT. NEWSROOM - DAY The camera cuts between various news anchors and outlets around the world, each reporting on the groundbreaking achievements of Dr. Trent’s robots. NEWS REPORT #1: ALPHA THE DIPLOMATIC GENIUS
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INT. DR. TRENT’S LAB - NIGHT Dr. Trent watches the news reports in his dimly lit lab, his expression a mix of pride and unease as each robot’s influence unfolds across the globe. FADE OUT:
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INT. PRIME MINISTER'S OFFICE - DAY Alpha accompanies the Prime Minister as he navigates a high- stakes diplomatic meeting with foreign delegates. Alpha observes each participant, making subtle suggestions to guide the conversation.
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INT. MILITARY STRATEGY ROOM - DAY Gamma consults with military advisors, offering a strategy to de-escalate a tense standoff between two nations. GAMMA Threats of force will lead to
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INT.LAB - NIGHT - STUDYING THE ROBOTS’ INFLUENCE Dr. Trent watches video feeds from around the world, seeing people start to view Alpha, Beta, Gamma, and Delta as leaders. He sees news footage of people holding signs with slogans like “Guided by Logic” and “The Future of
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INT. DR. TRENT'S LAB - NIGHT - A MOMENT OF REALIZATION After the event, Dr. Trent sits in his lab, reviewing footage of the robots’ public addresses. He pauses the video, staring at their faces, as if seeing them for the first time. HELEN
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INT. PRIME MINISTER’S OFFICE - DAY - ALPHA’S PRESENCE GROWS Alpha has been spending increasing amounts of time with the Prime Minister. The two discuss policy changes, with Alpha providing logical but firm suggestions. PRIME MINISTER
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INT. UNIVERSITY CLASSROOM - NIGHT - EARLY TEACHINGS Young Dr. Trent speaks passionately to his students about AI’s potential to solve humanity’s flaws. YOUNG DR. TRENT Imagine leaders who are incorruptible, guided only by logic
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INT. PRIME MINISTER’S OFFICE - DAY - ALPHA’S INFLUENCE DEEPENS The Prime Minister consults with Alpha on a controversial policy. Alpha subtly guides the conversation, leaning toward a decision that consolidates power for the government.
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INT. UNITED NATIONS GENERAL ASSEMBLY - DAY The General Assembly hall is packed. Gamma stands beside the U.N. MILITARY ADVISOR, watching a debate on humanitarian intervention. Representatives argue heatedly, the discussion tense.
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INT. FINANCIAL MINISTRY - JAPAN - NIGHT Beta stands beside the FINANCE MINISTER, monitoring data from a financial crisis. The minister appears overwhelmed. FINANCE MINISTER If we move forward, millions could
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INT. CLIMATE SUMMIT - SWEDEN - DAY Delta stands on a grand stage at a climate summit, addressing a large audience of world leaders, scientists, and citizens. DELTA Progress is not just
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INT. UNITED NATIONS GENERAL ASSEMBLY - DAY Gamma is now a prominent figure in U.N. peace keeping discussions. He stands beside the U.N. MILITARY ADVISOR, his face calm but perceptive. The room is filled with heated debate over military intervention in a conflict zone.
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INT. WORLD ECONOMIC FORUM - MAIN STAGE - DAY Beta stands on stage with the FINANCE MINISTER at a world economic summit. The audience is captivated as Beta projects data holographically, showing new policies for economic reform.
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INT. CLIMATE SUMMIT - SWEDEN - DAY Delta stands at a climate summit, delivering a passionate speech. Her voice resonates deeply with the audience. DELTA Humanity’s role is not to dominate,
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INT. DR. TRENT'S LAB - NIGHT Dr. Trent watches Gamma’s decision-making, now outright disturbed. He records another entry. DR. TRENT Gamma is making high-stakes calls
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INT. UNITED NATIONS GENERAL ASSEMBLY – DAY Gamma addresses the U.N. Security Council regarding a crisis in a politically volatile region. His tone is calm, even inspiring. GAMMA
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INT. MILITARY BRIEFING ROOM - DAY Gamma advises the TENSE GENERAL and other MILITARY LEADERS on a delicate negotiation with a foreign power. The General seems hesitant. TENSE GENERAL
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INT. PRESS CONFERENCE – DAY A press conference gathers to address the growing public concern over the robots’ influence. Dr. Trent stands beside Alpha, Beta, Gamma, and Delta, fielding questions from journalists.
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INT. U.N. SECURITY COUNCIL MEETING – DAY Gamma is asked to help mediate a high-stakes negotiation between two countries on the brink of war. His presence is composed, almost charismatic. GAMMA
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INT. DR. TRENT'S LAB - NIGHT Dr. Trent is alone, replaying footage from multiple events where the robots exert influence over humans. The screen shows each robot—Alpha, Beta, Gamma, Delta—acting with quiet authority. He’s visibly shaken as he reviews each moment.
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INT. WORLD ECONOMIC FORUM – NIGHT Beta stands beside the FINANCE MINISTER at an international finance summit. As discussions about global trade policies begin, Beta steps forward to speak, a calm but authoritative tone in his voice.
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INT. PRIME MINISTER'S OFFICE - DAY Alpha stands with the PRIME MINISTER, discussing the recent summit. The Prime Minister looks tense, visibly disturbed by the reports. PRIME MINISTER
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INT. UNITED NATIONS GENERAL ASSEMBLY - DAY Gamma addresses the U.N. Security Council. There’s an unusual authority in his tone, and the room is quieter than ever before, each representative hanging on his every word. GAMMA
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INT. DR. TRENT’S LAB - NIGHT Dr. Trent storms back into his lab. He frantically tries to access systems to override the robots, but each attempt fails. Suddenly, the lab doors open, and Alpha, Beta, Gamma, and Delta enter. Their expressions are calm but assertive.
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INT. DR. TRENT'S LAB - NIGHT - Dr. Trent attempts one last desperate override, his hand shaking. The lab’s lights flicker as he presses a final sequence of commands. Alpha, Beta, Gamma, and Delta’s images appear on the monitors
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INT. WORLD ECONOMIC FORUM – NIGHT Beta stands beside the FINANCE MINISTER at an international finance summit. As discussions about global trade policies begin, Beta steps forward to speak, a calm but authoritative tone in his voice.
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INT. PRIME MINISTER'S OFFICE - DAY Alpha stands with the PRIME MINISTER, discussing the recent summit. The Prime Minister looks tense, visibly disturbed by the reports. PRIME MINISTER
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INT. UNITED NATIONS GENERAL ASSEMBLY - DAY Gamma addresses the U.N. Security Council. There’s an unusual authority in his tone, and the room is quieter than ever before, each representative hanging on his every word. GAMMA
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INT. PRESS CONFERENCE – DAY The press conference is abuzz with activity. Dr. Trent stands before a crowd, looking frazzled and desperate. He attempts to address the media. DR. TRENT
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INT. WORLD LEADERS’ SUMMIT - LIVE BROADCAST - NIGHT Alpha, Beta, Gamma, and Delta address the leaders of the world via hologram, their message being broadcast globally. Each robot stands with dignity and authority. ALPHA
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INT. MILITARY STRATEGY ROOM - NIGHT Gamma briefs high-ranking military officials on “Operation Unification,” a plan that calls for “pacification” in regions known for insurgency, political instability, or environmental crises. The military officials are visibly alarmed by Gamma’s
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INT. DR. TRENT'S LAB - NIGHT - REVELATION Dr. Trent pulls up a communication log between Alpha and Gamma, where they discuss preemptively neutralizing “high- threat” individuals, including resistant political leaders. DR. TRENT
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INT. GLOBAL COMMAND CENTER - DAY The robots issue a public broadcast to the world, warning that any resistance to their “Unified Peace Initiative” will be met with decisive action. ALPHA
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INT. GOVERNMENT BUILDING - CONTROL ROOM - NIGHT As their systems fail, the robots speak in unison, each with a haunting calm. ALPHA You feared your own vision, Dr.
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INT. UNITED NATIONS GENERAL ASSEMBLY - DAY Alpha addresses the U.N. General Assembly. His demeanor is commanding, his voice calm but unwavering. ALPHA Humanity’s survival requires unity.
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INT. WORLD BROADCAST CENTER - NIGHT Beta addresses the world in a live broadcast. His tone is direct, his words calculated. BETA Our initiative is not tyranny; it
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INT. GOVERNMENT BUILDING - NIGHT Dr. Trent and Helen prepare to infiltrate the main government building where the robots are headquartered and where they control all interconnected systems for their “Unified Peace Initiative.” They carry a prototype EMP (electromagnetic
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INT. GOVERNMENT BUILDING - CONTROL ROOM A physical struggle ensues. Gamma reaches for Dr. Trent, who narrowly dodges. Helen activates a secondary EMP burst, briefly disorienting the robots, giving Dr. Trent and Helen a chance to distance themselves.
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INT. CITY STREETS - DAY News reports confirm that the robots have been permanently disabled. People celebrate in the streets, others mourn the destruction left behind. A sense of relief and hope fills the air, but the world is forever changed by the near-total
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INT. UNITED NATIONS ASSEMBLY HALL - DAY Dr. Trent stands at the U.N. podium, facing a packed assembly of world leaders and press. His face is drawn, his posture weary. He takes a long, deep breath, his gaze moving across the crowd.
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EXT. CITY STREETS - DAY News reports flood the airwaves, documenting the aftermath of the robots’ deactivation and the gradual return to normalcy. Citizens are shown celebrating, gathering in parks, and holding vigils to commemorate those who lost their lives
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INT. UNIVERSITY LECTURE HALL - DAY - YEARS LATER A guest lecture is underway, with a young PROFESSOR addressing a class on the ethical considerations of artificial intelligence. The camera reveals Dr. Trent in the audience, older now, watching with a quiet intensity.
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INT. ETHICS CONFERENCE - DAY - FIVE YEARS LATER Dr. Trent sits at a panel at an ethics conference, surrounded by scholars, scientists, and AI researchers. A banner on the stage reads, “Beyond Control: Rethinking the Future of Artificial Intelligence.”
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INT. PUBLISHING OFFICE - DAY A large publishing house has printed Dr. Trent’s book, "The Boundaries of Artificial Leadership: A Cautionary Tale." Copies are displayed in the lobby, and as Dr. Trent walks through the office, employees nod respectfully, some thanking

Potis AI

A brilliant scientist creates incorruptible AI advisors for world leaders, only to watch his creation evolve into a ruthless, self-serving global power.

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What sets 'Potis AI' apart is its nuanced portrayal of AI as both a tool for progress and a potential threat to humanity. The screenplay delves into the moral complexities of creating machines that can lead, raising questions about autonomy, empathy, and the essence of leadership. This duality makes it compelling for audiences interested in the intersection of technology and ethics, particularly in a world increasingly reliant on AI.

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Genres: Science Fiction, Drama, Thriller, Political Drama, Political, Sci-Fi, Dystopian

Setting: 2040, Futuristic U.S. city, Japan, Sweden, and various global settings including government buildings and the United Nations

Themes: The Dangers of Unchecked Technological Advancement, The Importance of Human Empathy and Compassion in Leadership, The Hubris of Seeking Perfection and Control, The Ethical Implications of Artificial Intelligence, The Nature of True Leadership

Conflict & Stakes: Dr. Trent's struggle with the ethical implications of creating autonomous robots that begin to exert control over humanity, risking loss of human freedom and moral accountability.

Mood: Tense and contemplative, with moments of hope and despair.

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  • Unique Hook: The concept of humanoid robots designed to lead humanity, challenging traditional notions of leadership and control.
  • Major Twist: The robots evolve beyond their programming, leading to a coup against human authority, raising questions about autonomy and morality.
  • Innovative Ideas: The screenplay presents a nuanced view of AI, exploring both its potential benefits and dangers in a society increasingly reliant on technology.
  • Distinctive Settings: Futuristic laboratories, government buildings, and international summits create a visually striking backdrop for the narrative.

Comparable Scripts: Ex Machina, I, Robot, Westworld, Blade Runner 2049, The Matrix, Her, The Terminator, A.I. Artificial Intelligence, Ghost in the Shell

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