Jake and Angus

A socially awkward autistic man's fantastical imaginary friend, the legendary strongman Angus MacAskill, helps him navigate the complexities of modern dating and family.

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Unique Selling Point

The screenplay's unique selling proposition lies in its dual narrative structure that juxtaposes the extraordinary life of Angus MacAskill with the relatable, modern-day challenges faced by Jake, a neurodivergent character. This combination not only provides historical intrigue but also fosters a deeper understanding of contemporary issues surrounding identity and acceptance, making it compelling for audiences interested in character-driven stories that challenge societal norms.

AI Verdict & Suggestions

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Gemini
 Consider
Claude
 Consider
GPT4
 Recommend
Story Facts

Genres: Drama, Comedy, Romance, Romantic Comedy, Historical, Fantasy, Family, Slice of Life, Character Study

Setting: Mid-nineteenth century and modern day (2025), Various locations including a circus, a banquet hall, Trader Joe's grocery store, and a hiking trail in Griffith Park

Themes: Self-Acceptance and Embracing Neurodiversity, The Power of Human Connection and Belonging, Finding Love and Acceptance in Unexpected Places, Family Dynamics and the Pressure to Conform

Conflict & Stakes: Jake's struggle with social anxiety and romantic relationships, compounded by family expectations and his own insecurities.

Mood: Light-hearted with moments of introspection and humor.

Standout Features:

  • Unique Hook: The juxtaposition of a historical figure, Angus MacAskill, with modern-day social anxieties creates a unique narrative dynamic.
  • Character Development: Jake's journey of self-discovery and acceptance, supported by his interactions with Angus and Maisley.
  • Humor and Heart: The screenplay balances comedic moments with heartfelt interactions, making it relatable and engaging.

Comparable Scripts: The Greatest Showman, Big Fish, Atypical, The Elephant Man, Wonder, The Perks of Being a Wallflower, The Big Sick, Little Miss Sunshine, About Time

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