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# PG SLUGLINE
1 1
EXT EASTERN UKRAINE – DAWN – AERIAL
2 4
INT RUSSIAN CONSCRIPTION CENTER – KURSK – DAY
3 7
EXT KYIV – ROOFTOP – MORNING
4 8
INT TRANSPORT TRUCK – NIGHT
5 9
EXT RUINED VILLAGE – EASTERN UKRAINE – DAY
6 10
INT RUINED HOUSE – MOMENTS LATER
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EXT BARN – LATER
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EXT RUINED VILLAGE – CONTINUOUS
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EXT KYIV – ROOFTOP – NIGHT
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INT UNDERGROUND NEWSROOM – KYIV – NIGHT
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INT MAKESHIFT MEDICAL STATION – KYIV – NIGHT
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EXT RURAL BACK ROAD – NIGHT
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INT UNDERGROUND NEWSROOM – NIGHT
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INT RUSSIAN FIELD HQ – NIGHT
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INT SAFE APARTMENT – DAWN
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INT MAKESHIFT MEDICAL STATION – DAY
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EXT KYIV ROOFTOP – NIGHT
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INT SAFE APARTMENT – KYIV – NIGHT
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INT MAKESHIFT MEDICAL STATION – NIGHT
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INT RUSSIAN FIELD HQ – NIGHT
21 36
INT ABANDONED FACTORY – KYIV OUTSKIRTS – NIGHT
22 38
INT RUSSIAN DEFENSE MINISTRY – MOSCOW – NIGHT
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INT ABANDONED FACTORY – NIGHT
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INT ABANDONED FACTORY – CONTINUOUS
25 42
INT FIELD HOSPITAL – KYIV – NIGHT
26 44
INT PARTISAN SAFEHOUSE – UNKNOWN LOCATION – NIGHT
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INT RUSSIAN FIELD HQ – NIGHT
28 47
INT FIELD HOSPITAL – DAWN
29 48
INT SAFEHOUSE – KYIV – MORNING
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INT PARTISAN SAFEHOUSE – NIGHT
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INT RUSSIAN DEFENSE MINISTRY – MOSCOW – NIGHT
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INT FIELD HOSPITAL – NIGHT
33 53
EXT SAFEHOUSE ROOFTOP – NIGHT
34 54
INT PARTISAN SAFEHOUSE – NIGHT
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INT FIELD HOSPITAL – NIGHT
36 58
INT RUSSIAN FIELD HQ – NIGHT
37 59
EXT KYIV – DAY
38 61
INT RUSSIAN DEFENSE MINISTRY – MOSCOW – NIGHT
39 62
INT SAFEHOUSE – KYIV – NIGHT
40 63
EXT RELAY STATION – DUSK
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EXT RELAY STATION – NIGHT
42 67
INT SAFEHOUSE – KYIV – NIGHT
43 70
INT SAFEHOUSE – KYIV – NIGHT
44 72
INT KREMLIN WAR ROOM – NIGHT
45 74
INT SAFEHOUSE – KYIV – NIGHT
46 75
INT RADIN’S SECURE OFFICE – MOSCOW – NIGHT
47 78
EXT RELAY STATION – NIGHT
48 80
EXT RELAY STATION – NIGHT
49 81
INT KREMLIN WAR ROOM – NIGHT
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INT HOSPITAL RECOVERY WARD – DAY
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INT UNDERGROUND NEWSROOM – NIGHT
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INT DARK STAIRWELL – NIGHT
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INT RUSSIAN FIELD HQ – NIGHT
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EXT REFUGEE ROAD – DAY
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EXT SMALL VILLAGE – UKRAINE – DAY
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INT INTERNATIONAL NEWSROOM – DAY
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INT DETENTION FACILITY – INTERVIEW ROOM – DAY
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EXT WAR CRIMES ARCHIVE – DAY
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INT IVAN’S CELL – NIGHT
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INT INTERNATIONAL COURT – DAY
INT EXT INT/EXT hover for full slug
Scene Map
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# PG SLUGLINE
1 1
EXT EASTERN UKRAINE – DAWN – AERIAL
EXT. EASTERN UKRAINE – DAWN – AERIAL
(WAR PIGS) by (Joe Murkijanian) (Based on Black Sabbath Lyrics) 1/5/26
2 4
INT RUSSIAN CONSCRIPTION CENTER – KURSK – DAY
INT. RUSSIAN CONSCRIPTION CENTER – KURSK – DAY
INT. RUSSIAN CONSCRIPTION CENTER – KURSK – DAY Harsh fluorescent lighting. A long, narrow room filled with metal benches. A row of BOYS, ages eighteen to twenty, sit shoulder to shoulder.
3 7
EXT KYIV – ROOFTOP – MORNING
EXT. KYIV – ROOFTOP – MORNING
EXT. KYIV – ROOFTOP – MORNING Smoke drifts above the city skyline. IVAN PAVLENKO (40s) adjusts his camera with practiced precision. Calm. Focused.
4 8
INT TRANSPORT TRUCK – NIGHT
INT. TRANSPORT TRUCK – NIGHT
INT. TRANSPORT TRUCK – NIGHT The truck rattles harder now. Metal walls vibrate with each pothole. The boys sway together like cargo. Aleksei grips a hanging strap so tight his fingers go numb.
5 9
EXT RUINED VILLAGE – EASTERN UKRAINE – DAY
EXT. RUINED VILLAGE – EASTERN UKRAINE – DAY
EXT. RUINED VILLAGE – EASTERN UKRAINE – DAY Gray daylight. The truck door swings open. Cold air rushes in, sharp as metal. Dmitri steps down into snow packed with ash.
6 10
INT RUINED HOUSE – MOMENTS LATER
INT. RUINED HOUSE – MOMENTS LATER
INT. RUINED HOUSE – MOMENTS LATER A dark interior that smells like smoke and wet fabric. Soldiers sweep through rooms. Furniture overturned. Cabinets emptied.
7 12
EXT BARN – LATER
EXT. BARN – LATER
EXT. BARN – LATER A barn with one wall missing. Wind whistles through exposed beams. Four UKRAINIAN MEN kneel in the mud, hands bound. A fifth man lies nearby—already dead.
8 14
EXT RUINED VILLAGE – CONTINUOUS
EXT. RUINED VILLAGE – CONTINUOUS
EXT. RUINED VILLAGE – CONTINUOUS Dmitri runs. Gunfire erupts behind him. Bullets chew into walls, wood splinters exploding like small birds.
9 16
EXT KYIV – ROOFTOP – NIGHT
EXT. KYIV – ROOFTOP – NIGHT
EXT. KYIV – ROOFTOP – NIGHT Ivan stands in freezing wind. The skyline flickers with intermittent power. Distant thunder—maybe weather, maybe artillery. Ivan watches his footage upload again and again across
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INT UNDERGROUND NEWSROOM – KYIV – NIGHT
INT. UNDERGROUND NEWSROOM – KYIV – NIGHT
INT. UNDERGROUND NEWSROOM – KYIV – NIGHT Generators hum like tired beasts. Screens cast blue light across faces that haven’t slept. Ivan scrubs through footage—frame by frame. The Editor watches him, concerned.
11 18
INT MAKESHIFT MEDICAL STATION – KYIV – NIGHT
INT. MAKESHIFT MEDICAL STATION – KYIV – NIGHT
INT. MAKESHIFT MEDICAL STATION – KYIV – NIGHT Dim light. Headlamps. Metal trays. Anya stitches a CHILD on a gurney. The child’s face is too calm—shock. Anya’s hands are steady.
12 19
EXT RURAL BACK ROAD – NIGHT
EXT. RURAL BACK ROAD – NIGHT
EXT. RURAL BACK ROAD – NIGHT A CIVILIAN VAN slows beside Dmitri. The Driver rolls down the window, terrified. DRIVER (in Ukrainian)
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INT UNDERGROUND NEWSROOM – NIGHT
INT. UNDERGROUND NEWSROOM – NIGHT
INT. UNDERGROUND NEWSROOM – NIGHT Ivan watches a raw clip on repeat. Not the violence. The space before it. A hesitation.
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INT RUSSIAN FIELD HQ – NIGHT
INT. RUSSIAN FIELD HQ – NIGHT
INT. RUSSIAN FIELD HQ – NIGHT A temporary command center inside a repurposed school. Maps taped over children’s drawings. Commander Orlov stands before a tactical display. An OFFICER briefs him.
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INT SAFE APARTMENT – DAWN
INT. SAFE APARTMENT – DAWN
INT. SAFE APARTMENT – DAWN Dmitri wakes on the floor. Sunlight leaks through a crack in the curtain. For a moment, he forgets where he is. Then memory crashes back—violent, sharp.
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INT MAKESHIFT MEDICAL STATION – DAY
INT. MAKESHIFT MEDICAL STATION – DAY
INT. MAKESHIFT MEDICAL STATION – DAY Anya collapses briefly against a wall. Her vision tunnels. A ringing sound fills her ears. She presses her forehead to the cool concrete.
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EXT KYIV ROOFTOP – NIGHT
EXT. KYIV ROOFTOP – NIGHT
EXT. KYIV ROOFTOP – NIGHT Ivan stands alone again. Camera mounted. City lights flicker. Distant anti-air fire paints brief lines across the sky.
18 32
INT SAFE APARTMENT – KYIV – NIGHT
INT. SAFE APARTMENT – KYIV – NIGHT
INT. SAFE APARTMENT – KYIV – NIGHT Dmitri sits at a kitchen table. The Driver’s Wife pushes a bowl of soup toward him. He doesn’t touch it. The steam rises between them like a barrier.
19 33
INT MAKESHIFT MEDICAL STATION – NIGHT
INT. MAKESHIFT MEDICAL STATION – NIGHT
INT. MAKESHIFT MEDICAL STATION – NIGHT Anya moves between gurneys. Her limp is clearer now. She compensates with her shoulders, like she’s trying to hide
20 35
INT RUSSIAN FIELD HQ – NIGHT
INT. RUSSIAN FIELD HQ – NIGHT
INT. RUSSIAN FIELD HQ – NIGHT Orlov stands over a tactical table. Aerial photos. Heat signatures. Signal maps. The OFFICER from earlier points to a cluster of streets. OFFICER
21 36
INT ABANDONED FACTORY – KYIV OUTSKIRTS – NIGHT
INT. ABANDONED FACTORY – KYIV OUTSKIRTS – NIGHT
INT. ABANDONED FACTORY – KYIV OUTSKIRTS – NIGHT Ivan and a TECH (30s) set up an uplink rig. Dust in the air. Concrete floors.
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INT RUSSIAN DEFENSE MINISTRY – MOSCOW – NIGHT
INT. RUSSIAN DEFENSE MINISTRY – MOSCOW – NIGHT
INT. RUSSIAN DEFENSE MINISTRY – MOSCOW – NIGHT General Radin watches incoming escalation requests. A secure clock ticks. An aide stands behind him with a tablet. AIDE
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INT ABANDONED FACTORY – NIGHT
INT. ABANDONED FACTORY – NIGHT
INT. ABANDONED FACTORY – NIGHT The uplink stabilizes. Ivan exhales—relief flooding him. He doesn’t even realize he’s smiling until it’s gone.
24 41
INT ABANDONED FACTORY – CONTINUOUS
INT. ABANDONED FACTORY – CONTINUOUS
INT. ABANDONED FACTORY – CONTINUOUS Smoke fills the air. Ivan crawls toward the Tech. His hands slide through warm blood. The Tech tries to speak.
25 42
INT FIELD HOSPITAL – KYIV – NIGHT
INT. FIELD HOSPITAL – KYIV – NIGHT
INT. FIELD HOSPITAL – KYIV – NIGHT Chaos without volume. The strike has sent a new wave of casualties. Stretchers line the corridors—improvised, mismatched.
26 44
INT PARTISAN SAFEHOUSE – UNKNOWN LOCATION – NIGHT
INT. PARTISAN SAFEHOUSE – UNKNOWN LOCATION – NIGHT
INT. PARTISAN SAFEHOUSE – UNKNOWN LOCATION – NIGHT Dmitri sits in a dimly lit room. Maps on the walls. Radios humming. A PARTISAN COORDINATOR (50s) watches him carefully.
27 46
INT RUSSIAN FIELD HQ – NIGHT
INT. RUSSIAN FIELD HQ – NIGHT
INT. RUSSIAN FIELD HQ – NIGHT Orlov studies damage reports from the factory strike. Civilian casualties: limited. Signal disruption: partial. Psychological impact: significant.
28 47
INT FIELD HOSPITAL – DAWN
INT. FIELD HOSPITAL – DAWN
INT. FIELD HOSPITAL – DAWN Anya finishes intubating a patient. Her hands tremble violently now. She steps back—tries to steady herself. The room tilts.
29 48
INT SAFEHOUSE – KYIV – MORNING
INT. SAFEHOUSE – KYIV – MORNING
INT. SAFEHOUSE – KYIV – MORNING Ivan watches the edited version of his factory footage play on a loop. The missing moments are invisible to most viewers. But Ivan sees them like amputations.
30 49
INT PARTISAN SAFEHOUSE – NIGHT
INT. PARTISAN SAFEHOUSE – NIGHT
INT. PARTISAN SAFEHOUSE – NIGHT Dmitri watches Ivan’s broadcast on a cracked laptop. The signal is unstable. Ivan’s face flickers.
31 51
INT RUSSIAN DEFENSE MINISTRY – MOSCOW – NIGHT
INT. RUSSIAN DEFENSE MINISTRY – MOSCOW – NIGHT
INT. RUSSIAN DEFENSE MINISTRY – MOSCOW – NIGHT General Radin listens to Orlov’s escalation request. A secure line. Orlov’s voice is confident. Persuasive. ORLOV (V.O.)
32 52
INT FIELD HOSPITAL – NIGHT
INT. FIELD HOSPITAL – NIGHT
INT. FIELD HOSPITAL – NIGHT Anya returns to work. Still pale. Still limping. She approaches two patients side by side:
33 53
EXT SAFEHOUSE ROOFTOP – NIGHT
EXT. SAFEHOUSE ROOFTOP – NIGHT
EXT. SAFEHOUSE ROOFTOP – NIGHT Ivan steps outside. Cold air clears his head. The city below is dimmer now. Blackouts spreading.
34 54
INT PARTISAN SAFEHOUSE – NIGHT
INT. PARTISAN SAFEHOUSE – NIGHT
INT. PARTISAN SAFEHOUSE – NIGHT A map table under a single hanging bulb. Dmitri stands over it with the Coordinator and two PARTISANS. Relay towers marked in red. Fuel depots in blue.
35 57
INT FIELD HOSPITAL – NIGHT
INT. FIELD HOSPITAL – NIGHT
INT. FIELD HOSPITAL – NIGHT The generator sputters. Lights flicker. Anya clamps an artery with one hand while holding a flashlight with the other.
36 58
INT RUSSIAN FIELD HQ – NIGHT
INT. RUSSIAN FIELD HQ – NIGHT
INT. RUSSIAN FIELD HQ – NIGHT Orlov stands before an electronic warfare console. A technician points at the screen. TECHNICIAN We can disrupt the grid in waves.
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EXT KYIV – DAY
EXT. KYIV – DAY
EXT. KYIV – DAY The blackout hits. Traffic lights die mid-cycle. Cars collide at an intersection. Metal shrieks. Glass scatters.
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INT RUSSIAN DEFENSE MINISTRY – MOSCOW – NIGHT
INT. RUSSIAN DEFENSE MINISTRY – MOSCOW – NIGHT
INT. RUSSIAN DEFENSE MINISTRY – MOSCOW – NIGHT Radin watches the blackout map. The aide stands behind him, quiet. AIDE Orlov requests permanent disruption
39 62
INT SAFEHOUSE – KYIV – NIGHT
INT. SAFEHOUSE – KYIV – NIGHT
INT. SAFEHOUSE – KYIV – NIGHT Ivan records into a small handheld recorder. His voice is low. This isn’t for broadcast. It’s for confession.
40 63
EXT RELAY STATION – DUSK
EXT. RELAY STATION – DUSK
EXT. RELAY STATION – DUSK A massive communications tower rises against a darkening sky. Russian troops fortify the perimeter. Concrete barriers. Searchlights.
41 65
EXT RELAY STATION – NIGHT
EXT. RELAY STATION – NIGHT
EXT. RELAY STATION – NIGHT The tower looms above them—steel lattice disappearing into low cloud. A faint electrical HUM vibrates the air, felt more than heard.
42 67
INT SAFEHOUSE – KYIV – NIGHT
INT. SAFEHOUSE – KYIV – NIGHT
INT. SAFEHOUSE – KYIV – NIGHT Ivan watches the raw feed. No delay. No safety net. Just Dmitri—exposed. Ivan’s phone lights up.
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INT SAFEHOUSE – KYIV – NIGHT
INT. SAFEHOUSE – KYIV – NIGHT
INT. SAFEHOUSE – KYIV – NIGHT Ivan’s phone vibrates again. A message appears: TURN IT OFF OR SHE DISAPPEARS. Ivan’s vision tunnels.
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INT KREMLIN WAR ROOM – NIGHT
INT. KREMLIN WAR ROOM – NIGHT
INT. KREMLIN WAR ROOM – NIGHT Screens flash—Dmitri, Ivan, chaos. A countdown appears: TACTICAL DEPLOYMENT – T–14:00 Putin stands motionless.
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INT SAFEHOUSE – KYIV – NIGHT
INT. SAFEHOUSE – KYIV – NIGHT
INT. SAFEHOUSE – KYIV – NIGHT Ivan answers his ringing phone with shaking hands. A Polish number. SOFIA (V.O.) Papa?
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INT RADIN’S SECURE OFFICE – MOSCOW – NIGHT
INT. RADIN’S SECURE OFFICE – MOSCOW – NIGHT
INT. RADIN’S SECURE OFFICE – MOSCOW – NIGHT FSB AGENTS enter, weapons ready. Radin stands calmly behind his desk. Hands open.
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EXT RELAY STATION – NIGHT
EXT. RELAY STATION – NIGHT
EXT. RELAY STATION – NIGHT Smoke everywhere. Anya collapses behind cover—her leg finally gives out. Pain floods her face for a second before she masks it. Dmitri drags her, hands slick with blood.
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EXT RELAY STATION – NIGHT
EXT. RELAY STATION – NIGHT
EXT. RELAY STATION – NIGHT Footsteps close in. Russian voices—commands, sharp, efficient. Anya grips Dmitri’s sleeve. Her hand trembles violently now, not from fear—
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INT KREMLIN WAR ROOM – NIGHT
INT. KREMLIN WAR ROOM – NIGHT
INT. KREMLIN WAR ROOM – NIGHT T–01:30 The feed is dead now. Only static and darkness. An aide whispers urgently.
50 83
INT HOSPITAL RECOVERY WARD – DAY
INT. HOSPITAL RECOVERY WARD – DAY
INT. HOSPITAL RECOVERY WARD – DAY Anya lies on a narrow cot. Fluorescent light hums overhead. Her leg is wrapped in thick bandages. A heart monitor beeps softly.
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INT UNDERGROUND NEWSROOM – NIGHT
INT. UNDERGROUND NEWSROOM – NIGHT
INT. UNDERGROUND NEWSROOM – NIGHT Ivan stands before a camera. No graphics. No dramatic lighting. He looks thin now. Older.
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INT DARK STAIRWELL – NIGHT
INT. DARK STAIRWELL – NIGHT
INT. DARK STAIRWELL – NIGHT Ivan descends concrete steps. The building is quiet. Too quiet. He reaches the bottom landing.
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INT RUSSIAN FIELD HQ – NIGHT
INT. RUSSIAN FIELD HQ – NIGHT
INT. RUSSIAN FIELD HQ – NIGHT Orlov studies reports from the relay station. Missing body. No confirmed kill. No proof. His officers wait for direction. OFFICER
54 88
EXT REFUGEE ROAD – DAY
EXT. REFUGEE ROAD – DAY
EXT. REFUGEE ROAD – DAY A long line of civilians moves through mud. Families carrying bags, pushing carts, dragging suitcases with broken wheels. Anya limps among them.
55 90
EXT SMALL VILLAGE – UKRAINE – DAY
EXT. SMALL VILLAGE – UKRAINE – DAY
EXT. SMALL VILLAGE – UKRAINE – DAY Rebuilding. Hands pass bricks. Children hammer crooked nails. A man repairs a roof with salvaged sheet metal.
56 91
INT INTERNATIONAL NEWSROOM – DAY
INT. INTERNATIONAL NEWSROOM – DAY
INT. INTERNATIONAL NEWSROOM – DAY A different story dominates the screens now. Markets. Elections. A celebrity scandal. Dmitri’s image appears only in a small side window—silent, minimized.
57 93
INT DETENTION FACILITY – INTERVIEW ROOM – DAY
INT. DETENTION FACILITY – INTERVIEW ROOM – DAY
INT. DETENTION FACILITY – INTERVIEW ROOM – DAY Ivan sits across from two OFFICIALS now. A thicker file on the table. His name on the spine. OFFICIAL #1
58 95
EXT WAR CRIMES ARCHIVE – DAY
EXT. WAR CRIMES ARCHIVE – DAY
EXT. WAR CRIMES ARCHIVE – DAY A modern building. Clean. Impersonal. Inside, a CLERK slides a cardboard box onto a shelf. Label: SOKOLOV, DMITRI – STATUS UNCONFIRMED
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INT IVAN’S CELL – NIGHT
INT. IVAN’S CELL – NIGHT
INT. IVAN’S CELL – NIGHT Ivan writes a letter by dim light. Careful handwriting. Measured. This is not journalism.
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INT INTERNATIONAL COURT – DAY
INT. INTERNATIONAL COURT – DAY
INT. INTERNATIONAL COURT – DAY Evidence presentations conclude. Screens show timelines, orders, consequences. No verdict yet. A PROSECUTOR closes a file.
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War Pigs

When a conflicted Russian soldier defects and broadcasts the brutal truth of the war, he becomes a target for his former commanders and a beacon of hope for those fighting for truth, forcing a journalist to choose between his family's safety and his integrity.

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Overview

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Unique Selling Point

This script's unique selling proposition is its sophisticated exploration of how truth becomes weaponized in modern warfare, told through three distinct but thematically linked perspectives: a conscript, a journalist, and a medic. Unlike traditional war films focused on combat heroics, it examines the psychological and ethical erosion that occurs when individuals confront systems of power. Its refusal to provide easy moral answers and its focus on the cost of bearing witness make it stand out in the genre.

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Average Score: 8.2
Key Takeaways
For the Writer:
To elevate the script, focus on refining the pacing in the middle section by compressing repetitive sequences and sharpening transitions to maintain tension and momentum. Additionally, deepen character connections, particularly between the protagonists, and clarify key ambiguities in resolutions to ensure emotional payoff without diluting the thematic depth. Strengthening antagonist interiority, such as adding personal stakes for Orlov and Radin, will enhance moral complexity and make the narrative more engaging and cohesive.
For Executives:
The script offers strong value with its timely themes of truth and war, potent visuals, and character-driven drama, appealing to audiences seeking moral depth in geopolitical thrillers, potentially drawing comparisons to films like 'The Lives of Others'. However, risks include uneven pacing that could bore viewers and unresolved ambiguities risking confusion or dissatisfaction, which might limit broad appeal; a targeted polish is essential to mitigate these issues and maximize commercial potential in a competitive market.
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Story Facts
Genres:
War 50% Drama 40% Thriller 30%

Setting: Contemporary (present day), Eastern Ukraine and Kyiv, with scenes in Russia and various international locations

Themes: The Enduring Human Spirit and Resistance, The Corruption and Dehumanization of War, The Manipulation and Power of Truth and Media, The Immense Personal Sacrifice and Ethical Dilemma, The Persistence and Resilience of Nature Amidst Destruction, The Ambiguity of Morality and Survival, Loss and Memory

Conflict & Stakes: The moral and ethical dilemmas faced by individuals amidst the chaos of war, with personal lives and broader consequences at stake.

Mood: Somber and introspective, with moments of tension and urgency.

Standout Features:

  • Unique Hook: The intertwining of personal stories with the broader context of war, highlighting individual moral choices.
  • Plot Twist: Dmitri's unexpected act of defiance against his commander, which shifts the narrative's direction.
  • Innovative Ideas: The use of multiple perspectives to explore the impact of war on different characters, enhancing emotional resonance.
  • Distinctive Settings: The contrast between the war-torn landscapes of Ukraine and the sterile environments of military and medical facilities.

Comparable Scripts: Come and See (1985), The Kite Runner (2003), The Things They Carried (1990), The Book Thief (2005), The Hurt Locker (2008), The Road (2006), The Pianist (2002), The Yellow Birds (2012), The Nightingale (2015)

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Overall Score: 7.99
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To elevate the script's craft, focus on refining pacing in key emotional and narrative scenes to maintain tension and flow, while deepening the backstories and motivations of supporting characters like Orlov and Anya. This will enhance character relatability, emotional depth, and overall engagement, making the story more impactful and immersive without overwhelming the strong lead arcs.
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Story Critique

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To enhance 'War Pigs' from a creative standpoint, concentrate on refining pacing to maintain momentum and avoid repetitive scenes, deepen character arcs and relationships for greater emotional resonance, and ensure thematic elements like truth and morality are seamlessly integrated to strengthen the narrative's impact. By addressing these core craft elements, the script can achieve a more engaging and cohesive story that fully captivates audiences.
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Characters

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The character analysis reveals that while the protagonists Anya, Dmitri, and Ivan are well-developed with strong emotional resonance, there's room to deepen backstories and internal conflicts to enhance their arcs and make the narrative more impactful. For Orlov, the antagonist, introducing moments of vulnerability or doubt could add complexity, preventing his character from feeling static and improving overall tension. Focusing on these elements will strengthen emotional connections, clarify transformations, and elevate the script's thematic depth, making the story more engaging and resonant for audiences.
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Emotional Analysis

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The script's emotional analysis reveals a predominantly grim tone with limited emotional variety, high intensity, and abrupt transitions that could lead to audience fatigue. To improve, focus on incorporating subtle moments of relief, such as brief human connections or dark humor, to balance the heavy sadness and fear, while refining pacing with emotional buffers and deeper interpersonal dynamics to enhance character empathy and overall narrative resonance, making the story more engaging and impactful.
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Goals and Philosophical Conflict

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The script's exploration of Ivan's internal and external goals, particularly the philosophical conflict between truth and protection, offers a rich character arc, but to enhance emotional depth and pacing, focus on tightening the moments where Ivan's personal stakes intersect with his journalistic duties. This could involve adding subtle, intimate scenes that amplify his moral dilemmas, ensuring the audience feels the weight of his choices more acutely, while maintaining the script's strong thematic integrity to avoid diluting the narrative's impact.
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Themes

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Logic & Inconsistencies

Highlights any contradictions, plot holes, or logic gaps that may confuse viewers.

Key Suggestions:
The script's inconsistencies highlight opportunities to strengthen character arcs and narrative coherence, such as gradually building Dmitri's internal conflict to make pivotal actions feel organic rather than abrupt. By addressing plot holes and redundancies, the writer can create a more immersive and emotionally resonant story, ensuring that themes of moral dilemma and war's human cost are conveyed with greater authenticity and depth, ultimately elevating the screenplay's craft.
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Scene Analysis

All of your scenes analyzed individually and compared, so you can zero in on what to improve.

Scene-Level Percentile Chart
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Other Analyses

Writer Exec

This section looks at the extra spark — your story’s voice, style, world, and the moments that really stick. These insights might not change the bones of the script, but they can make it more original, more immersive, and way more memorable. It’s where things get fun, weird, and wonderfully you.

Unique Voice

Assesses the distinctiveness and personality of the writer's voice.

Key Suggestions:
The script's voice excels in somber realism and evocative imagery, effectively capturing the moral complexities of war, but to enhance its craft, focus on varying pacing to prevent emotional fatigue in the audience and integrate more subtle character arcs that build on the internal conflicts already present. This would amplify the script's strengths in sparse dialogue and visual storytelling, making the narrative more dynamic and engaging without diluting its introspective depth.
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Writer's Craft

Analyzes the writing to help the writer be aware of their skill and improve.

Key Suggestions:
The screenplay showcases strong character development and thematic depth, but to enhance its creative impact, focus on refining pacing by tightening scenes and transitions to maintain momentum, while improving dialogue efficiency and exploring internal conflicts more deeply for richer emotional resonance and better audience engagement.
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Memorable Lines
Spotlights standout dialogue lines with emotional or thematic power.
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Tropes
Highlights common or genre-specific tropes found in the script.
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World Building

Evaluates the depth, consistency, and immersion of the story's world.

Key Suggestions:
From a creative standpoint, the script's world-building effectively immerses viewers in a war-torn landscape, but to enhance craft, focus on tightening the integration of environmental elements with character arcs and pacing. By refining how settings like blackouts and ruined villages amplify emotional beats—such as Dmitri's moral dilemmas or Ivan's obsessions—you can heighten tension and thematic resonance, making the narrative more compelling and avoiding pacing drags in introspective scenes.
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Correlations

Identifies patterns in scene scores.

Key Suggestions:
The scene pattern analysis reveals that reflective and emotional tones often slow pacing and may not always drive character development effectively, suggesting opportunities to tighten introspective moments with more dynamic dialogue or action, and ensure emotional highs catalyze growth early on for a more consistent and engaging narrative arc, enhancing overall script flow and emotional impact.
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Loglines
Presents logline variations based on theme, genre, and hook.
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