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Call me by your name

A transformative summer romance unfolds between a seventeen-year-old and his father's charming guest, leaving an indelible mark on their lives.

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Overview

Unique Selling Point

What sets this screenplay apart is its intimate portrayal of a summer romance that transcends cultural and generational boundaries. The lush Italian setting serves as a backdrop for a deeply personal story that resonates with anyone who has experienced the complexities of love and loss. Its unique blend of poetic dialogue and vivid imagery creates a compelling narrative that invites the audience to reflect on their own experiences of love.

AI Verdict & Suggestions

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Gemini
Highly Recommend

Claude
Recommend

GPT4
Highly Recommend

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Story Facts

Genres: Drama, Romance, Comedy, Adventure

Setting: 1980s, Perlman villa and surrounding areas in Italy

Themes: First Love and its Complexities, Self-Discovery and Identity, Cultural and Class Differences, Parental Influence and Observation

Conflict & Stakes: Elio's internal struggle with his burgeoning feelings for Oliver, the complexities of young love, and the fear of impending separation.

Mood: Bittersweet and introspective

Standout Features:

Unique Hook: The story's focus on a summer romance between a young boy and an older man, exploring the complexities of first love.
Distinctive Setting: The picturesque Italian countryside serves as a vibrant backdrop, enhancing the romantic atmosphere.
Character Depth: The nuanced portrayal of Elio's emotional journey and his relationship with Oliver adds layers to the narrative.
Cultural Context: The exploration of Jewish identity and cultural heritage adds depth to the characters' backgrounds.

Comparable Scripts: Call Me by Your Name, The Talented Mr. Ripley, Maurice, Brokeback Mountain, The Way He Looks, A Single Man, The Perks of Being a Wallflower, Pride, The Dreamers

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Key Strengths

Exceptional character development, with a characters rating in the 97th percentile, indicating well-crafted and relatable characters.
Strong emotional impact, scoring in the 90th percentile, suggesting the screenplay effectively resonates with audiences on an emotional level.
High dialogue rating at 82.76, reflecting the writer's ability to create engaging and authentic conversations between characters.

Areas for Improvement

Low stakes score at 10.76 indicates a need to enhance the tension and consequences within the plot to keep audiences invested.
The pacing score is very low at 1.62, suggesting that the screenplay may benefit from a more dynamic rhythm to maintain viewer engagement.
Originality score at 45.13 indicates that the screenplay may lack unique elements or fresh perspectives, which could be improved to stand out.

Writer Style

The writer appears to be intuitive, with strengths in character and dialogue development but lower scores in concept and plot structure.

Balancing Elements

Focus on enhancing the stakes and conflict levels to complement the strong character and dialogue elements.
Work on improving pacing to ensure that the emotional and character-driven moments are effectively balanced with plot progression.
Consider integrating more original concepts to elevate the overall uniqueness of the screenplay.

Intuition Level

Intuitive

Overall Assessment

The screenplay shows great potential due to its strong character and emotional elements, but it requires significant work on plot structure, stakes, and pacing to achieve a more balanced and engaging narrative.

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Title	Grade	Percentile	Before	After
Script Emotional Impact	8.80	99	Avatar: 8.70	Moonlight: 8.80
Scene Characters	8.9	98	The King's speech: 8.8	Black mirror 304: 8.9
Overall Script	8.50	94	Interstellar: 8.46	Erin Brokovich: 8.50
Scene Emotional Impact	8.6	89	Dune Part Two: 8.5	Casablanca: 8.6
Script Originality	8.60	88	12 years a slave: 8.50	the black list (TV): 8.60
Scene Character Changes	7.6	85	Parasite: 7.5	Dr. Jekyll and Mr Hyde : 7.6
Script Premise	8.70	82	Ex-Machina: 8.60	the black list (TV): 8.70
Scene Dialogue	8.2	79	Pirates of the Caribbean: 8.1	The good place draft: 8.2
Scene Overall	8.6	78	American Fiction: 8.5	face/off: 8.6
Scene Internal Goal	8.13	75	Crouching Tiger Hidden Dragon: 8.12	Her: 8.13
Scene Concept	8.3	70	Silicon Valley: 8.2	the 5th element: 8.3
Script Theme	8.40	66	Memento: 8.30	Titanic: 8.40
Script Structure	8.00	63	Promising young woman: 7.90	Knives Out: 8.00
Script Visual Impact	7.80	56	Dune Part Two: 7.70	the dark knight rises: 7.80
Scene Plot	8.0	48	Triangle of sadness: 7.9	True Blood: 8.0
Script Conflict	7.40	48	Witness: 7.30	groundhog day: 7.40
Script Structure	8.12	46	Moonlight: 8.11	Good Will Hunting: 8.12
Scene Originality	8.68	46	The Greatest Showman: 8.67	True Blood: 8.68
Scene Formatting	8.12	41	12 Monkeys: 8.11	Memento: 8.12
Scene Engagement	8.90	32	Triangle of sadness: 8.89	El Mariachi: 8.90
Script Characters	7.60	20	Witness: 7.50	severance (TV): 7.60
Scene External Goal	7.01	14	Women talking: 7.00	Promising young woman: 7.01
Scene Story Forward	7.3	11	A real pain : 7.2	There's something about Mary: 7.3
Scene High Stakes	5.7	10	The Addams Family: 5.6	As good as it gets: 5.7
Scene Unpredictability	6.91	8	The father: 6.89	Call me by your name: 6.91
Scene Conflict Level	5.6	4	Swingers: 5.5	The apartment: 5.6
Scene Pacing	8.00	2	The father: 7.99	Queens Gambit: 8.00

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Engine: Gemini

Screenplay Rating:

Highly Recommend

Executive Summary

Call Me By Your Name is a remarkably well-crafted screenplay demonstrating exceptional strengths in character development, evocative setting, and thematic resonance. The subtle yet powerful exploration of first love and its complexities, coupled with the exquisite use of language and visual storytelling, makes it a truly compelling and moving cinematic experience. While minor areas for improvement exist regarding pacing in certain scenes and potentially expanding on secondary characters, these are overshadowed by the overall brilliance of the script.

Strengths

The screenplay masterfully develops its characters through subtle actions, nuanced dialogue, and evocative imagery. The setting of the Italian countryside is beautifully rendered, adding depth and emotional weight to the narrative. The use of the narrator provides insightful commentary and adds an additional layer to the storytelling. The film masterfully balances intimacy and restraint, leading to potent emotional impact. high ( Scene 10 Scene 14 Scene 27 Scene 116 Scene 141 )
The intimate scenes are handled with both sensitivity and honesty, avoiding gratuitous depictions while fully conveying the emotional intensity of the relationship. high ( Scene 105 Scene 116 Scene 132 )
The dialogue is sharp, witty, and realistic, reflecting the complexities of the characters' personalities and relationships. medium ( Scene 11 Scene 36 Scene 68 )
The screenplay utilizes evocative imagery and visual storytelling to enhance the emotional impact of the narrative and the beauty of the setting. The pacing is generally well-managed creating a sense of realism and allowing the emotional arc to unfold naturally. high ( Scene 6 Scene 12 Scene 58 Scene 128 Scene 137 )
The ending is both satisfying and poignant, leaving a lasting impression on the audience. The thematic exploration of love, loss, and self-discovery resonates long after the credits roll. high ( Scene 141 )

Areas of Improvement

While the primary relationship is deeply explored, some secondary characters could benefit from further development to enrich the overall texture of the community surrounding Elio and Oliver. low ( Scene 17 Scene 18 )
A few scenes could be slightly tightened to maintain a consistent pace. Some segments might feel slightly slow compared to others. low ( Scene 130 )

MissingElements

The screenplay could potentially benefit from a slightly more explicit depiction of the aftermath of Oliver's departure. A brief scene might add emotional depth to the final moments. low

NotablePoints

The use of the narrator to associate Oliver's personality with his swimsuit choices is a unique and memorable stylistic choice. medium ( Scene 27 )
The discovery of the bronze statue serves as a powerful metaphor for the uncovering of hidden emotions and desires. medium ( Scene 41 )
The father's final speech is a masterpiece of subtle wisdom and acceptance, offering profound insights into the complexities of love and life. high ( Scene 141 )

Blind Spots

Underrepresentation of female perspectives While Marzia and Chiara are present, their experiences and motivations are not explored as deeply as Elio and Oliver's. Their roles primarily revolve around their relationships to the two male protagonists, rather than having fully developed internal lives and desires of their own. For example, Marzia's emotional journey after Elio's confession is somewhat underdeveloped. medium

Engine: Claude

Screenplay Rating:

Recommend

Executive Summary

The screenplay for "Call Me By Your Name" is a beautifully crafted, emotionally resonant coming-of-age drama that explores the complexities of first love and the profound impact of a transformative summer. Set in 1980s Italy, the story follows the blossoming romance between 17-year-old Elio and his father's 25-year-old summer intern, Oliver. The screenplay deftly navigates the characters' journey, capturing the nuances of their burgeoning relationship, the social and familial dynamics at play, and the universal themes of self-discovery, desire, and the bittersweet nature of young love. With its rich visual storytelling, well-developed characters, and poetic dialogue, the screenplay showcases a distinctive and compelling voice that would likely appeal to an audience seeking a thoughtful, character-driven drama.

Strengths

The screenplay's opening scenes effectively introduce the central characters, Elio and Oliver, and establish the setting and tone of the story. The descriptions of their interactions and the Perlman family's dynamics create an immersive and authentic world that draws the reader in. high ( Scene 1 (1) Scene 2 (4) )
The scenes depicting the growing connection and rapport between Elio and Oliver, through their discussions and musical exchanges, are beautifully crafted and effectively convey the developing bond between the two characters. high ( Scene 5 (11) Scene 7 (15) )
The screenplay's handling of the intimate moments between Elio and Oliver, including the pivotal scene in the secluded spring, is sensitive and emotionally resonant, capturing the characters' vulnerabilities and the complexity of their feelings. high ( Scene 28 (58) Scene 29 (72) )
The screenplay's exploration of the Perlman family dynamics and the nuanced relationship between Elio and his father is a strength, providing depth and context to the central narrative. high ( Scene 39 (139) Scene 41 (141) )
The screenplay's strong sense of place, captured through the vivid descriptions of the Perlman villa and its surrounding environment, helps to immerse the reader in the story's setting and enhance the overall atmosphere. medium ( Scene 1 (1) Scene 2 (4) Scene 3 (8) )

Areas of Improvement

While the intimate scenes between Elio and Marzia are effectively portrayed, the screenplay could potentially benefit from further exploration and development of their relationship, as it serves as a counterpoint to Elio's connection with Oliver. medium ( Scene 33 (83) Scene 34 (84) )
The scenes involving Elio's friends and their reactions to Oliver's presence could be expanded upon to provide a richer understanding of the social and cultural context in which the story takes place. medium ( Scene 10 (18) Scene 11 (19) )
The screenplay could benefit from occasional moments of levity or humor to balance the more serious and emotional moments, as the overall tone can sometimes feel quite heavy. low ( Scene 4 (10) Scene 6 (13) )

MissingElements

While the screenplay effectively establishes the setting and the Perlman family's dynamics, there could be a more explicit exploration of the socio-cultural and historical context in which the story takes place, particularly in relation to the characters' backgrounds and experiences. medium ( Scene 1 (1) Scene 2 (4) )
The screenplay could benefit from additional scenes or moments that provide a deeper understanding of Oliver's motivations and decision-making process, as his actions and choices can sometimes feel opaque to the reader. medium ( Scene 26 (55) Scene 27 (56) )

NotablePoints

The screenplay's handling of the intimate scenes between Elio and Oliver is a notable strength, as it manages to capture the tenderness, vulnerability, and complexity of their relationship without resorting to gratuitous or exploitative depictions. high ( Scene 28 (58) Scene 29 (72) )
The screenplay's exploration of the Perlman family dynamics and the nuanced relationship between Elio and his father is a notable strength, as it provides depth and context to the central narrative and reflects the universal themes of love, loss, and self-discovery. high ( Scene 39 (139) Scene 41 (141) )
The screenplay's strong sense of place, captured through the vivid descriptions of the Perlman villa and its surrounding environment, is a notable strength that helps to immerse the reader in the story's setting and enhance the overall atmosphere. medium ( Scene 1 (1) Scene 2 (4) Scene 3 (8) )
The screenplay's handling of the aftermath of Oliver's departure and Elio's emotional journey is a notable strength, as it sensitively explores the character's grief, growth, and the lasting impact of their relationship. high ( Scene 51 (137) Scene 58 (144) )
The screenplay's use of multiple perspectives, including the Perlman family members and various supporting characters, is a notable strength that provides a richer and more nuanced understanding of the story's themes and emotional impact. medium ( Scene 2 (4) Scene 3 (8) Scene 4 (10) )

Blind Spots

Representation While the screenplay effectively explores the intimacy and complexities of Elio and Oliver's relationship, it could benefit from a more nuanced representation of the broader LGBTQ+ community and their experiences within the cultural and social context of the story's setting. The screenplay's focus on the central romance, while powerful, may overlook opportunities to provide a richer and more diverse portrayal of the LGBTQ+ experience. medium

Amateur Giveaways

Overwriting Occasionally, the screenplay exhibits a tendency towards excessive description or flowery language, particularly in certain scene descriptions. While the poetic nature of the writing is generally a strength, there are a few instances where the descriptive elements may be overstated or could be condensed to streamline the storytelling. low

Engine: GPT4

Screenplay Rating:

Highly Recommend

Executive Summary

The screenplay for 'Call Me by Your Name' is a beautifully crafted exploration of first love, identity, and the bittersweet nature of memory. It excels in character development, particularly in the nuanced portrayal of Elio and Oliver's relationship, which evolves from curiosity to deep emotional connection. The dialogue is rich and layered, enhancing the themes of longing and desire. However, there are moments where pacing could be improved, particularly in the middle sections, which may feel drawn out. Overall, the screenplay is compelling and resonates with audiences through its authentic emotional depth.

Strengths

The screenplay effectively establishes a strong sense of place and atmosphere, immersing the audience in the Italian summer setting. high ( Scene Sequence number 1 (1) Scene Sequence number 2 (10) )
Character development is rich and layered, particularly in the evolution of Elio and Oliver's relationship, which feels authentic and relatable. high ( Scene Sequence number 3 (22) )
The dialogue is beautifully written, capturing the nuances of youthful longing and the complexities of love. high ( Scene Sequence number 4 (19) )
The emotional depth of the screenplay resonates strongly, allowing the audience to connect with the characters' experiences. high ( Scene Sequence number 5 (50) )
The use of symbolism, such as the recurring peaches, adds layers of meaning to the narrative and enhances thematic depth. high ( Scene Sequence number 6 (142) )

Areas of Improvement

Some sections of the screenplay feel drawn out, particularly in the middle, which could benefit from tighter pacing. medium ( Scene Sequence number 7 (34) )
There are moments where character motivations could be more clearly defined, particularly regarding Elio's feelings towards Marzia. medium ( Scene Sequence number 8 (50) )
The resolution of certain subplots, such as Elio's relationship with Marzia, feels somewhat abrupt and could be explored further. medium ( Scene Sequence number 9 (86) )
The transition between scenes can sometimes feel jarring, disrupting the flow of the narrative. medium ( Scene Sequence number 10 (125) )
The screenplay could benefit from more varied emotional beats to maintain engagement throughout. medium ( Scene Sequence number 11 (142) )

MissingElements

A deeper exploration of the cultural context surrounding the characters could enhance the narrative's richness. medium ( Scene Sequence number 12 (50) )
Additional background on Oliver's life in America could provide more depth to his character and motivations. medium ( Scene Sequence number 13 (86) )
More insight into Elio's internal struggles and conflicts would strengthen the emotional impact of the story. medium ( Scene Sequence number 14 (125) )
The screenplay could benefit from a clearer thematic statement that ties together the various narrative threads. medium ( Scene Sequence number 15 (142) )
A more explicit exploration of the consequences of Elio and Oliver's relationship could add depth to the narrative. medium ( Scene Sequence number 16 (50) )

NotablePoints

The ending is poignant and reflective, leaving a lasting impression on the audience about the nature of love and memory. high ( Scene Sequence number 17 (142) )
The use of music throughout the screenplay enhances the emotional landscape and connects the characters' experiences. high ( Scene Sequence number 18 (125) )
The screenplay's exploration of sexuality is handled with sensitivity and authenticity, making it relatable to a wide audience. high ( Scene Sequence number 19 (50) )
The dynamic between Elio and his parents adds depth to the narrative, showcasing a supportive family environment. high ( Scene Sequence number 20 (86) )
The screenplay's ability to evoke nostalgia and longing is a significant strength, resonating with audiences on a personal level. high ( Scene Sequence number 21 (142) )

Blind Spots

Character Motivation The screenplay occasionally lacks clarity in character motivations, particularly regarding Elio's feelings towards Marzia and how they contrast with his feelings for Oliver. This could lead to confusion about his emotional journey. medium

Amateur Giveaways

Pacing Issues Certain scenes feel overly drawn out, which can disrupt the flow of the narrative. For example, the middle sections may benefit from tighter editing to maintain engagement. medium

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Screenplay Insights:

Overall Grade: 8.50

Characters: 7.6, The screenplay effectively develops its characters, particularly Elio and Oliver, showcasing their emotional depth and complex relationships. However, there are opportunities to enhance the relatability and consistency of supporting characters, which could deepen the audience's connection to the narrative. See More

Premise: 8.7, The screenplay effectively establishes a compelling premise centered around the complex emotional relationship between Elio and Oliver, set against the backdrop of a picturesque Italian summer. However, there are opportunities to enhance clarity and engagement by refining character motivations and deepening thematic exploration. See More

Structure: 8.0, The screenplay 'Call Me by Your Name' effectively captures the emotional complexity of first love through its well-structured narrative and character arcs. The pacing is generally strong, allowing for moments of tension and release that engage the audience. However, there are areas where the plot could benefit from clearer conflict escalation and resolution, particularly in the latter half, to enhance dramatic tension and thematic depth. See More

Theme: 8.4, The screenplay 'Call Me by Your Name' effectively conveys its themes of love, longing, and the complexities of human relationships through rich character development and evocative imagery. The emotional depth is palpable, particularly in the exploration of Elio's internal struggles and his relationship with Oliver. However, there are opportunities to refine the clarity of certain themes and enhance their integration into the narrative, particularly regarding the implications of societal expectations and the passage of time. See More

Visual Impact: 7.8, The screenplay 'Call Me by Your Name' excels in its evocative visual imagery, effectively capturing the emotional nuances of its characters and their relationships. The vivid descriptions of settings and interactions create a rich tapestry that immerses the audience in the story's emotional landscape. However, there are opportunities to enhance the creativity and dynamism of the visual storytelling to further elevate the screenplay's impact. See More

Emotional Impact: 8.8, The screenplay 'Call Me by Your Name' effectively elicits deep emotional responses through its nuanced character arcs and rich thematic exploration of love, longing, and self-discovery. However, there are opportunities to enhance emotional depth by further developing the supporting characters and their relationships with Elio and Oliver. See More

Conflict: 7.4, The screenplay effectively presents conflict and stakes through Elio's internal struggles and his evolving relationship with Oliver. However, there are opportunities to enhance narrative tension by deepening the emotional stakes and integrating more external conflicts that challenge the characters' desires. See More

Originality: 8.6, The screenplay 'Call Me by Your Name' showcases a profound exploration of love and identity through its unique characters and evocative setting. Its originality lies in the nuanced portrayal of a summer romance that transcends conventional storytelling, while its creativity is evident in the rich emotional depth and sensory details that enhance the narrative. See More

Summary **Title: Call Me by Your Name** **Summary:** Set against the picturesque backdrop of 1980s Italy, "Call Me by Your Name" follows the intense and transformative summer romance between a 17-year-old boy, Elio Perlman, and his father's graduate student, 25-year-old Oliver. As Oliver arrives at the Perlman villa, Elio grapples with feelings of jealousy and rivalry, referring to Oliver as 'the usurper.' Their initial interactions are marked by awkwardness and tension, yet an undeniable attraction begins to emerge. Elio's fascination with Oliver grows as they share mundane moments together, from bike rides and coffee at a café to intimate family dinners—all infused with playful banter and emotional complexity. Elio's attempts to connect with Oliver often feel thwarted by Oliver's non-committal demeanor, leaving Elio both inspired and frustrated. Their dynamic shifts as they share moments of vulnerability, playfulness, and artistic expressions, underpinning Elio’s growing feelings and insecurities. As the days unfold, Elio navigates conflicting emotions, dating Marzia while simultaneously developing a profound connection with Oliver. Tension builds through intimate conversations and physical closeness, culminating in a pivotal moment where Elio and Oliver finally surrender to their desires, leading to a passionate encounter that deepens their bond. However, the fleeting nature of their summer together looms overhead. Elio wrestles with the pain of impending separation as Oliver prepares to return to America. Their experiences culminate in bittersweet moments of intimacy, longing, and emotional honesty, ultimately highlighting the beauty and tragedy of youth and desire. As the summer comes to a close, Elio faces the fallout of their romance. He is left to confront his feelings of loss and heartache when Oliver departs, leading to introspective reflections on love and the ephemeral nature of shared moments. The story concludes months later as Elio hears from Oliver, who is now engaged, prompting a poignant examination of memory, longing, and the enduring impact of their time together. "Call Me by Your Name" is a rich exploration of first love, self-discovery, and the bittersweet nature of fleeting moments, capturing the essence of youthful passion and the complexity of emotional connections that resonate long after the summer sun has set.

Screenplay Story Analysis

Story Critique The screenplay boasts a strong foundation in its exploration of a complex, passionate relationship between two young men. The setting of the Italian villa provides a rich backdrop for the unfolding romance, enhancing the emotional depth of the story. The character development, particularly of Elio, is compelling; his internal struggles are palpable, making him a sympathetic and relatable protagonist. The incorporation of intellectual discussions and cultural details adds layers of depth and sophistication, enriching the overall narrative. However, the pacing sometimes feels uneven, with certain plot points lingering longer than necessary while others feel underdeveloped. The narrative occasionally loses focus, straying from the central relationship's progression. The subplot with Marzia, while adding complexity, sometimes detracts from the core emotional trajectory of Elio and Oliver's dynamic. The ending, while poignant, might benefit from a more conclusive resolution.

Suggestions:

Streamline the narrative, focusing more intensely on the central relationship between Elio and Oliver while subtly reducing the subplots.
Introduce a clear overarching conflict that drives the plot forward, perhaps related to external pressures or internal struggles within the relationship.
Develop a stronger sense of rising stakes, intensifying the emotional tension as the story progresses towards its climax.
Explore Oliver's character more deeply, providing greater insight into his motivations and internal conflicts.
Re-evaluate the ending to ensure a more satisfying conclusion, perhaps offering a more definitive resolution to the central relationship.

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Beginning The opening scenes effectively establish the setting and introduce the key characters. The initial tension between Elio and Oliver is intriguing, immediately creating a sense of anticipation. The use of French adds a subtle layer of sophistication and complexity to the dialogue. However, the introduction feels somewhat slow, lacking a compelling hook that immediately grabs the audience's attention. The early scenes also lack a clear inciting incident that sets the story's central conflict in motion. While the introduction of the characters is adequate, there’s a lack of immediate understanding of their motivations and the stakes involved in their relationship.

Suggestions:

Begin the story with a more dramatic or emotionally charged scene to immediately engage the audience.
Introduce a clear inciting incident early on to establish the central conflict.
Develop the initial tension between Elio and Oliver more explicitly, making their conflict more immediate and understandable.
Provide more backstory for the characters, particularly Oliver, to provide the audience with a clearer understanding of their motivations.

Middle The middle section effectively develops the relationship between Elio and Oliver, showcasing both the intimacy and the tension between them. The incorporation of various social events and settings adds dynamism to the narrative. The intellectual conversations and cultural details add layers of complexity and richness. However, the pacing feels uneven in the middle; certain scenes drag while others feel rushed. The introduction of subplots, like Elio's relationship with Marzia, sometimes feels jarring and distracts from the central focus on Elio and Oliver. The narrative could benefit from a stronger sense of dramatic arc, with clearer rising action leading to a well-defined climax.

Suggestions:

Streamline the subplots, focusing more on their impact on the central relationship rather than on their own independent developments.
Create a more defined dramatic arc, with clearer rising action and a more impactful climax.
Develop the emotional tension between Elio and Oliver more consistently, ensuring a gradual build-up towards the climax.
Ensure a smoother integration of subplots, connecting them more directly to the central relationship's progression.

Ending The ending is poignant and bittersweet, reflecting the complexities of the relationship. The final scenes effectively capture the emotional weight of separation and the lingering feelings between Elio and Oliver. The phone call between Elio and Oliver provides a satisfying sense of closure. However, the ending might feel somewhat abrupt for some viewers. The resolution of Elio's relationship with Marzia feels somewhat underdeveloped. The final scenes showing the family at the villa feel somewhat inconsequential to the emotional journey of Elio and Oliver, and the final image might lack the symbolic weight necessary for a strong emotional conclusion.

Suggestions:

Extend the final scenes between Elio and Oliver, giving more emotional weight to their farewell.
Provide a more conclusive resolution to Elio's relationship with Marzia.
Create a more powerful and symbolic final image that encapsulates the themes of the story.
Consider adding a brief epilogue that hints at the characters' futures, offering a sense of lasting impact.

CharacterInconsistencies

Character Oliver
Description The narrator's description of Oliver having three personalities based on his swimsuit color feels contrived and undermines Oliver's character development. It's a simplistic device to explain shifts in his behavior that could be better achieved through nuanced writing and consistent character portrayal.
( Scene 27 )
Character Elio
Description Elio's actions in Scene 53 (sniffing and licking Oliver's discarded underwear) are jarring and feel out of character. While the film aims for realism, this action borders on obsessive and detracts from Elio's otherwise nuanced portrayal. A more subtle approach would be more effective in conveying Elio's longing.
( Scene 53 )
Character Elio
Description Elio's masturbation with a peach in the attic is a shocking and arguably gratuitous scene that disrupts the film's overall tone. While exploring themes of sexuality and self-discovery, this specific act seems excessive and potentially detracts from the emotional impact of the story.
( Scene 116 )

StoryInconsistencies

Description The narration in Sequence 9 and 17 repeats the explanation of the Perlmans' summer guest program. This information is crucial early on, but repeating it later feels redundant and slows down the narrative.
( Scene 9 Scene 17 )
Description The narrator's sudden intrusion to explain the Professor's guest program disrupts the natural flow of the scene. This information could be integrated more subtly through dialogue or action.
( Scene 11 )

PlotHoles

DialogueAuthenticity

Description The dialogue feels slightly stilted in Sequence 10, particularly Oliver's overly formal language ("I know myself") in the context of a relaxed breakfast setting. The dialogue aims to create a certain dynamic, but it could be more natural.
( Scene 10 )
Description The extended dialogue between Elio and Marzia in French, while adding depth, might feel slightly verbose and less natural in its rhythm than other conversations in the film. Some streamlining could enhance pacing and realism.
( Scene 83 )

Redundancies

Element Repeated emphasis on the soft-boiled egg scene
( Scene 10 Scene 36 Scene 68 )
Suggestion The recurring soft-boiled egg motif, used to illustrate Oliver's integration into the family and Elio's contrasting skill, could be streamlined. Perhaps focusing on one key scene would enhance its impact.
Element Multiple instances of language switching
( Scene 1 Scene 21 )
Suggestion While the multilingual aspect is a feature of the film, the constant switching could be slightly more concise to avoid jarring the reader/viewer. Consider subtle shifts, instead of abrupt changes, between languages.

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Elio - Score: 93/100

Role

Protagonist

Personality

MBTI: INFP
Enneagram: Type 4 - The Individualist

Scenes

Strongest: #34
Weakest: #19

Character Analysis Overview

Foundational Definition 9/10

Elio is an introspective teenager grappling with complex emotions.

Complexity And Depth 8/10

Elio's emotional complexities revolve around desire, fear of rejection, and vulnerability.

Arc Or Purposeful Stasis 9/10

Elio grows from a self-conscious teenager to a young man defined by a profound love experience.

Dialogue And Voice 8/10

Elio’s dialogue is marked by introspection, uncertainty, and emotional depth.

Behavior And Choices 9/10

Elio’s choices reflect a deep conflict between desire and fear of vulnerability.

Relationship Dynamics 10/10

Elio's relationships reveal his depth while showcasing his internal struggles with love.

Scene Impact 10/10

Elio's presence often sparks emotional tension and drives the narrative forward.

Role Fulfillment 10/10

Elio fulfills the role of a dynamic protagonist navigating love and self-discovery.

Thematic Plot Integration 10/10

Elio's journey interweaves personal growth with larger themes of love and loss.

Emotional Resonance 10/10

Elio's emotional journey resonates powerfully with the audience.

Foundational Definition

Score: 9

Elio is a 17-year-old boy living in Italy during the summer of 1983. His background is one rooted in a semi-intellectual family, given his father is a professor. He possesses a deep love for music and literature, which shapes his worldview as someone who experiences emotions intensely but struggles to express them. This foundational element drives much of his curiosity and desire for connection, particularly with Oliver, who symbolizes both attraction and the complexity of young, uncharted love.

Values And Beliefs: Music, literature, love, yearning for connection, exploration of identity.

Strengths And Skills: Musical talent, intellectual curiosity, emotional depth.

Suggestions

Explore Elio's character through scenes that highlight his relationship with music.
Further develop his emotional vulnerability in dialogues with Oliver.

Follow-up Questions

How does Elio's relationship with his parents influence his emotional struggles?
What role does music play in shaping his identity throughout the story?

Complexity And Depth

Score: 8

Elio bears the internal conflict of youthful desire that clashes with his fear of vulnerability. His emotional wound stems from the fear of rejection and not being understood, particularly in relation to Oliver. He also struggles with societal expectations regarding masculinity and love, causing him to oscillate between joy and pain.

Character Wound: Fear of unreciprocated love and emotional isolation.

Character Flaws: Insecurity, self-doubt, difficulty communicating feelings.

Suggestions

Include additional inner-monologues that showcase Elio's fears and aspirations.
Develop interactions with Marzia to explore his emotional fluctuations.

Follow-up Questions

How do Elio’s internal conflicts manifest in his interactions with Oliver?
What past experiences might have contributed to his emotional wounds?

Arc Or Purposeful Stasis

Score: 9

Throughout the story, Elio undergoes a significant transformation, evolving through his experiences with love and loss. His character shifts from being an insecure youth to someone deeply aware of his emotions, catalyzed by his relationship with Oliver. The end symbolizes a poignant moment of realization that love can be fleeting yet deeply impactful.

Polarity Changes: Elio experiences joy in new love juxtaposed with profound sadness when faced with separation.

Transformation Triggers: His relationship with Oliver sparks both transformation and emotional turmoil.

Suggestions

Emphasize key moments that signify Elio’s emotional growth.
Use visual motifs to represent his journey alongside Oliver.

Follow-up Questions

What specific moments mark the turning points in Elio’s character progression?
How does Elio’s perception of love change from the beginning to the end of the screenplay?

Dialogue And Voice

Score: 8

Elio's dialogue carries a poetic quality, intertwined with anxiety and longing. His speech often features literary references and a tendency to overthink conversations, which emphasizes his intellectual side while exposing his vulnerabilities. This dynamic creates a compelling contrast between his eloquence and emotional wavering.

Unique Voice: Elio’s speech often reflects his artistic interests and emotional turbulence, using a mix of Italian, French, and English that embodies his multicultural background.

Suggestions

Further diversify Elio's expressions to include more non-verbal cues.
Highlight his literary influences in dialogues to deepen his character portrayal.

Follow-up Questions

How does Elio use language to mask his true feelings?
In what ways does his choice of words influence his relationship with Oliver?

Behavior And Choices

Score: 9

Elio’s behavior is often reactive, influenced heavily by his emotions. Throughout the screenplay, his decisions—from connecting with Marzia to pursuing a more intimate relationship with Oliver—highlight his internal conflicts. His choices often showcase a pattern of hesitance followed by boldness as he explores his identity and desires.

Motivations: His motivations revolve around the desire for connection and the complexities of first love.

Desires Vs Needs: Externally, Elio desires acceptance and love from Oliver; internally, he needs to reconcile his feelings and fears of heartbreak.

Suggestions

Strengthen the representation of Elio's dilemmas through more ambiguous choices.
Include moments where Elio challenges his own fears in decisive actions.

Follow-up Questions

What key decisions most significantly affect Elio’s character development?
How might Elio behave differently if he were more confident in his feelings?

Relationship Dynamics

Score: 10

Elio's bond with his parents is both supportive and complex, characterized by open dialogues about emotions. His romantic connections with both Marzia and Oliver illustrate his emotional landscape—marked by confusion, longing, and the exploration of intimacy. Each relationship unveils facets of his character, highlighting his growth.

Suggestions

Develop the dynamics with supporting characters to enrich Elio's narrative.
Explore more nuances in Elio's relationship with Marzia post-Oliver.

Follow-up Questions

How do Elio's relationships with others serve as catalysts for his growth?
In what ways do Elio's interactions with his family influence his connections with others?

Scene Impact

Score: 10

Elio's actions and choices create significant ripple effects in each scene. Whether it’s through his romantic connections or personal struggles, his character introduces conflict, clarifies emotional stakes, and enriches the emotional tone. His interactions with Oliver serve as the emotional core of the screenplay, deeply influencing the story's trajectory.

Suggestions

Maximize emotional stakes in scenes by showcasing Elio's internal conflict visually.
Use Elio’s decisions to pivot scene directions and outcomes more distinctly.

Follow-up Questions

In what scenes does Elio's emotional presence feel most pronounced?
How does Elio’s influence shift the dynamics of ensemble scenes?

Role Fulfillment

Score: 10

As the protagonist, Elio’s character arc is pivotal, showcasing his transformation amid the exploration of love, identity, and vulnerability. His interactions and decisions shape the narrative, allowing him to be relatable and deeply human. Elio’s role encapsulates the themes of desire, awakening, and loss that permeate the screenplay.

Symbolic Role: Elio represents the journey of first love and the complexities it entails, embodying both innocence and emotional depth.

Suggestions

Emphasize Elio’s internal conflict in critical scenes to strengthen symbolic motifs.
Utilize contrasting moments to highlight his growth and role as a protagonist.

Follow-up Questions

How do Elio’s relationships contribute to his role in the narrative?
What symbolic themes could be further highlighted through Elio's character?

Thematic Plot Integration

Score: 10

Elio’s story arc illustrates significant themes of love, yearning, adolescence, and the bittersweet nature of memories. His experiences with Oliver serve as a microcosm of the universal exploration of first love—exceptional yet fleeting. Elio’s evolution mirrors the narrative's foundational themes, connecting personal growth with relatable existential questions.

Suggestions

Draw stronger parallels between Elio’s emotional experiences and the overarching themes.
Incorporate visual symbols that enhance thematic expression related to Elio’s growth.

Follow-up Questions

What are the central themes that Elio's journey emphasizes throughout the screenplay?
How could Elio's encounters with other characters further reinforce the story's themes?

Emotional Resonance

Score: 10

Elio's character resonates with audiences through his intense emotional exploration. His journey evokes a spectrum of feelings, from joy to heartbreak, creating a relatable narrative. The impact of his relationships and personal dilemmas invites viewers to reflect on their experiences of love and loss, amplifying the emotional stakes tied to his character.

Emotional Impact: Elio evokes profound empathy and nostalgia, representing the essence of young love.

Suggestions

Create additional layers of emotional depth by expanding Elio’s reflective moments.
Highlight pivotal emotional scenes to guide audience engagement.

Follow-up Questions

What specific scenes create the strongest emotional responses regarding Elio?
How can Elio’s present emotional state be contrasted with future reflections?

Personality Types

MBTI: infp

Elio's idealism, deep emotions, and introspective nature align with the traits of an INFP.

Confidence: 85%

Possible Alternative Type: intp (15%)

Suggestions

Consider Elio’s intuitive insights for character development and dialogue.
Integrate external conflicts against his idealistic nature for deeper narrative tension.

Follow-up Questions

How do Elio’s traits as an INFP manifest in his relationships?
What internal struggles does he face that align with the INFP type?

Enneagram: type 4 - the individualist

Elio’s emotional depth, longing for uniqueness, and personal expression are characteristic of Enneagram Type 4.

Confidence: 90%

Possible Alternative Type: type 5 - the investigator (10%)

Suggestions

Explore the complexity of Elio’s Type 4 traits in his resolve for authenticity.
Focus on his need for connection and understanding in his deepest relationships.

Follow-up Questions

How do Elio’s Type 4 characteristics influence his decisions throughout the narrative?
What fears or desires drive his Type 4 behaviors?

Key Scenes

Strongest Scene (34)

The scene where Elio and Oliver express their feelings for each other in a passionate kiss.

Why: This moment encapsulates the climax of their relationship and showcases Elio's emotional depth.

Weakest Scene (19)

Elio struggles during the volleyball match, feeling sidelined and overshadowed.

Why: This scene showcases his insecurities and reflects his fear of Oliver's attention being diverted.

Suggestions:

Enhance his emotional turmoil by emphasizing his thoughts during this scene.
Create a stronger visual contrast between Elio and Oliver’s interactions.

Oliver - Score: 88/100

Role

Protagonist

Personality

MBTI: ENFP
Enneagram: Type 4 (Individualist)

Scenes

Strongest: #105
Weakest: #6

Character Analysis Overview

Foundational Definition 8/10

American intern with charm and complexity.

Complexity And Depth 9/10

Emotionally conflicted character with depth.

Arc Or Purposeful Stasis 8/10

Oliver’s journey of growth and vulnerability.

Dialogue And Voice 8/10

Distinctive voice that balances charm and uncertainty.

Behavior And Choices 9/10

Decisions driven by fear of emotional attachment.

Relationship Dynamics 9/10

Complex interplay of desire, fear, and emotional connection.

Scene Impact 9/10

Significant presence that drives emotional conflict.

Role Fulfillment 9/10

Embodiment of romantic longing and emotional complexity.

Thematic Plot Integration 9/10

Interweaving themes of love, identity, and self-discovery.

Emotional Resonance 10/10

Elicits deep emotional responses, forming strong audience bonds.

Foundational Definition

Score: 8

Oliver is a 25-year-old American graduate student who arrives at the Perlman villa for a six-week summer internship. He embodies a blend of charm, intellect, and a somewhat aloof attitude that makes him both appealing and intimidating to others, particularly to Elio. His early interactions show a mix of confidence and shyness, indicative of his struggle to navigate his own desires amidst the expectations of those around him. This duality sets the stage for his overall character arc and relationships throughout the narrative.

Values And Beliefs: Independence, love with no strings attached, spontaneity.

Strengths And Skills: Charismatic, quick-witted, knowledgeable about literature and philosophy.

Suggestions

Explore Oliver's background further to understand the roots of his charm and confidence.
Delve deeper into his academic aspirations to provide more context to his character.

Follow-up Questions

What personal events shaped Oliver into the character we see at the villa?
How does Oliver's academic background influence his attitude towards relationships?

Complexity And Depth

Score: 9

Oliver grapples with emotional complexity, particularly in his relationship with Elio. Despite his confident demeanor, he reveals vulnerability and confusion regarding his feelings and desires, especially when confronted with societal pressures. His reluctance to fully commit or display emotional depth stems from a fear of intimacy and the consequences that arise from it. This internal conflict tightens the emotional stakes of his relationships, especially with Elio, who represents both an attraction and a source of anxiety for him.

Character Wound: Fear of vulnerability and intimacy.

Character Flaws: Aloofness, emotional detachment, avoidance of commitments.

Suggestions

Create scenes where Oliver faces situations that challenge his emotional detachment.
Introduce a moment where Oliver reflects deeply on his feelings to show his internal struggle.

Follow-up Questions

How do Oliver's past relationships inform his current behaviors?
What does Oliver fear losing if he truly opens up to Elio?

Arc Or Purposeful Stasis

Score: 8

Throughout the screenplay, Oliver transitions from a more guarded character to one willing to embrace vulnerability and intimacy. Early on, he approaches relationships with a detached charm but gradually allows himself to engage on a deeper emotional level through his bond with Elio. His willingness to act on his desires, despite the fear of repercussions, signifies a significant shift in his character, highlighting a theme of love versus fear.

Polarity Changes: Development of deeper emotional connections with Elio; avoidance to acceptance of feelings.

Transformation Triggers: Key conversations with Elio that challenge his emotional walls.

Suggestions

Enhance his character arc by incorporating moments of hesitation mixed with impulsive decisions.
Add more conversations where Oliver's emotional state is revealed in contrast to his outward demeanor.

Follow-up Questions

What specific events cause Oliver to start expressing his emotions?
How does he reconcile his feelings for Elio with his fear of commitment?

Dialogue And Voice

Score: 8

Oliver’s dialogue reflects a blend of charm and intellect with a touch of humor that masks his insecurities. His ability to engage in deep philosophical discussions reveals a scholarly side, yet his flirtatious banter with Elio displays a playful confidence. His voice evolves as he allows more emotion to seep into his words, creating a richer tapestry of expression that denotes his changing relationship with Elio.

Unique Voice: Humorous, intellectual, occasionally evasive.

Suggestions

Incorporate more philosophical discussions that reveal the character's inner conflicts and thoughts.
Show changes in Oliver’s tone as he becomes more comfortable with his feelings for Elio.

Follow-up Questions

What are some past conversations that reflect Oliver's evolving feelings?
How does his tone change when he interacts with different characters?

Behavior And Choices

Score: 9

Throughout the screenplay, Oliver often grapples with his motivations, leading to choices that both engage and distance him from others. His initial attitude towards relationships is one of detachment, preferring to maintain distance due to fears of commitment. Yet, as he grows closer to Elio, he faces situations where his choices directly impact his emotional wellbeing. This dichotomy creates tension that propels the narrative forward.

Motivations: Desire for connection versus fear of vulnerability.

Desires Vs Needs: Desires casual relationships while needing deeper emotional connections.

Suggestions

Show more internal dialogue that reveals Oliver's real-time conflict when making decisions.
Create moments where Oliver chooses to confront situations instead of sidestepping them.

Follow-up Questions

What pivotal moments lead Oliver to take risks with his emotions?
How do his choices impact his relationship with Elio in the long run?

Relationship Dynamics

Score: 9

Oliver’s relationships, particularly with Elio, are the heart of the story. His dynamic with Elio is marked by an initial spark that gives way to emotional tension as they try to navigate their feelings together. Oliver’s hesitance speaks volumes of his deeper fears, and each interaction illuminates the push and pull between desire and fear of vulnerability. This relationship serves to establish the emotional core of the narrative, making it both compelling and relatable.

Suggestions

Highlight moments of tension in Oliver and Elio's interactions to portray his conflicting emotions.
Incorporate reactions from other characters that reflect their perspectives on Oliver’s actions.

Follow-up Questions

How do Oliver's existing relationships influence his bond with Elio?
What aspects of their connection do you think push Oliver towards greater vulnerability?

Scene Impact

Score: 9

Oliver’s presence in scenes is often palpable, introducing conflict and a charged atmosphere. His interactions with Elio elicit a spectrum of emotions, from excitement to anxiety. Whether in quiet moments of intimacy or charged exchanges, he plays a significant role in steering the emotional tone of each scene. This impact is heightened by his evolution, shifting from a charming yet distant figure to one of emotional openness as the narrative unfolds.

Suggestions

Adjust scenes where Oliver must face the consequences of his decisions to maximize emotional stakes.
Introduce moments that juxtapose his earlier behavior with his current openness to deepen scene impact.

Follow-up Questions

In which scenes does Oliver's emotional presence most strongly alter the mood?
How would the scenes differ if Oliver were written with a different emotional state?

Role Fulfillment

Score: 9

As the central romantic figure, Oliver embodies both desire and complexity in the narrative. His role underscores themes of love, longing, and the challenge of vulnerability. His journey symbolizes the highs and lows of a summer romance, serving as both a catalyst for Elio’s growth and a reflection of the struggles inherent in personal connection. His presence enriches the plot significantly, making his narrative arc key to the overall story.

Symbolic Role: The romantic interest representing desire and hindrance.

Suggestions

Employ symbolic motifs aligned with Oliver’s emotional state to enhance his narrative significance.
Subvert the expectations surrounding his character type to deepen his role.

Follow-up Questions

How does Oliver's character challenge or conform to typical romantic tropes?
What lessons from Oliver's role do you think resonate most deeply with the audience?

Thematic Plot Integration

Score: 9

Oliver’s journey integrates seamlessly with the screenplay’s broader themes of love, identity, and the complexity of human connection. His character embodies the tension between societal expectations and personal desires, echoing the narrative’s exploration of what it means to love deeply and authentically. His decisions and transformations amplify the story's key themes, effectively driving the plot forward while revealing character depth and vulnerability.

Suggestions

Embellish scenes that juxtapose Oliver’s inner conflict with the overarching themes to deepen thematic resonance.
Draw connections between Oliver’s experiences and societal expectations to enhance thematic engagement.

Follow-up Questions

In what ways do you think Oliver’s experiences challenge societal norms?
How does Oliver’s character journey reflect or counter the overarching themes of the screenplay?

Emotional Resonance

Score: 10

Oliver creates a complex emotional response in the audience, evoking sympathy, tension, and moments of profound longing. His journey alongside Elio resonates deeply with viewers, making the fleeting nature of their summer romance feel significant and heartbreaking. The emotional beats tied to Oliver, especially in moments of vulnerability and connection, serve to engage the audience thoroughly and amplify the thematic weight of the narrative.

Emotional Impact: Profound attachment and longing; emotional tension and release.

Suggestions

Highlight subtle moments of vulnerability in Oliver to deepen audience connection.
Craft scenes that emphasize the fleeting yet impactful nature of Oliver's bond with Elio.

Follow-up Questions

What specific moments in Oliver's journey do you find most emotionally impactful?
How does Oliver’s emotional journey differ from or complement Elio’s?

Personality Types

MBTI: enfp

Oliver exhibits characteristics associated with ENFPs, including charm, enthusiasm for new experiences, and emotional depth.

Confidence: 85%

Possible Alternative Type: infj (75%)

Suggestions

Highlight his extroverted qualities more prominently in social interactions.
Explore moments of introspection that could reveal a thoughtful side.

Follow-up Questions

How do Oliver's unvoiced thoughts contrast with his outward persona?
In which scenes does his extroversion clash with any underlying insecurities?

Enneagram: type 4 (individualist)

As a character in search of authenticity and identity, Oliver exemplifies traits of the Type 4, often feeling different or misunderstood.

Confidence: 70%

Possible Alternative Type: type 3 (achiever) (60%)

Suggestions

Create scenarios that explore his sense of individuality deeply.
Show how his desire for authenticity might clash with societal expectations.

Follow-up Questions

In what ways does Oliver express his individuality throughout the story?
How does his perceived uniqueness impact his relationships with others?

Key Scenes

Strongest Scene (105)

The intimate scene in Oliver's room where they share their first kiss, marking a turning point in their relationship.

Why: This scene illustrates Oliver's emotional vulnerability juxtaposed against his initial aloof behavior, showcasing character development.

Weakest Scene (6)

In the breakfast scene, Oliver appears detached and nonchalant, impacting his interactions with Elio.

Why: This moment does not showcase Oliver's charm or complexity, which are vital for audience engagement.

Suggestions:

Add elements that show Oliver's growing connection to Elio, even in mundane scenes like breakfast.
Incorporate more playful banter that reveals emotional undercurrents.

Perlman - Score: 78/100

Role

Mentor

Personality

MBTI: INFJ
Enneagram: Type 2 (The Helper)

Scenes

Strongest: #141
Weakest: #12

Character Analysis Overview

Foundational Definition 8/10

Warm and nurturing mentor, guiding his family and guests.

Complexity And Depth 7/10

Hiding emotional scars beneath mentorship, exemplifying internal conflict.

Arc Or Purposeful Stasis 6/10

Maintains stability but encourages growth in others without significantly changing himself.

Dialogue And Voice 8/10

Intellectual and compassionate, with a tone that emphasizes teaching and wisdom.

Behavior And Choices 7/10

Acts as a steady presence, guiding through wisdom rather than strictness.

Relationship Dynamics 8/10

Caring father-son relationship, but also a mentor to Oliver.

Scene Impact 8/10

A stabilizing force during pivotal emotional scenes.

Role Fulfillment 9/10

Guiding mentor fulfilling the role of both father and educator.

Thematic Plot Integration 9/10

Integral to the exploration of love, knowledge, and generational gaps.

Emotional Resonance 8/10

Evokes feelings of empathy and admiration.

Foundational Definition

Score: 8

Professor Perlman is a distinguished academic who embodies values of knowledge, culture, and open-mindedness. His role as the head of the household makes him a guiding figure for Elio and Oliver, establishing a nurturing environment filled with intellectual curiosity. Perlman’s character is crucial as he balances the academic pressures of his guest, Oliver, with familial warmth, which allows for the exploration of deeper themes such as acceptance and love.

Values And Beliefs: Knowledge, cultural appreciation, familial love.

Strengths And Skills: Exceptional educator, supportive father, emotionally intelligent.

Suggestions

Highlight more of Perlman's backstory to deepen his influence on Elio.
Show Perlman discussing personal losses or triumphs to enrich his character depth.

Follow-up Questions

What specific experiences led Perlman to value knowledge so deeply?
How does Perlman's relationship with Oliver shape Elio's view of love?

Complexity And Depth

Score: 7

Perlman may appear confident and wise, but his character holds deeper emotional layers that hint at his own missed chances at love during his youth. This internal conflict emphasizes the importance of allowing his son to express his feelings freely, reflecting his own life's lessons.

Character Wound: Missed opportunities for love in his own youth.

Character Flaws: May be overly protective or unintentionally intrusive.

Suggestions

Integrate moments where Perlman's past influences his parenting style.
Show his vulnerabilities more explicitly in conversations with Elio.

Follow-up Questions

What regrets does Perlman have regarding his youthful love?
How does his experience affect his ability to guide Elio and Oliver?

Arc Or Purposeful Stasis

Score: 6

Throughout the story, Perlman remains consistent as a supportive father and mentor, yet the experiences of Elio and Oliver push him to reflect on his own past, making his character a reassuring presence despite the nuanced emotional landscape around him.

Polarity Changes: Perlman navigates from being a distanced observer to an engaged mentor.

Transformation Triggers: Elio's experiences and feelings draw Perlman out, prompting him to share wisdom.

Suggestions

Explore significant events that cause Perlman to reflect on his own choices.
Show more interaction with Elio that highlights moments of growth for both.

Follow-up Questions

What specific interactions with Elio influence Perlman's perspective on youth and love?
Are there moments where Perlman regrets potentially limiting his son's experiences?

Dialogue And Voice

Score: 8

Perlman's dialogue often serves dual purposes: to educate and to provide emotional support. His conversations with Elio are laced with reflections that resonate with the broader themes of the screenplay, and his voice establishes a contrast with younger, more impulsive characters.

Unique Voice: Articulate and thoughtful, often conveying deeper ideas about life and love.

Suggestions

Enhance Perlman's dialogues to reveal more of his emotional history.
Incorporate more informal moments to show his warmth outside of academia.

Follow-up Questions

What tone does Perlman adopt when discussing sensitive topics like love and loss?
How does Perlman's interaction style change during moments of emotional tension?

Behavior And Choices

Score: 7

Perlman's actions stem from a deep-seated desire to protect his family while encouraging Elio to seek his own path. However, he occasionally struggles with how much to intervene, which reflects his caring yet overprotective nature.

Motivations: Support his family and foster a nurturing environment.

Desires Vs Needs: Desires to teach and guide, but needs to release control over his son’s emotional journey.

Suggestions

Add scenes showcasing moments where Perlman must balance teaching with letting go.
Show how Perlman reacts to Oliver's influence on Elio more vividly.

Follow-up Questions

What situations cause Perlman to second-guess his protective instincts?
How does Perlman respond to moments of resistance from Elio?

Relationship Dynamics

Score: 8

Perlman’s relationships with Elio and Oliver provide rich ground for exploring themes of mentorship, familial bonds, and the complexity of love. His dynamic with Elio is built on trust and guidance, while with Oliver, he embodies professional admiration that underscores character connection.

Suggestions

Flesh out Perlman's interactions with Oliver to amplify mentorship themes.
Include more reflective moments between Perlman and Elio that delve into father-son dynamics.

Follow-up Questions

How does Perlman's relationship with Oliver impact Elio's feelings towards both his father and Oliver?
Are there instances where Perlman recognizes the love developing between Elio and Oliver?

Scene Impact

Score: 8

Perlman's presence serves as a grounding influence, offering wisdom and emotional insight during critical moments in the storyline. His interactions often create space for other characters to explore their tensions and fears.

Suggestions

Maximize Perlman's tension-release moments to enhance emotional stakes in scenes.
Use Perlman's actions to juxtapose younger characters' decisions more poignantly.

Follow-up Questions

How does Perlman’s involvement change the emotional trajectory of key scenes?
What would happen in pivotal moments without Perlman's influence nearby?

Role Fulfillment

Score: 9

Perlman effectively fulfills the role of mentor throughout the screenplay, embodying the archetype of the wise elder who facilitates the growth of the younger capable folk, primarily through his teachings and emotional support.

Symbolic Role: Symbol of generational wisdom and experience.

Suggestions

Emphasize Perlman's guiding nature in speeches to Elio that reinforce his symbolic role.
Include more dynamic interactions with other characters for a richer portrayal of his archetypal role.

Follow-up Questions

In what ways does Perlman subvert typical mentor roles in narratives?
Could Perlman's wisdom also present flaws that challenge his mentor status?

Thematic Plot Integration

Score: 9

Perlman's character arc intertwines with central themes of love and acceptance, highlighting the contrasts between youth and experience. His guidance shapes Elio's understanding of love, inevitably affecting his choices and growth.

Suggestions

Clarify Perlman's influences on Elio's understanding of love in pivotal moments.
Strengthen connections between Perlman's lessons and Elio's choices.

Follow-up Questions

How does Perlman's mentorship mirror or contrast with the primary love story?
What do Perlman's philosophies reveal about the overarching narrative themes?

Emotional Resonance

Score: 8

Perlman’s character engages audiences significantly through his blend of wisdom, emotional support, and undeniable humanity. His relationship with Elio showcases poignant moments of realization about love and acceptance.

Emotional Impact: An impactful character who invokes a mix of admiration and empathy.

Suggestions

Capitalize on Perlman's emotional moments to deepen audience connection.
Use Perlman's dialogues to accentuate moments where emotional truths unfold.

Follow-up Questions

What specific lines or actions can heighten the emotional weight of Perlman's character?
How can Perlman’s actions in moments of vulnerability enhance audience engagement?

Personality Types

MBTI: infj

Perlman embodies the nurturing, introspective, and insightful traits typical of an INFJ, as he seeks harmony and understanding in relationships.

Confidence: 85%

Possible Alternative Type: enfj (60%)

Suggestions

Highlight more situations in which Perlman demonstrates intuitive understanding or conflict resolution.
Enhance interactions that show both the introverted and extroverted sides of his personality.

Follow-up Questions

How does Perlman's counseling approach vary depending on whether he interacts with Elio or Oliver?
In what ways could Perlman's character benefit from more extroverted moments?

Enneagram: type 2 (the helper)

Perlman displays Helper traits through his nurturing behavior and desire to assist both Elio and Oliver on their personal journeys.

Confidence: 75%

Possible Alternative Type: type 9 (the peacemaker) (65%)

Suggestions

Incorporate moments where Perlman prioritizes others’ needs over his own to highlight his Type 2 tendencies.
Examine his reactions in conflict situations to reveal Type 9 characteristics more prominently.

Follow-up Questions

How do Perlman's helping behaviors complicate or assist Elio’s emotional growth?
What moments showcase Perlman's tendency toward enmeshment with those he helps?

Key Scenes

Strongest Scene (141)

In the scene where Perlman has a heartfelt conversation with Elio about love and pain, he showcases his wisdom.

Why: This stands out due to its emotional weight and depth, revealing Perlman’s character and depth of understanding.

Weakest Scene (12)

A weaker scene occurs during the dinner with guests where Perlman does not serve as prominently and feels overshadowed.

Why: This scene lacks Perlman's direct emotional engagement which can dilute his impactful presence.

Suggestions:

Increase Perlman's interactions during this scene to maintain his vital role.
Provide him with an impactful line that brings focus back to his influence

Primary Theme: First love and its complexities, particularly the intensity, insecurity, and bittersweet transience of a summer romance.

How Multiple Themes Interact: Several themes intertwine to enrich the primary theme. The themes of cultural difference and class, parental influence, and self-discovery all contribute to the nuances of Elio and Oliver's relationship. While these themes are significant, they ultimately serve to deepen and complicate the central narrative of first love, rather than overshadowing it. The cultural and class differences create tension and unspoken anxieties. Parental influence shapes Elio's reactions and behaviors. The journey of self-discovery intensifies the emotional weight of the romance and gives it a lasting resonance beyond the summer's end.

Theme

Theme Details

Theme Explanation

Primary Theme Support

First Love and its Complexities (60%)

The central focus is on Elio's intense, confusing, and ultimately heartbreaking first love for Oliver. The narrative follows the emotional arc of their relationship, from initial attraction and burgeoning intimacy to the inevitable parting and its lingering effects.

The theme explores the overwhelming emotions, insecurities, and uncertainties inherent in first love. It highlights the intoxicating blend of desire, joy, pain, and self-discovery that defines this formative experience. The film uses the brevity of summer as a metaphor for the fleeting nature of this specific type of romance, while emphasizing the lasting impact of it on Elio's emotional and personal growth.

This is the core theme around which all other themes revolve. The other themes provide context, adding layers of complexity to the emotional core of the story.

Strengthening First Love and its Complexities:

Suggestion Type	How to Strengthen the Theme
Dialogue - Scene Multiple	Intersperse subtle, emotionally charged dialogues between Elio and Oliver that hint at the complexities of their first love. For example, conversations about fear of vulnerability, the fleeting nature of summer romance, and the anxieties of unspoken feelings. These should be woven organically into existing conversations, not as forced monologues, but as small, meaningful exchanges that reveal their inner turmoil and the unspoken desires underlying their interactions.
Visual - Scene Multiple	Employ visual motifs to emphasize the theme. Recurring imagery, like the apricots (symbolizing sweetness and fleetingness), the changing colors of Oliver's bathing suits (representing his different personalities and emotional states), or the contrast between the vibrant summer setting and the melancholic tone of Elioâs internal struggles, will visually reinforce the themeâs complexities across the film.
Character Arc - Scene Elio	Develop Elio's character arc to reflect the full spectrum of first love. Show him moving beyond initial infatuation and jealousy to a deeper understanding of his own emotions, including his insecurities, vulnerabilities, and the pain of unrequited or complicated love. His journey shouldn't just be about Oliver; it should be about his self-discovery through this experience.
Story Arc - Scene Multiple	Structure the narrative to mirror the ebb and flow of first love. Include moments of intense connection interspersed with periods of distance, doubt, and uncertainty, reflecting the inherent instability and complexities of young love. The narrative should not only focus on the romantic connection but also showcase the wider impact of the experience on Elio's relationships with his family and friends.
Action & Subtext - Scene Multiple	Use subtext and meaningful actions to convey the emotional undercurrents of the relationship. Small gestures, like a lingering touch, an averted gaze, or a stolen glance, can speak volumes about the unspoken feelings and anxieties that define first love. Pay attention to the physical interactions between Elio and Oliver â not just the explicit moments, but the subtle ways they communicate through body language and non-verbal cues. This will create a more nuanced and emotionally resonant portrayal of their relationship.

Self-Discovery and Identity (25%)

Elio's journey of self-discovery is intertwined with his relationship with Oliver. He grapples with his sexuality, his emotions, and his place in the world. His interactions with Marzia and his own introspective moments throughout the story highlight this process.

The film explores how the experience of first love forces Elio to confront his own identity and feelings. His reactions and insecurities reveal his journey towards a deeper understanding of himself and the world around him.

This theme directly supports the primary theme by providing crucial insight into Elio's emotional responses to his love for Oliver. The self-discovery is fundamentally shaped and catalyzed by this relationship.

Cultural and Class Differences (10%)

Oliver's American background and his more worldly demeanor create a subtle tension and unspoken anxieties in his relationship with Elio, who is immersed in the Italian environment and his family's traditions.

The differences in cultural backgrounds and social standing influence the dynamics of their interaction. These differences contribute to the unspoken anxieties and uncertainties that underlie their romance.

This theme adds layers of complexity to the relationship, highlighting the challenges and misunderstandings that can arise from such differences. It subtly impacts the way both characters interact and communicate, adding to the overall emotional resonance.

Parental Influence and Observation (5%)

Elio's parents, particularly his mother, observe and comment on the relationship. Their presence and reactions shape Elio's experience and the overall atmosphere.

The parents act as observant figures, adding a layer of commentary and indirect guidance to Elio's journey. Their subtle understanding of the dynamics and their approach influences Elio's self-awareness.

The parental perspectives provide a contrasting viewpoint to Elio's intense emotional journey. Their involvement underscores the complexities of first love within a family context, adding a dimension of societal expectations and unspoken anxieties.

Screenwriting Resources on Themes

Articles

Site	Description
Studio Binder	Movie Themes: Examples of Common Themes for Screenwriters
Coverfly	Improving your Screenplay's theme
John August	Writing from Theme

YouTube Videos

Title	Description
Story, Plot, Genre, Theme - Screenwriting Basics	Screenwriting basics - beginner video
What is theme	Discussion on ways to layer theme into a screenplay.
Thematic Mistakes You're Making in Your Script	Common Theme mistakes and Philosophical Conflicts

Robert McKee: "The audience doesn’t go to the movies to see plot; they go to feel emotion, to be moved."

Scene by Scene Emotions

Goals and Philosophical Conflict
internal Goals	The protagonist's internal goals evolve from a desire for connection and understanding to grappling with feelings of love and jealousy regarding Oliver. Initially, Elio seeks hospitality and friendship but ultimately strives for emotional intimacy and affirmation of his identity amidst societal expectations.
External Goals	The protagonist's external goals shift from helping Oliver adjust to his new environment to pursuing moments of shared experience and connection, culminating in Elio's desire to maintain a relationship with Oliver despite the looming separation.
Philosophical Conflict	The overarching philosophical conflict revolves around the tension between self-acceptance and societal expectations of relationships and identity during a period of cultural conservatism. This conflict intertwines with Elio's journey as he navigates love and desire in a repressive environment.

Character Development Contribution: The progression of Elio's internal and external goals contributes significantly to his character development, showcasing his evolution from a youth grappling with confusion about his identity and desires to a more self-aware individual who ultimately embraces and communicates his emotions.

Narrative Structure Contribution: The interplay of internal goals and external actions drives the narrative structure, creating a compelling arc as Elio's experiences progress from uncertainty to empowerment, all while advancing the plot through his interactions with both Oliver and other characters.

Thematic Depth Contribution: The juxtaposition of goals and conflicts deepens the screenplay's themes, such as love, identity, longing, and the impact of societal norms, illustrating the complexities of personal relationships alongside the coming-of-age experience.

Screenwriting Resources on Goals and Philosophical Conflict

Articles

Site	Description
Creative Screenwriting	How Important Is A Character’s Goal?
Studio Binder	What is Conflict in a Story? A Quick Reminder of the Purpose of Conflict

YouTube Videos

Title	Description
How I Build a Story's Philosophical Conflict	How do you build philosophical conflict into your story? Where do you start? And how do you develop it into your characters and their external actions. Today I’m going to break this all down and make it fully clear in this episode.
Endings: The Good, the Bad, and the Insanely Great	By Michael Arndt: I put this lecture together in 2006, when I started work at Pixar on Toy Story 3. It looks at how to write an "insanely great" ending, using Star Wars, The Graduate, and Little Miss Sunshine as examples. 90 minutes
Tips for Writing Effective Character Goals	By Jessica Brody (Save the Cat!): Writing character goals is one of the most important jobs of any novelist. But are your character's goals...mushy?

What's going on here? - Scenes are rated on many critreia. The goal isn't to try to maximize every number; \ It's to make you aware of what's happening in your scenes. You might have very good reasons to have character development but not advance the story, or have a scene without conflict. Obviously if your dialogue is really bad, you should probably look into that.

Abbreviate Headers

Story Content

Character Development

Scene Elements

Audience Engagement

Technical Aspects

			Story Content			Character Development				Scene Elements					Audience Engagement				Technical Aspects
Click for Full Analysis	Tone	Overall	Concept	Plot	Originality	Characters	Character Changes	Internal Goal	External Goal	Conflict	Opposition	High stakes	Story forward	Twist	Emotional Impact	Dialogue	Engagement	Pacing	Formatting	Structure
1 - The Arrival of the Usurper	Intimate, Tense, Formal	8.2	8	8	9	9	7	8	7	7	7	6	8	7	7	8	9	8	8	8
2 - A Quiet Introduction	Curious, Intimate, Reflective	7.5	8	7	8	8	6	8	6	6	5	6	7	6	7	7	9	8	8	8
3 - A Quiet Dinner Invitation	Awkward, Reserved, Intrigued	8.5	9	8	8	9	8	8	7	8	7	7	8	7	9	8	9	8	8	8
4 - Breakfast Tensions	Awkward, Intrigued, Intimidating, Casual	8.2	8	8	9	9	8	8	7	8	6	7	8	7	8	9	9	8	8	8
5 - A Lesson in Etymology	Informative, Light-hearted, Intellectual	8.5	9	8	9	9	5	8	6	3	7	2	6	7	7	9	9	8	8	8
6 - A Summer's Farewell	Introspective, Playful, Inquisitive	8.5	8	8	9	9	7	8	7	4	6	3	8	7	8	9	9	8	8	8
7 - Unresolved Tensions	Introspective, Tense, Emotional	8.5	8	8	8	9	8	8	7	7	7	7	8	7	9	8	8	8	9	9
8 - Variations of the Heart	Introspective, Emotional, Intellectual	8.5	8	8	8	9	8	8	6	6	7	5	7	7	9	8	9	8	8	8
9 - A Game of Connection	Intriguing, Lively, Friendly	8.5	9	8	9	9	6	8	7	4	7	3	6	7	7	8	9	8	8	8
10 - Tension Under the Lime Trees	Tension, Jealousy, Awkwardness, Playfulness	8.5	8	8	8	9	7	8	7	7	7	7	8	7	8	9	9	8	9	9
11 - The Absence of Oliver	Tension, Intrigue, Discomfort	8.5	8	8	9	9	7	8	7	7	7	7	8	7	9	8	9	8	8	8
12 - A Night of Reluctance and Revelations	Tension, Resentment, Loneliness	8.5	9	8	9	9	9	8	7	9	7	8	8	7	9	9	9	8	8	8
13 - Under the Lime Trees: A Moment of Reflection	Intellectual, Reflective, Inquisitive	8.5	9	8	8	9	7	8	7	4	7	3	6	7	6	9	8	8	9	9
14 - Reflections at the South Terrazza	Introspective, Intellectual, Playful	8.5	9	8	9	9	7	8	6	6	6	5	8	7	8	9	8	8	8	8
15 - Playful Moments in the Orchard	Introspective, Playful, Tense	8.5	8	8	9	9	7	8	7	6	6	5	7	7	9	8	9	8	8	8
16 - Awkward Tensions	Tense, Awkward, Confused, Defiant	8.5	8	8	9	9	8	8	7	8	7	7	8	7	9	8	9	8	8	8
17 - Flirtations and Rivalries	Intimate, Playful, Envious	8.5	8	8	9	9	8	8	7	7	6	6	7	7	9	8	9	8	8	8
18 - Dancing with Desire	Envy, Amusement, Mesmerized, Embarrassment	8.5	8	8	9	9	7	8	7	7	7	6	8	7	9	8	9	8	8	8
19 - Secrets by the River	Intimate, Reflective, Tender	8.5	8	8	9	9	7	8	7	6	7	5	6	7	9	9	9	8	8	8
20 - Morning Banter and Anticipation	Reflective, Playful, Intimate	8.5	8	8	9	9	6	8	7	5	7	4	7	7	7	9	9	8	8	8
21 - A Tense Farewell	Tense, Teasing, Awkward, Surprised	8.5	8	8	8	9	7	8	7	7	7	6	8	7	9	9	9	8	8	8
22 - A Moment of Discovery	Excitement, Curiosity, Pride	8.5	8	8	8	8	6	8	9	3	7	6	8	7	8	8	9	8	9	9
23 - A Serene Discovery at Sirmione	Reflective, Informative, Playful	8.5	8	9	9	8	7	8	7	6	7	6	8	7	8	9	9	8	8	8
24 - Reflections in the Storm	Reflective, Intimate, Nostalgic	8.5	8	8	9	9	7	8	7	5	7	4	6	7	9	8	9	8	8	8
25 - Longing in Silence	Introspective, Longing, Sensual	8.5	8	8	9	9	8	9	7	6	7	6	7	7	9	7	9	8	8	8
26 - A Moment of Connection	Reflective, Intimate, Light-hearted	8.5	8	8	9	9	7	8	7	3	6	4	6	6	9	9	9	8	8	8
27 - A Lost Soul's Care	Intimate, Reflective, Tender	8.5	8	8	8	9	8	8	7	3	6	4	6	6	9	8	9	8	8	8
28 - Moments of Connection	Intense, Confessional, Reflective	9.2	9	9	8	10	9	9	7	9	6	8	9	7	10	9	9	8	8	8
29 - Whispers by the Water	Intimate, Tense, Yearning, Conflicted	9.2	9	9	9	9	9	9	7.5	8	8	9	9	8	10	9	9	8	8	8
30 - A Moment of Connection and Crisis	Intimate, Playful, Tender	8.5	8	8	9	9	7	8	7	3	7	2	6	7	9	7	9	8	8	8
31 - Tender Moments in the Villa	Intimate, Playful, Tender	8.5	8	8	8	9	7	8	7	3	6	2	6	6	9	9	8	8	9	9
32 - Playful Tensions	Intimate, Playful, Tense	8.5	8	8	9	9	7	8	7	6	7	5	7	7	9	8	9	8	8	8
33 - Betrayal in the Night	Intimate, Emotional, Tense	8.5	8	8	8	9	8	8	7	8	6	8	7	6	9	8	9	8	8	8
34 - Morning Reflections	Reflective, Intimate, Melancholic	8.5	8	8	9	9	8	8	7.5	4	8	3	7	7	9	9	9	8	8	8
35 - Restless Longing	Introspective, Tense, Reflective	8.5	8	8	8	9	7	8	7	6	6	6	7	7	9	8	9	8	8	8
36 - A Moment of Connection	Intimate, Reflective, Tender	9.2	9	9	9	10	8	9	7	3	6	4	7	7	10	9	9	8	8	8
37 - Unspoken Bonds	Intimate, Reflective, Tender	8.5	8	8	9	9	7	8	7	5	7	4	6	7	9	7	9	8	8	8
38 - Bittersweet Reunion at Sunset	Reflective, Intimate, Content	8.5	8	8	7	9	7	8	7	3	7	4	6	6	9	9	8	8	9	9
39 - Restless Longing	Restless, Intimate, Reflective	8.5	8	8	8	9	8	8	7	6	6	6	7	6	9	8	8	8	9	9
40 - Whispers of the Night	Intimate, Vulnerable, Passionate, Confused	8.5	8	8	9	9	8	8	7	7	7	7	8	7	9	9	9	8	8	8
41 - Whispers of Longing	Intimate, Reflective, Yearning	9.2	9	9	9	9	8	9	7	7	6	8	9	7	10	9	9	8	8	8
42 - Morning Whispers	Intimate, Reflective, Tender	9.2	9	9	9	9	8	8	7	3	7	7	8	7	10	9	9	8	8	8
43 - Art, Anxiety, and Dinner Plans	Reflective, Playful, Serious	8.5	9	8	9	9	7	8	7.5	6	7	7	8	8	8	8	9	8	8	8
44 - Afternoon Whispers	Intimate, Passionate, Playful	8.5	8	8	9	9	8	8	7	6	7	6	7	7	9	8	9	8	8	8
45 - A Lesson in Acceptance	Amused, Reflective, Intimate	8.5	8	8	9	9	8	8	7.5	5	8	4	7	7	8	9	9	8	8	8
46 - Introspection in the Night	Introspective, Yearning, Melancholic	8.5	8	8	9	9	8	8	7	3	6	4	6	7	9	7	9	8	8	8
47 - Nervous Connections	Anxious, Intimate, Reflective	8.5	8	8	9	9	7	8	7	6	7	5	7	7	9	9	9	8	8	8
48 - A Night of Intimacy	Intimate, Passionate, Vulnerable	9.2	9	9	9	10	9	9	7	7	6	7	8	7	10	9	9	8	8	8
49 - Morning Reflections	Intimate, Reflective, Vulnerable	8.5	8	8	9	9	8	8	7	6	7	5	7	7	9	8	9	8	8	8
50 - Awkward Longing	Intimate, Vulnerable, Awkward	8.5	8	8	9	9	8	8	7	6	7	6	7	7	9	8	9	8	8	8
51 - A Moment of Longing	Intimate, Reflective, Vulnerable	8.5	8	8	9	9	8	8	7	7	7	7	8	7	9	9	9	8	8	8
52 - Summer Confessions	Intimate, Vulnerable, Emotional, Sensual	8.7	9	8	9	9	8	8	7	6	7	6	7	7	9	9	9	8	8	8
53 - A Night of Longing	Intimate, Reflective, Melancholic	9.2	9	9	8	10	8	9	7	3	7	6	7	7	10	9	9	8	8	8
54 - Tangled Emotions	Intimate, Reflective, Anxious	8.5	8	8	9	9	8	8	7	7	7	7	8	7	9	9	9	8	8	8
55 - A Moment at the Memorial	Intimate, Reflective, Playful	8.5	8	8	9	9	8	8	7	6	6	7	8	7	9	8	9	8	8	8
56 - A Night of Laughter and Discomfort	Intimate, Reflective, Playful	8.7	9	8	8	9	9	8	7	8	7	8	8	7	9	8	9	8	8	8
57 - Bittersweet Farewell	Intimate, Bittersweet, Reflective	9.2	9	9	9	9	8	8	7	7	7	8	9	7	10	9	9	8	8	8
58 - Moments of Comfort	Emotional, Reflective, Intimate	8.5	8	8	8	9	8	8	7.5	3	8	4	6	7	9	7	9	8	8	8
59 - Embracing Memories	Reflective, Intimate, Emotional, Parental, Philosophical	9.2	10	9	9	9	9	9	7	3	7	7	9	7	10	9	9	8	8	8
60 - Echoes of the Past	Reflective, Emotional, Intimate, Bittersweet, Nostalgic	9.2	9	9	9	9	8	8	7	7	7	7	8	7	10	9	9	8	8	8

Summary of Scene Level Analysis

Here are some things that came out of the scene level analysis.
This is a summary of the strengths, weaknesses, and suggestions found in each scene. Some things might appear in both strengths and weaknesses based on the variety of your scenes.
For summary of each criteria click in the top row on the criteria.

Scene Strengths

Emotional depth
Intimate character interactions
Character development
Engaging dialogue
Effective portrayal of tension

Scene Weaknesses

Limited plot progression
Low external conflict
Minimal conflict
Slow pacing in certain sections
Lack of clarity in character motivations

Suggestions

Introduce more external conflicts to raise stakes and propel the plot forward.
Enhance plot progression through dynamic events or challenges that characters must navigate.
Maintain the strong emotional and intimate moments but ensure they tie into the overarching narrative.
Consider balancing the subtle character dynamics with clearer motivations to avoid confusion.
Pacing could be improved by interspersing moments of tension or conflict to keep the audience engaged.

World Building

Physical environment: The screenplay is set in a picturesque villa in Italy, characterized by a blend of old and new elements, including refurbished rooms, a fruit orchard, and serene gardens. The villa's intimate spaces, such as Elio's bedroom and the study, create a cozy yet sophisticated atmosphere, while the surrounding countryside and small town of Crema add to the idyllic setting.
Culture: Cultural elements are rich and diverse, with characters speaking multiple languages, including Italian and French. The screenplay reflects Italian customs, such as family gatherings, leisurely meals outdoors, and a deep appreciation for art and music. The characters engage in intellectual discussions, showcasing a cultured lifestyle that values education and the arts.
Society: The societal structure depicted in the screenplay is one of privilege and sophistication, with a close-knit family dynamic. Interactions among characters reveal a sense of hierarchy and formality, particularly in the presence of guests. The screenplay also hints at traditional values, especially regarding relationships and social expectations, particularly in the context of Elio and Oliver's romance.
Technology: Technological elements are minimal throughout the screenplay, emphasizing a nostalgic and timeless quality. The presence of simple tools, such as bicycles and a walkman, highlights a leisurely lifestyle, while the absence of modern gadgets allows for a focus on interpersonal relationships and emotional connections.
Characters influence: The unique physical environment and cultural backdrop shape the characters' experiences and actions by providing a setting that fosters intimacy and exploration of emotions. The villa's serene atmosphere allows Elio and Oliver to navigate their complex feelings, while the cultural elements encourage open communication and intellectual engagement. The societal expectations create tension for Elio as he grapples with his identity and desires.
Narrative contribution: The world elements contribute significantly to the narrative by establishing a rich context for the characters' relationships and experiences. The villa serves as a backdrop for pivotal moments in Elio and Oliver's romance, while the cultural and societal structures create obstacles and tensions that drive the plot forward. The setting enhances the emotional stakes of their relationship, making their connection feel both urgent and poignant.
Thematic depth contribution: The world elements contribute to the thematic depth of the screenplay by exploring themes of love, identity, and the passage of time. The serene and picturesque environment contrasts with the characters' internal struggles, highlighting the complexities of desire and societal expectations. The cultural richness of the setting allows for a nuanced exploration of intimacy, vulnerability, and the bittersweet nature of first love, ultimately enriching the emotional resonance of the story.

Voice Analysis
Summary:	The writer's voice is characterized by a subtle, nuanced exploration of complex emotions and interpersonal relationships. It prioritizes internal conflicts and unspoken tensions over overt drama. The style is intimate and introspective, employing rich descriptive language, evocative imagery, and naturalistic dialogue that reveals character through subtext and subtle gestures. A blend of intellectual discourse and playful banter further adds depth and complexity.
Voice Contribution	The writer's voice contributes to the script by creating a deeply immersive and emotionally resonant experience. The focus on internal struggles and unspoken desires enhances the themes of first love, self-discovery, and the complexities of human connection. The rich descriptive language and evocative imagery create a strong sense of place and time, enhancing the mood of longing, intimacy, and bittersweet nostalgia. The naturalistic dialogue feels authentic and avoids melodrama, allowing the audience to connect with the characters on a deeply personal level.
Best Representation Scene	3 - A Quiet Dinner Invitation
Best Scene Explanation	Scene 3 best encapsulates the author's voice because it perfectly balances rich descriptive language ('dimly lit Perlman villa') with subtle character interaction and unspoken emotions. The narrative description creates a strong sense of intimacy and the dialogue, though sparse, effectively conveys the awkwardness and underlying tension between Elio and Oliver, hinting at the developing relationship without resorting to overt exposition or melodrama. This subtle approach to emotional depth is a consistent hallmark of the writer's style throughout the screenplay.

Style and Similarities

The screenplay exhibits a consistent style characterized by intimate storytelling, emotional depth, and nuanced character interactions. There's a strong emphasis on exploring complex relationships, internal conflicts, and the subtle nuances of human emotions. Scenes often feature poetic dialogue and evocative visual elements, creating an emotionally resonant and introspective atmosphere. While some scenes incorporate intellectual discourse and witty banter, the prevailing tone leans towards emotional realism and vulnerability.

Style Similarities:

Writer	Explanation
Luca Guadagnino	Luca Guadagnino is overwhelmingly cited across numerous scene analyses (over 40 out of 60). The recurring references to his style – focusing on intimate character relationships, emotional depth, nuanced storytelling, visually stunning settings, and subtle emotional portrayals – strongly suggest his directorial/writing influence pervades the entire screenplay. The repeated comparison to his work on 'Call Me By Your Name' further reinforces this.
Call Me By Your Name (James Ivory/André Aciman)	The frequent comparisons to the writing style and themes of 'Call Me By Your Name,' both the film (James Ivory's screenplay) and the novel (André Aciman's work), are almost as pervasive as the Guadagnino references. The similarities consistently highlight shared themes of desire, intimacy, self-discovery, coming-of-age experiences, and the complexities of human relationships, pointing to a clear stylistic and thematic resonance with the source material.

Writer

Explanation

Luca Guadagnino

Luca Guadagnino is overwhelmingly cited across numerous scene analyses (over 40 out of 60). The recurring references to his style – focusing on intimate character relationships, emotional depth, nuanced storytelling, visually stunning settings, and subtle emotional portrayals – strongly suggest his directorial/writing influence pervades the entire screenplay. The repeated comparison to his work on 'Call Me By Your Name' further reinforces this.

Call Me By Your Name (James Ivory/André Aciman)

The frequent comparisons to the writing style and themes of 'Call Me By Your Name,' both the film (James Ivory's screenplay) and the novel (André Aciman's work), are almost as pervasive as the Guadagnino references. The similarities consistently highlight shared themes of desire, intimacy, self-discovery, coming-of-age experiences, and the complexities of human relationships, pointing to a clear stylistic and thematic resonance with the source material.

Other Similarities: While other screenwriters like Woody Allen, Richard Linklater, Noah Baumbach, Greta Gerwig, and Tom Stoppard are mentioned in a few analyses, their influence appears to be less pronounced and more localized to specific scenes. The screenplay seems to largely maintain a cohesive style heavily inspired by Guadagnino's work and the themes of 'Call Me By Your Name', creating a unified emotional and visual landscape across the scenes.

Top Correlations and patterns found in the scenes:

Pattern	Explanation
Dialogue and Emotional Impact: A Delicate Balance	Scenes with high Dialogue scores (8 or above) generally correlate with high Emotional Impact scores, except for scenes 5, 6, 9, 13, 20, 22, 24, 26, 30, 31, 34, 36, 37, 38, 42, 45, 46, 52, 53, 58 and 60. These exceptions suggest that while strong dialogue contributes to emotional impact, other factors (perhaps plot points or character actions) can create significant emotional resonance even with less impactful dialogue. Consider exploring ways to enhance the emotional punch of scenes with strong dialogue but lower emotional impact scores, possibly by focusing on character reactions or subtext.
Tone and Emotional Impact: The Power of Introspection	Scenes with predominantly 'Introspective' tones tend to show a wider range of Emotional Impact scores, including both high and low values. This suggests introspection doesn't guarantee emotional depth; its effectiveness depends on the narrative execution. Conversely, scenes with more action-oriented tones ('Tense,' 'Playful,' etc.) tend to have more consistently moderate Emotional Impact scores, suggesting a need for more depth in those types of scenes.
High Stakes and Move Story Forward: A Consistent Strength	Throughout the screenplay, scenes that effectively 'Move story forward' usually also have a decent 'High stakes' score. This suggests a strong narrative flow, but it might be beneficial to examine if raising the stakes in some scenes might correspondingly improve the narrative momentum.
Concept and Plot: A Strong Foundation	The screenplay consistently receives high scores for both 'Concept' and 'Plot,' indicating a strong underlying narrative structure. This is a significant strength and suggests that the core idea is compellingly presented.
Character Development Clusters	There are clusters of scenes with high 'Character Changes' scores (7 or above) concentrated in later parts of the screenplay, and these appear to correlate with scenes that employ 'Intimate' and 'Reflective' tones. Scenes towards the end of the screenplay might be particularly strong in character development, possibly due to increased intimacy and reflective moments that are allowing for stronger character arc. But early scenes might require more attention to character development.
Emotional Impact Dip in Mid-Story	There's a noticeable dip in 'Emotional Impact' scores in the middle sections (scenes 5-14, 20-26) of the screenplay. This could indicate a potential pacing issue, a lull in character development or conflict. Re-examine this section to ensure sufficient emotional engagement during this phase of the story.
Late-Story Surge in Intimacy and High Scores	The last third of the screenplay (scenes 40 onwards) features a significant increase in scenes utilizing 'Intimate' tones, frequently paired with high scores across multiple categories, notably Dialogue, Character, and overall grade. This suggests the screenplay's climax and resolution are particularly strong in terms of emotional resonance and character work. Consider if some of this intimacy and depth could be introduced earlier.
The Impact of 'Intimate' Tone	The 'Intimate' tone is heavily used across many scenes with high scores, particularly those near the end. This suggests that this tone is effective in raising emotional impact, dialogue, character development and overall grade. Yet this tone is not employed in scenes with lower emotional scores. Consider the purpose of this tonal choice in each instance, whether it reflects intended story impact.

Writer's Craft Overall Analysis

The screenplay demonstrates a strong ability to create emotionally resonant scenes with authentic character interactions, particularly focusing on intimacy, vulnerability, and internal conflicts. The writer shows skill in conveying emotions through subtle gestures, dialogue, and evocative descriptions. However, there's a recurring need to deepen character development beyond emotional portrayal and to explore more varied storytelling techniques beyond dialogue-driven scenes and character interactions.

Key Improvement Areas

Character Development

Many analyses praise the emotional depth but suggest further work on character motivations and backstories. While the writer excels at portraying surface emotions, a deeper exploration of internal conflicts, desires, and the characters' past will increase the scenes' impact and believability. Expanding beyond solely relying on subtle interactions to more overtly reveal internal struggles will also help.

Dialogue and Subtext

While the dialogue is often lauded as rich, witty, or intimate, feedback consistently points toward the need to improve its subtext and unspoken emotions. The writer should strive for more nuanced dialogue that conveys more information implicitly, rather than relying solely on explicit statements. This will create more engaging and layered scenes.

Storytelling Techniques Diversification

The writer heavily relies on dialogue and character interaction to convey the story. While effective, exploring visual storytelling, narrative structure beyond simple dialogue-driven scenes, and pacing variation are crucial for developing a more versatile screenwriting style.

Suggestions

Type	Suggestion	Rationale
Screenplay	Read and analyze 'Call Me By Your Name' (James Ivory), 'Before Sunrise' (Richard Linklater), 'Moonlight' (Barry Jenkins), 'Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless Mind', and 'Lost in Translation'.	These films offer diverse examples of emotional storytelling, nuanced dialogue, intimate character interactions, and different approaches to pacing and structure, addressing the key improvement areas identified. They showcase different methods of conveying internal struggles and desires, beyond simple dialogue exchanges.
Screenplay	Read 'The Social Network' (Aaron Sorkin) and study how to craft intellectually stimulating and fast-paced dialogue, to contrast with the more intimate scenes.	This will help diversify the writer's skills beyond focusing on emotional intimacy and incorporate other stylistic elements into their work.
Book	Read 'The Screenwriter's Bible' (David Trottier) and 'The Anatomy of Story' (John Truby) to understand screenplay structure, character arcs, and storytelling techniques.	These books provide foundational knowledge in screenwriting principles, helping to improve scene structure, pacing, and overall narrative coherence, which can enhance the impact of emotionally resonant scenes.
Video	Watch behind-the-scenes footage and interviews for films like 'Call Me By Your Name' and 'Moonlight', paying attention to directorial choices and actor performances.	This helps understand how emotions are conveyed visually and through performance beyond the page, and further supports the understanding of subtle gestures and emotional depth.

Additional Notes: The writer displays a strong grasp of emotional storytelling and creates compelling character interactions, particularly in scenes focused on intimacy and desire. However, consistent focus on strengthening character development beyond emotional expression, diversifying storytelling techniques beyond dialogue, and developing subtext in dialogue will elevate their work to a higher level of sophistication and impact. A deeper exploration of themes beyond desire and interpersonal relationships might also be beneficial in expanding the writer's range.

Here are different Tropes found in the screenplay

Trope	Trope Details	Trope Explanation
Forbidden Love
Summer Romance
Love Triangle
Coming of Age
The Usurper
Intellectual Connection
The Mentor
The Best Friend
The Secret
The Bittersweet Ending

Memorable lines in the script:

Scene Number	Line
36	ELIO: I worship you.
28	Elio: Because there is no one else I can say this to but you.
59	PERLMAN: We rip out so much of ourselves to be cured of things faster, that we go bankrupt by the age of thirty and have less to offer each time we start with someone new.
20	ELIO: All I had to do was find the courage to reach out and touch, she would have said yes.
14	Oliver: Does this make any sense to you? Not to me. Nor to your dad.

Some Loglines to consider:

A transformative summer romance unfolds between a seventeen-year-old and his father's charming guest, leaving an indelible mark on their lives.
In the sun-drenched Italian countryside, a shy teenager experiences a life-altering first love that challenges his perceptions of self and the world.
A passionate summer fling between a young man and his older guest leaves an enduring impact on both their lives, forever changing their perspectives on love and self-discovery.
Against the backdrop of 1980s Italy, the delicate dance of unspoken desires and fleeting passion unfolds between two young men, forever altering their paths.
A coming-of-age story set amidst the beauty of the Italian landscape explores the intoxicating power of first love, the uncertainty of youth, and the bittersweet ache of what might have been.
A young man's summer of self-discovery and first love is tested when he falls for his father's 25-year-old summer intern in 1980s Italy.
In a transformative summer in 1980s Italy, a 17-year-old boy navigates the complexities of his burgeoning sexuality and the profound impact of his relationship with his father's summer intern.
Elio, a precocious teenager, experiences the joys and heartaches of first love when he falls for Oliver, his father's academic intern, in the sun-drenched Italian countryside.
A coming-of-age drama about a young man's journey of self-discovery and the bittersweet nature of a summer romance that forever changes his life.
In 1980s Italy, a sensitive teenager's world is upended when he embarks on a secret relationship with his father's charming and enigmatic summer intern.
In the summer of 1983, a young boy discovers love and heartbreak during a passionate affair with a visiting scholar in Italy.
Set against the backdrop of a sun-soaked Italian villa, a teenage boy navigates the complexities of first love and self-discovery.
A summer romance blossoms between a 17-year-old and his father's research assistant, challenging their identities and desires.
As the summer heat intensifies, so does the emotional connection between a boy and a man, leading to a transformative experience.
In a tale of longing and loss, a young man reflects on a fleeting summer romance that forever alters his understanding of love.

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OverallRating: 8.5
Overview: The screenplay presents a compelling narrative that intricately explores the complexities of relationships, intimacy, and self-discovery. With an overall rating of 8.5, it showcases strong character development and engaging dialogue that resonates with the audience. While most scenes are well-crafted and impactful, a few moments lack significant emotional weight or plot progression, suggesting areas for improvement. Notable scenes highlight the screenplay's strengths in emotional resonance and character exploration, while certain scenes could benefit from heightened tension or clarity to enhance overall engagement.
Strengths:

Strong character development and emotional depth throughout the screenplay
Engaging dialogue that effectively conveys complex relationships
Consistent exploration of themes such as intimacy, vulnerability, and self-discovery
Well-crafted scenes that balance tension and tenderness

Areas of Improvement:

Some scenes lack significant plot progression or emotional impact
A few moments could benefit from heightened dramatic tension or clarity
Occasional reliance on subtlety may leave some audience members wanting more explicit emotional cues

Notable Examples

Scene 28 - explanation: This scene is beautifully crafted with intense emotions, deep character development, and significant plot progression. The poignant dialogue sets the stage for a crucial turning point in the story, showcasing the screenplay's strength in emotional resonance.
Scene 41 - explanation: This scene delves deep into Elio's inner turmoil and unrequited love for Oliver, making it a poignant and impactful moment. The emotional depth and vulnerability portrayed here exemplify the screenplay's ability to connect with the audience.

Improvement Examples

Scene 2 - explanation: While the scene establishes the setting and introduces key characters, it lacks significant plot progression or emotional impact. This could detract from the overall pacing and engagement of the screenplay, suggesting a need for more dynamic interactions or conflict.
Scene 43 - explanation: Although the scene blends art and sensuality effectively, some moments could have been more impactful. The emotional depth is present, but the execution may leave the audience craving a stronger connection to the characters' experiences.

PlotRating: 8.0
Overview: The screenplay presents a compelling narrative centered around the evolving relationship between Elio and Oliver, marked by emotional complexity and internal conflicts. Key scenes effectively advance the plot, showcasing significant character development and thematic exploration. While the overall plot progression is strong, certain scenes could benefit from enhanced dynamics and pacing to maintain engagement. The emotional stakes are consistently high, particularly in pivotal moments that shape the characters' journeys, making the screenplay a rich exploration of love and longing.
Strengths:

Strong character development and emotional depth throughout the screenplay
Effective exploration of complex relationships and internal conflicts
Consistent progression of the main plot with significant emotional stakes
Key scenes that advance the narrative and build tension effectively

Areas of Improvement:

Some scenes lack significant plot advancement and could benefit from more dynamic interactions
A few moments feel repetitive and could be streamlined for better pacing
Enhancing the stakes in certain scenes could heighten emotional engagement

Notable Examples

Scene 28 - explanation: This scene is notable for its emotional revelation and confession, significantly advancing the plot and setting the stage for further exploration of the characters' dynamics.
Scene 41 - explanation: This scene marks a pivotal moment as Elio grapples with his emotions and takes a bold step in reaching out to Oliver, advancing the character development and relationship dynamics.
Scene 57 - explanation: The emotional farewell between Elio and Oliver effectively builds tension and sets the stage for future developments, making it a crucial moment in the screenplay.

Improvement Examples

Scene 2 - explanation: This scene focuses more on establishing the setting and character relationships but lacks significant progression in the overall story, which could be improved by introducing more conflict or tension.
Scene 15 - explanation: While it deepens the emotional complexity of the characters, the subtle plot progression in this scene could be enhanced by incorporating more direct interactions that drive the narrative forward.
Scene 58 - explanation: The subtle plot progression in this scene, while adding layers to the narrative, could be strengthened by introducing more impactful events or revelations that directly affect the characters' journeys.

Conflict LevelRating: 6.5
Overview: The screenplay presents a rich tapestry of internal conflicts that drive character development and emotional depth, particularly in scenes involving Elio and Oliver's evolving relationship. While the internal struggles are compelling, the overall conflict levels are somewhat subdued due to a lack of external tensions. Key scenes, such as those highlighting emotional revelations, showcase the strength of the screenplay's conflict dynamics. However, several scenes with lower conflict ratings detract from the overall engagement, suggesting a need for more overt conflicts to elevate the stakes and maintain audience interest.
Strengths:

Strong internal conflicts that drive character development and emotional depth.
Subtle yet impactful tensions between characters that enhance relational dynamics.
High importance of conflict in key scenes, particularly those involving emotional revelations and character struggles.

Areas of Improvement:

Increase the external conflict to balance the internal struggles and create more dramatic tension.
Enhance the clarity of conflicts in scenes with lower ratings to maintain engagement.
Develop more overt conflicts in scenes that currently focus on introspection to elevate the stakes.

Notable Examples

Scene 12 - explanation: This scene is notable for its high emotional conflict as Elio grapples with his desire for connection with Oliver. The palpable tension drives the narrative forward, showcasing the strength of internal conflict. However, the scene could benefit from a clearer external conflict to heighten the stakes.
Scene 28 - explanation: The internal struggle of Elio to express his feelings creates a significant emotional conflict that propels the story. The scene effectively captures the essence of forbidden love, but it could be enhanced by introducing external pressures that challenge their relationship.

Improvement Examples

Scene 5 - explanation: This scene lacks significant conflict, focusing more on intellectual discussion. The absence of tension diminishes engagement and fails to advance the narrative effectively. Introducing a conflict, even if subtle, could enhance the scene's impact.
Scene 22 - explanation: The scene focuses on excitement rather than conflict, resulting in a low engagement level. To improve, the scene could incorporate elements of tension or disagreement among characters to create a more dynamic interaction.

OppositionRating: 7.00
Overview: The screenplay presents a compelling portrayal of opposition, characterized by a blend of internal struggles and external conflicts that drive character development and narrative tension. The strength of opposition is consistently strong, particularly in scenes where societal expectations clash with personal desires. However, there are moments where the opposition could be enhanced by introducing clearer stakes or more dynamic external conflicts. Overall, the screenplay successfully engages the audience through its nuanced depiction of opposition, though there is room for improvement in maintaining engagement during less intense scenes.
Strengths:

Strong internal and external conflicts that drive character development
Effective use of subtle opposition to create tension and complexity in relationships
Consistent portrayal of societal expectations and personal struggles throughout the screenplay

Areas of Improvement:

Enhance the clarity of opposition in scenes with mild tension to maintain engagement
Introduce more dynamic external conflicts to balance internal struggles
Vary the intensity of opposition to create a more nuanced emotional landscape

Notable Examples

Scene 3 - explanation: This scene showcases strong opposition as Elio and Oliver navigate their differing perspectives, creating a palpable tension that keeps the audience engaged. The effectiveness of this opposition lies in its ability to highlight character complexities, though it could benefit from clearer stakes.
Scene 29 - explanation: In this scene, the strong societal expectations clash with the characters' desires, creating significant tension. This opposition is notable for its emotional weight, effectively illustrating the characters' struggles, though it risks overwhelming the narrative if not balanced with lighter moments.

Improvement Examples

Scene 2 - explanation: The opposition in this scene is minimal, lacking significant obstacles or conflicts. This results in a less engaging moment that could benefit from introducing subtle tensions or character dilemmas to enhance the narrative flow.
Scene 31 - explanation: The opposition is primarily internal and emotional, which may dilute the impact of the scene. Introducing external conflicts or clearer stakes could enhance the tension and make the character's struggles more relatable and compelling.

High StakesRating: 6.5
Overview: The screenplay presents a nuanced exploration of high stakes, primarily through the emotional journeys of its characters. Key scenes effectively capture the tension and vulnerability inherent in Elio and Oliver's relationship, creating a compelling narrative arc. However, there are moments where the stakes could be intensified to maintain audience engagement and enhance the overall impact. By balancing emotional stakes with external conflicts and ensuring clarity in scenes with complex dynamics, the screenplay could achieve a more dynamic and resonant storytelling experience.
Strengths:

Strong emotional stakes that resonate with the characters' internal struggles and relationships.
Effective use of tension and vulnerability to heighten the stakes in key scenes.
Consistent development of stakes throughout the screenplay, leading to impactful moments.

Areas of Improvement:

Increase the intensity of stakes in scenes that currently have low ratings to maintain engagement.
Enhance the clarity of stakes in scenes with complex emotional dynamics to ensure audience connection.
Balance emotional stakes with external conflicts to create a more dynamic narrative.

Notable Examples

Scene 28 - explanation: This scene is notable for its high emotional stakes as Elio risks rejection by confessing his feelings to Oliver. The intensity of this moment significantly impacts the characters' relationship and sets the tone for subsequent interactions, showcasing the screenplay's strength in portraying vulnerability.
Scene 29 - explanation: The stakes are high due to the forbidden nature of Elio and Oliver's relationship, creating a palpable tension that drives the narrative forward. This scene effectively captures the internal conflicts and desires of the characters, highlighting the screenplay's ability to evoke deep emotional responses.

Improvement Examples

Scene 5 - explanation: This scene has low stakes, focusing primarily on intellectual discussion without significant emotional or dramatic tension. This lack of engagement may detract from the overall narrative flow, suggesting a need for more impactful interactions or conflicts to elevate the stakes.
Scene 30 - explanation: The stakes in this scene are relatively low, which may lead to a lack of engagement for the audience. By incorporating more emotional depth or conflict, the scene could better contribute to the overall narrative and character development.

Philosophical ConflictRating: 8.00
Overview: The screenplay presents a rich tapestry of philosophical conflicts that delve into themes of identity, desire, and societal expectations. Through the characters' internal struggles and interactions, the narrative explores the complexities of love and personal growth. Notable scenes, such as Elio's confrontation with societal norms in scene 10 and the discussion of love in scene 24, highlight the emotional stakes and philosophical depth of the story. However, certain scenes, like 35 and 27, could benefit from deeper exploration of their conflicts to enhance character motivations and thematic resonance. Overall, the screenplay successfully engages the audience with its exploration of philosophical themes, though there is room for further complexity and resolution in some areas.
Strengths:

Diverse range of philosophical conflicts that explore identity, desire, and societal expectations.
Strong character development through internal struggles and external pressures.
Effective use of dialogue and interactions to highlight philosophical themes.
Emotional depth that resonates with the audience, enhancing the impact of the conflicts.

Areas of Improvement:

Increase the complexity of certain conflicts to deepen character motivations.
Enhance the resolution of philosophical conflicts to provide clearer character growth.
Incorporate more diverse perspectives on the philosophical themes to enrich the narrative.

Notable Examples

Scene 10 - explanation: This scene is notable for its intense exploration of Elio's internal struggle with his attraction to Oliver against societal norms. The conflict is portrayed with emotional depth, showcasing Elio's vulnerability and the societal pressures he faces. This scene effectively encapsulates the overarching themes of love and identity, making it a pivotal moment in the screenplay.
Scene 24 - explanation: In this scene, the characters discuss love, courage, and personal growth, which are central themes throughout the screenplay. The philosophical conflict here is significant as it highlights the importance of relationships and self-discovery, reinforcing the emotional stakes for the characters and the audience.

Improvement Examples

Scene 35 - explanation: This scene presents a subtle philosophical conflict between Elio's restlessness and Oliver's focus on work. However, the conflict lacks depth and fails to fully explore the implications of their differing priorities. This weakens the overall impact of the philosophical themes, as it does not provide a strong enough contrast to highlight the characters' emotional journeys.
Scene 27 - explanation: In this scene, the philosophical conflict between Elio's aunt's perception of Anchise and Oliver's empathetic view is underdeveloped. The lack of depth in this conflict diminishes its potential to challenge Elio's beliefs about people and their intentions, resulting in a missed opportunity for character growth and thematic exploration.

DialogueRating: 8.3
Overview: The screenplay's dialogue quality is notably high, with an overall rating of 8.3. Key strengths include engaging and emotionally resonant exchanges that effectively capture character dynamics and intellectual depth. The use of minimal dialogue in certain scenes enhances tension and unspoken emotions, contributing to the authenticity of character interactions. Notable examples, such as scenes 5, 28, and 59, showcase the screenplay's ability to convey complex emotions and relationships through poignant dialogue. However, there are areas for improvement, particularly in enhancing emotional resonance and incorporating varied dialogue styles. Scenes 2 and 25 illustrate moments where additional depth could significantly enhance the audience's connection to the characters and their experiences.
Strengths:

Engaging and emotionally resonant dialogue that captures character dynamics.
Intellectual depth and authenticity in conversations, reflecting the characters' personalities.
Effective use of minimal dialogue to convey tension and unspoken emotions.
Poignant and heartfelt exchanges that enhance character development and thematic exploration.

Areas of Improvement:

Enhance emotional resonance in certain scenes with more depth in dialogue.
Incorporate more varied dialogue styles to reflect different character backgrounds and emotions.
Address moments of minimal dialogue that may benefit from additional context or interaction.

Notable Examples

Scene 5 - explanation: The dialogue is witty, informative, and engaging, reflecting the characters' intellectual curiosity and personalities, which captivates the audience.
Scene 28 - explanation: The dialogue is poignant, intense, and emotionally charged, effectively conveying the inner turmoil and longing of the characters, creating a powerful moment.
Scene 59 - explanation: The dialogue is poignant and profound, capturing the essence of the characters' emotions and relationships, showcasing the father's wisdom and the son's introspection.

Improvement Examples

Scene 2 - explanation: The minimal dialogue serves its purpose but lacks depth and emotional resonance, which could enhance the initial interactions between Elio and Oliver.
Scene 25 - explanation: The minimal dialogue in this scene, while impactful, could benefit from additional context or exchanges to deepen the emotional engagement.

FormattingRating: 8.00
Overview: The screenplay exhibits a solid understanding of formatting conventions, with an overall rating of 8.00. Each scene generally adheres to expected standards, featuring clear scene headings, character names, and dialogue formatting that facilitate readability. Notable strengths include effective visual descriptions that enhance the atmosphere and emotional depth of the narrative. However, there are areas for improvement, particularly in varying scene formatting to emphasize key moments and ensuring consistent detail in character actions. Specific scenes, such as 7 and 10, exemplify the screenplay's strengths, while others, like 14 and 38, highlight opportunities for further enhancement.
Strengths:

Consistent adherence to standard screenplay formatting conventions
Clear scene headings and character names enhance readability
Effective use of dialogue formatting that supports character interactions
Visual descriptions that enhance the atmosphere and emotional impact of scenes

Areas of Improvement:

Consider varying scene formatting to emphasize key moments or shifts in tone
Enhance visual descriptions in certain scenes to further engage the reader
Ensure that all scenes maintain a consistent level of detail in character actions

Notable Examples

Scene 7 - explanation: This scene stands out for its clear descriptions and character actions, which enhance the reader's understanding of the narrative. The formatting effectively conveys the emotional weight of the moment.
Scene 10 - explanation: Well-formatted with clear descriptions and dialogue cues, this scene exemplifies the screenplay's strengths in readability and visual storytelling.
Scene 22 - explanation: The formatting in this scene is particularly effective, with distinct locations and actions described clearly, allowing for easy visualization and engagement.

Improvement Examples

Scene 14 - explanation: While the scene is formatted effectively, it could benefit from more dynamic transitions and visual elements to enhance the emotional impact and maintain reader engagement.
Scene 38 - explanation: This scene, although following standard formatting, lacks some depth in character actions and emotional cues, which could improve the overall impact and clarity of the scene.

StructureRating: 8.00
Overview: The screenplay demonstrates a solid structural foundation, characterized by consistent pacing, clear character arcs, and effective use of dramatic tension. Most scenes adhere to genre expectations, providing a coherent narrative flow. Notable scenes effectively build emotional depth and tension, contributing to key plot developments. However, there are opportunities for improvement, particularly in enhancing emotional stakes and refining dialogue in certain scenes. Overall, the screenplay is well-structured, engaging, and effectively conveys its themes.
Strengths:

Consistent pacing and rhythm throughout the screenplay
Clear character development and emotional arcs
Effective use of setup, conflict, and resolution in scenes
Strong climactic moments that enhance narrative tension
Well-defined transitions between locations and character interactions

Areas of Improvement:

Enhance the emotional stakes in certain scenes to deepen audience engagement
Introduce more varied pacing to maintain interest and tension
Consider refining dialogue in some scenes for greater impact
Strengthen character motivations in specific interactions to clarify their arcs

Notable Examples

Scene 7 - explanation: This scene stands out due to its effective buildup of tension and emotional depth, showcasing the characters' struggles and desires. The pacing and structure contribute significantly to the overall narrative flow, making it a pivotal moment in the screenplay.
Scene 10 - explanation: This scene is notable for its natural progression of events and character interactions, which effectively build tension and emotional depth. It serves as a key turning point in the narrative, enhancing the audience's connection to the characters.
Scene 22 - explanation: The recovery of the statue from the lake is a climactic moment that encapsulates the screenplay's themes of discovery and resolution. The structure of this scene builds excitement and serves as a critical plot development.

Improvement Examples

Scene 14 - explanation: While the scene maintains a natural flow of conversation, it lacks sufficient emotional stakes, which diminishes its impact on the overall narrative. Strengthening the character motivations and emotional dynamics could enhance its effectiveness.
Scene 19 - explanation: This scene follows the expected structure but feels somewhat formulaic. Introducing more unique elements or unexpected developments could elevate its engagement and contribute to a more dynamic narrative.

Executive Summary

The screenplay effectively develops its characters, particularly Elio and Oliver, showcasing their emotional depth and complex relationships. However, there are opportunities to enhance the relatability and consistency of supporting characters, which could deepen the audience's connection to the narrative.

Overview and Scorecard

Character development in the screenplay is rich and multi-layered, particularly for Elio and Oliver, whose arcs reflect significant emotional growth and transformation. The depth of their relationship is compelling, yet some supporting characters, like Marzia and Annella, could benefit from more nuanced development to enhance their roles in the story.

Grade: 7.6
CharacterComplexity: 9

Elio and Oliver are well-rounded characters with clear motivations and emotional struggles, making them relatable and engaging.

CharacterArcs: 8

Both Elio and Oliver experience significant growth, but some supporting characters lack clear arcs, which could enhance the overall narrative.

CharacterRelatability: 8

Elio's and Oliver's struggles with love and identity resonate well with audiences, though some secondary characters feel less relatable.

CharacterConsistency: 7

Most characters remain true to their established traits, but occasional inconsistencies in supporting characters' actions could be addressed.

CharacterDiversity: 7

The screenplay features a diverse cast, but further exploration of their backgrounds and perspectives could enrich the narrative.

CharacterDialogue: 9

Dialogue effectively reveals character depth and advances their arcs, particularly in intimate moments between Elio and Oliver.

AntagonistDevelopment: 5

The screenplay lacks a clear antagonist, which could be addressed to create more tension and conflict in the narrative.

Detailed Analysis Positive Aspects:

Elio's emotional journey from jealousy to acceptance is compelling, particularly in scenes where he confronts his feelings for Oliver, showcasing vulnerability and growth. High
Oliver's transformation from a distant figure to someone who embraces his emotions adds depth to the narrative, particularly in his interactions with Elio. High

Negative Aspects:

Marzia's character could be developed further to enhance her emotional impact and connection to Elio, as her role feels somewhat overshadowed by the central relationship. Medium
Annella's arc could be deepened to reflect her understanding of Elio's relationship with Oliver, providing a more nuanced perspective on parental support. Medium

Suggestions for Improvement

Suggestion: High Consider expanding Marzia's character arc to explore her feelings and desires more deeply, allowing her to serve as a more significant emotional counterpoint to Elio.

Scenes: 30, 40

Suggestion: Medium Explore Annella's perspective on Elio's relationship with Oliver to create a more supportive and understanding maternal figure.

Scenes: 20, 80

Executive Summary

The screenplay effectively establishes a compelling premise centered around the complex emotional relationship between Elio and Oliver, set against the backdrop of a picturesque Italian summer. However, there are opportunities to enhance clarity and engagement by refining character motivations and deepening thematic exploration.

Overview and Scorecard

The premise of 'Call Me by Your Name' is original and poignant, exploring themes of love, identity, and the bittersweet nature of first love. The clarity of the premise is strong, but certain elements could be streamlined to enhance audience engagement. The screenplay's potential to captivate viewers lies in its rich character arcs and emotional depth, though some scenes could benefit from tighter focus on the central themes.

Grade: 8.7
PremiseOriginality: 9

The premise presents a fresh perspective on a coming-of-age love story, exploring the nuances of desire and emotional connection in a unique setting.

PremiseClarity: 8

The premise is generally clear, but certain character motivations and emotional transitions could be more explicitly defined to enhance understanding.

PremiseExecution: 9

The screenplay effectively delivers on its premise, with well-developed character arcs and emotional moments that resonate throughout the narrative.

PremiseDepth: 9

The screenplay delves into complex themes of love, loss, and self-discovery, offering profound insights that elevate the narrative beyond surface-level storytelling.

HookStrength: 8

The initial hook is strong, drawing the audience into the emotional landscape of the characters, though some scenes could be more tightly woven to maintain momentum.

EngagementPotential: 9

The premise has high potential to engage audiences through its relatable themes and rich character dynamics, promising an emotionally charged narrative.

ContributionToNarrative: 9

The premise significantly contributes to the narrative, influencing character motivations and driving the plot forward in meaningful ways.

Detailed Analysis Positive Aspects:

The emotional complexity of Elio and Oliver's relationship is a significant strength, setting up a narrative filled with tension and longing. High

Negative Aspects:

Some character motivations, particularly regarding Elio's interactions with Marzia and Oliver, could be clarified to enhance audience understanding of their emotional stakes. Medium

Suggestions for Improvement

Suggestion: High Consider refining the dialogue and interactions between Elio and Marzia to better highlight Elio's internal conflict and emotional journey.

Scenes:

Executive Summary

The screenplay 'Call Me by Your Name' effectively captures the emotional complexity of first love through its well-structured narrative and character arcs. The pacing is generally strong, allowing for moments of tension and release that engage the audience. However, there are areas where the plot could benefit from clearer conflict escalation and resolution, particularly in the latter half, to enhance dramatic tension and thematic depth.

Overview and Scorecard

Overall, the screenplay presents a coherent and engaging story that unfolds with a mix of introspection and emotional resonance. The character development is compelling, particularly in Elio's journey of self-discovery and acceptance of his feelings for Oliver. The narrative structure adheres to a traditional arc, but some scenes could be refined to maintain momentum and clarity.

Grade: 8.0
NarrativeStructure: 8

The screenplay follows a clear narrative structure, effectively introducing characters and conflicts while building towards a climax. However, some transitions between scenes could be smoother to enhance flow.

PlotClarity: 8

The plot is generally clear, but certain moments of internal conflict could be more explicitly articulated to avoid confusion about character motivations.

PlotComplexity: 7

While the plot weaves together themes of love, identity, and cultural differences, it could benefit from deeper exploration of secondary characters to enrich the narrative.

Pacing: 8

The pacing is mostly effective, balancing moments of tension with introspective scenes. However, some slower scenes could be tightened to maintain engagement.

ConflictAndStakes: 7

The screenplay establishes conflict well, but the stakes could be heightened in the latter half to create a more compelling climax and resolution.

ResolutionSatisfaction: 8

The resolution is emotionally satisfying, providing closure to Elio's journey. However, a more explicit acknowledgment of the consequences of their relationship could enhance its impact.

ThemeIntegration: 9

Themes of love, loss, and self-discovery are seamlessly integrated into the narrative, enriching the emotional depth of the story.

OriginalityOfPlot: 8

The plot presents a unique exploration of first love and identity, offering fresh perspectives on familiar themes.

CharacterDevelopmentWithinPlot: 9

Character development is intricately tied to the plot, with Elio's growth being particularly well-executed, reflecting the complexities of love and desire.

Detailed Analysis Positive Aspects:

The emotional depth of Elio's character arc is compelling, showcasing his journey from confusion to acceptance of his feelings for Oliver. High

Negative Aspects:

Some scenes, particularly in the latter half, could benefit from clearer conflict escalation to maintain dramatic tension. Medium

Suggestions for Improvement

Suggestion: High Consider tightening scenes that slow down the pacing to maintain engagement, particularly those that delve into secondary character dynamics.

Executive Summary

The screenplay 'Call Me by Your Name' effectively conveys its themes of love, longing, and the complexities of human relationships through rich character development and evocative imagery. The emotional depth is palpable, particularly in the exploration of Elio's internal struggles and his relationship with Oliver. However, there are opportunities to refine the clarity of certain themes and enhance their integration into the narrative, particularly regarding the implications of societal expectations and the passage of time.

Overview and Scorecard

Overall, the screenplay explores and communicates its themes with a high degree of relevance and emotional resonance. The themes of first love, identity, and the bittersweet nature of fleeting moments are clearly articulated through the characters' interactions and personal growth. The screenplay's ability to evoke nostalgia and introspection is commendable, though some thematic elements could benefit from more explicit connections to the characters' arcs and the overarching narrative.

Grade: 8.4
ThemeClarity: 8

The themes are generally clear and well-integrated, though some nuances could be more explicitly articulated to enhance understanding.

MessageImpact: 9

The emotional impact of the messages is profound, resonating deeply with audiences and provoking reflection on love and loss.

Relevance: 9

The themes are highly relevant to contemporary discussions about identity, love, and the complexities of relationships, making them timeless.

IntegrationWithPlot: 8

While the themes are integrated into the plot, there are moments where deeper connections could enhance the narrative's thematic richness.

OriginalityOfTheme: 8

The themes, while familiar, are presented with a unique perspective that adds depth and originality to the exploration of first love.

Detailed Analysis Positive Aspects:

The exploration of first love and the intensity of Elio's emotions are beautifully depicted, contributing significantly to the screenplay's emotional depth. High

Negative Aspects:

Some themes, such as the societal implications of their relationship and the passage of time, could be more explicitly connected to the characters' arcs to enhance thematic clarity. Medium

Suggestions for Improvement

Suggestion: High Consider incorporating more dialogue or scenes that explicitly address the societal expectations surrounding Elio and Oliver's relationship, which could deepen the thematic exploration of love in a constrained context.

Scenes:

Executive Summary

The screenplay 'Call Me by Your Name' excels in its evocative visual imagery, effectively capturing the emotional nuances of its characters and their relationships. The vivid descriptions of settings and interactions create a rich tapestry that immerses the audience in the story's emotional landscape. However, there are opportunities to enhance the creativity and dynamism of the visual storytelling to further elevate the screenplay's impact.

Overview and Scorecard

Overall, the screenplay's visual imagery is strong, with many scenes that vividly convey the characters' emotions and the beauty of their surroundings. The use of natural settings and intimate moments adds depth to the narrative. However, some scenes could benefit from more imaginative visual elements and varied imagery to maintain engagement and enhance the emotional stakes.

Grade: 7.8
Vividness: 9

The screenplay features clear and impactful visual descriptions, allowing readers to easily visualize the settings and character interactions.

Creativity: 7

While the visual elements are effective, there is room for more innovative approaches to enhance the storytelling.

Consistency: 8

The visual style is generally consistent throughout the screenplay, maintaining a cohesive tone.

Originality: 7

The screenplay presents familiar themes and visuals, but there are opportunities to introduce more unique perspectives.

Immersiveness: 8

The visual descriptions effectively draw readers into the world of the story, creating a sense of presence.

EmotionalImpact: 9

The visual imagery significantly enhances the emotional tone, making the audience feel the characters' struggles and desires.

SymbolismMotifs: 7

While some visual symbols are present, further development of motifs could add layers of meaning to the narrative.

Dynamism: 6

The visual imagery could benefit from more variety and energy to maintain interest and momentum throughout the screenplay.

IntegrationWithNarrative: 9

The visual elements are well-integrated with the narrative, enhancing character arcs and plot development.

PracticalityForProduction: 8

The visual demands of the screenplay are generally feasible for production, with a focus on natural settings and character interactions.

Detailed Analysis Positive Aspects:

The vivid descriptions of the Perlman villa and its surroundings create a strong sense of place, enhancing the emotional resonance of the characters' experiences. Scenes such as Elio's introspective moments by the river and the lively breakfast gatherings effectively capture the beauty of summer in Italy. High (Scenes: 1, 4, 8)

Negative Aspects:

Some scenes lack imaginative visual elements that could elevate the storytelling. For instance, the interactions between Elio and Oliver could benefit from more dynamic visual contrasts to reflect their emotional tension and connection. Medium (Scenes: 10, 15, 20)

Suggestions for Improvement

Suggestion: High Incorporate more varied visual elements, such as changes in lighting, weather, or symbolic objects, to enhance the emotional stakes and dynamism of the scenes. For example, using the changing light of dusk to symbolize the transition in Elio and Oliver's relationship could add depth.

Scenes: 5, 12, 18

Executive Summary

The screenplay 'Call Me by Your Name' effectively elicits deep emotional responses through its nuanced character arcs and rich thematic exploration of love, longing, and self-discovery. However, there are opportunities to enhance emotional depth by further developing the supporting characters and their relationships with Elio and Oliver.

Overview and Scorecard

Overall, the screenplay excels in creating an emotionally resonant narrative that captures the complexities of first love and the bittersweet nature of fleeting connections. The characters, particularly Elio and Oliver, are well-developed and relatable, allowing the audience to invest deeply in their emotional journeys. However, some scenes could benefit from additional emotional layering to amplify the impact of key moments.

Grade: 8.8
EmotionalDepth: 9

The screenplay evokes complex emotions, particularly through Elio's internal struggles and his evolving relationship with Oliver.

CharacterRelatability: 9

Elio and Oliver are relatable characters whose experiences resonate with the audience, particularly in their exploration of love and identity.

EmotionalVariety: 8

The screenplay effectively conveys a range of emotions, from joy and longing to jealousy and sadness, though some moments could be more varied.

EmotionalConsistency: 9

The emotional tone is consistently maintained throughout the screenplay, effectively navigating shifts in mood.

ImpactOnAudience: 9

The emotional experience lingers with the audience, particularly through the poignant conclusion of Elio's journey.

EmotionalPacing: 8

The pacing builds emotional tension well, though some scenes could benefit from a more deliberate tempo to enhance impact.

EmotionalComplexity: 9

The screenplay portrays deep emotional experiences, particularly in Elio's character arc, showcasing his growth and self-awareness.

EmpathyAndIdentification: 9

The audience can easily empathize with Elio's struggles, making his journey feel personal and relatable.

TransformationalEmotionalArcs: 9

Both Elio and Oliver undergo significant emotional growth, culminating in a powerful resolution.

EmotionalAuthenticity: 9

The emotions portrayed are authentic and believable, enhancing the audience's connection to the characters.

UseOfConflictInEmotionalDevelopment: 8

Conflict is effectively used to drive emotional development, though some supporting characters could be more fleshed out to enhance this aspect.

ResolutionOfEmotionalThemes: 9

The screenplay provides a satisfying resolution to its emotional themes, particularly regarding love and loss.

UniversalityOfEmotionalAppeal: 9

The themes of love and self-discovery resonate universally, appealing to a broad audience.

Detailed Analysis Positive Aspects:

The emotional depth of Elio's character arc is a standout strength, particularly in scenes where he grapples with his feelings for Oliver and the complexities of first love. This is exemplified in the scene where Elio reflects on his insecurities and desires, showcasing his vulnerability. High (Scenes: 8, 12, 15)

Negative Aspects:

While Elio and Oliver are well-developed, some supporting characters, like Marzia and Chiara, could benefit from deeper emotional arcs to enhance the overall narrative. Their relationships with Elio could be explored further to add layers to the emotional landscape. Medium (Scenes: 4, 10, 14)

Suggestions for Improvement

Suggestion: High Consider expanding the emotional arcs of supporting characters like Marzia and Chiara to create a richer emotional tapestry. This could involve adding scenes that explore their feelings and perspectives on love and loss, which would deepen the audience's emotional engagement.

Scenes: 4, 10, 14

Executive Summary

The screenplay effectively presents conflict and stakes through Elio's internal struggles and his evolving relationship with Oliver. However, there are opportunities to enhance narrative tension by deepening the emotional stakes and integrating more external conflicts that challenge the characters' desires.

Overview and Scorecard

Overall, the screenplay's conflict and stakes are primarily driven by Elio's feelings for Oliver and the complexities of first love. The internal conflicts are well-defined, but the external stakes could be elevated to create a more compelling narrative. The emotional stakes are personal and relatable, yet the screenplay could benefit from additional layers of conflict that challenge the characters more directly.

Grade: 7.4
ConflictClarity: 8

The central conflict of Elio's feelings for Oliver is clear and compelling, with well-defined emotional stakes.

StakesSignificance: 7

The stakes are significant to Elio's personal growth, but could be enhanced by introducing more external pressures.

ConflictIntegration: 8

The conflict is well-integrated into the narrative, influencing character development and plot progression.

StakesEscalation: 6

While there are moments of tension, the escalation of stakes could be more pronounced to maintain audience engagement.

ResolutionSatisfaction: 8

The resolution is satisfying, reflecting Elio's growth and acceptance of his feelings, though it leaves room for further exploration.

Detailed Analysis Positive Aspects:

The screenplay excels in portraying Elio's internal conflict and emotional depth, particularly in scenes where he grapples with jealousy and longing for Oliver. High

Negative Aspects:

The screenplay could benefit from introducing more external conflicts that challenge Elio and Oliver's relationship, such as societal pressures or family expectations. Medium

Suggestions for Improvement

Suggestion: High Introduce external conflicts that challenge Elio and Oliver's relationship, such as societal expectations or family dynamics that create tension.

Suggestion: Medium Enhance the escalation of stakes by incorporating moments that force Elio to confront his feelings more directly, such as a pivotal event that threatens their relationship.

Executive Summary

The screenplay 'Call Me by Your Name' showcases a profound exploration of love and identity through its unique characters and evocative setting. Its originality lies in the nuanced portrayal of a summer romance that transcends conventional storytelling, while its creativity is evident in the rich emotional depth and sensory details that enhance the narrative.

Overview and Scorecard

Overall, the screenplay excels in originality and creativity, particularly in its character development and thematic exploration. The intimate and reflective nature of the story, combined with the lush Italian backdrop, creates a compelling atmosphere that resonates with audiences. However, there are opportunities to further innovate in narrative structure and thematic depth, particularly in addressing the complexities of love and identity in a more multifaceted manner.

Grade: 8.6
Originality: 9

The screenplay introduces a fresh perspective on love and desire, particularly in the context of a same-sex relationship during a time when such narratives were less common.

Creativity: 9

The narrative employs rich sensory details and emotional depth, creating a vivid portrayal of summer romance that feels both intimate and universal.

CharacterInnovation: 9

Elio and Oliver are distinct characters with complex emotional arcs, showcasing a blend of vulnerability and strength that is rarely seen in romantic narratives.

PlotInnovation: 8

While the plot follows a traditional romantic arc, the depth of character interactions and emotional stakes adds layers of complexity that elevate the narrative.

ThematicDepth: 9

The screenplay explores themes of love, identity, and the bittersweet nature of fleeting moments, provoking thought and emotional resonance.

NarrativeInnovation: 8

The storytelling is linear but employs rich imagery and introspective moments that enhance the emotional impact, though there is potential for more non-linear elements.

GenreInnovation: 8

The screenplay contributes to the romance genre by focusing on a same-sex relationship with depth and sensitivity, challenging traditional portrayals.

AudienceEngagement: 8

The screenplay engages audiences through its emotional authenticity and relatable themes, though it could explore more interactive elements.

InnovationInRepresentation: 9

The portrayal of a same-sex romance in a nuanced and respectful manner enriches the representation of LGBTQ+ narratives in cinema.

Detailed Analysis Positive Aspects:

The screenplay's strength lies in its rich character development, particularly in Elio's journey of self-discovery and emotional growth. The nuanced portrayal of his feelings for Oliver, combined with the lush Italian setting, creates a deeply immersive experience. (Scenes: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5)

Negative Aspects:

While the screenplay is strong overall, there are moments where the pacing could be improved to maintain engagement. Some scenes feel drawn out, which may detract from the emotional impact. Tightening these moments could enhance the overall flow. (Scenes: 6, 7, 8, 9)

Suggestions for Improvement

Suggestion: Consider incorporating more non-linear storytelling elements or flashbacks to deepen the exploration of Elio's memories and emotions. This could enhance the thematic depth and provide a richer context for the characters' experiences. Works like 'Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless Mind' could serve as inspiration for innovative narrative techniques.

Scenes: 10, 11, 12

Call me by your name

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Engine: Claude

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Screenplay Story Analysis

Elio - Score: 93/100

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Foundational Definition 9/10

Complexity And Depth 8/10

Arc Or Purposeful Stasis 9/10

Dialogue And Voice 8/10

Behavior And Choices 9/10

Relationship Dynamics 10/10

Scene Impact 10/10

Role Fulfillment 10/10

Thematic Plot Integration 10/10

Emotional Resonance 10/10

Score: 9

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