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A struggling single mother, Karen, and her teenage daughter, Simone, navigate the challenges of life and social media influence, leading to a journey of personal growth and the restoration of their relationship.

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Unique Selling Point

This heartfelt and humorous script stands out with its fresh perspectives on family dynamics, self-discovery, and the impact of social media. The unique journey of Karen, a harried working mom, and her daughter Simone, explores the challenges and rewards of modern motherhood, while also tackling important themes like cyberbullying and self-acceptance. With authentic characters, witty dialogue, and a keen eye for the absurdities of daily life, this script offers a refreshing and engaging story that will resonate with audiences of all ages.

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Story Facts

Genres: Drama, Comedy, Family, Teen, YouTube, Social Issues, Action

Setting: Contemporary, Various locations including Cleveland, Ohio, a hospital, a school, a nursing home, and a bar

Themes: Personal Growth and Transformation, The Power of Social Media, The Importance of Family, The Dangers of Comparison, The Importance of Resilience

Conflict & Stakes: The primary conflicts revolve around Karen's struggle to balance her newfound online fame with her personal life, her relationship with her daughter Simone, and her rivalry with influencer Penny. The stakes include Karen's reputation, her family dynamics, and her personal growth.

Mood: Humorous, heartfelt, and introspective

Standout Features:

  • Exploration of Online Fame: The screenplay delves into the impact of social media on personal lives and relationships.
  • Inter-generational Dynamics: The dynamic between Karen, Simone, and Shirley adds depth and emotional resonance to the story.
  • Redemption Arc: Karen's journey of self-discovery and redemption offers a compelling narrative arc.
  • Humorous Moments: The screenplay balances humor with heartfelt moments, creating a relatable and engaging story.

Comparable Scripts: Lady Bird, The Office, The Mindy Project, Fleabag, PEN15, Girls, The Big Sick, Unbelievable, The End of the F***ing World, Russian Doll

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